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Everything is very good….except the use of western name. Author, if u don’t know the gender of a first name, don’t know how to use first name and surname, and even mistaken one character for another, just don’t use them and keep to eastern names. In first chap i thought it was a mistake but I am at 120 chap and it is the same. There is at least 1 mistake by chap. It seems to me u don’t care about ur story.
Overall a good read would love to read more of this. I hope that there are frequent updates. The chapters being locked after chapter 5 was a surprise but I feel like it is worth it.
Everything is very good….except the use of western name. Author, if u don’t know the gender of a first name, don’t know how to use first name and surname, and even mistaken one character for another, just don’t use them and keep to eastern names. In first chap i thought it was a mistake but I am at 120 chap and it is the same. There is at least 1 mistake by chap. It seems to me u don’t care about ur story.
Overall a good read would love to read more of this. I hope that there are frequent updates. The chapters being locked after chapter 5 was a surprise but I feel like it is worth it.
real great book Ilove the character design, the plot and the world background