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Chapter 17: YELLOW SUBMARINE

Meanwhile on the separatist mothership!

Nute stood before a hologram of DARTH SIDIOUS.

Nute: "The invasion is on schedule, My Lord."

DARTH SIDIOUS: "Good. I have the Senate bogged down in procedures. By the time this incident comes up for a vote, they will have no choice but to accept your control of the system."

Nute: "The Queen has great faith the Senate will side with her."

DARTH SIDIOUS: "Queen Amidala is young and naive. You will find controlling her will not be difficult. You have done well, Viceroy."

Nute: "Thank you, My Lord."

After these words, Darth Sidious faded away.

Rune: "You didn't tell him about the missing Jedi?"

Nute: "No need to report that to him, until we have something to report."

Back to the yellow submarine, the yellow submarine

Yellow submarine. We all live in a yellow submarine. Yellow submarine, yellow submarine. I'm sorry pun intended.

Inside the submarine, sparks were flying, and water was leaking into the cabin. Slowly the sound of the power drive drops.

Obi-Wan: ".....we're losing power."

Acedia: "Don't worry mate, what did yall say... the force will guide us. "

Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon gave him an angry stare, while Jar Jar was absolutely panicking. Obi-Wan then started working on the ship to return the power.

Qui-Gon can't take Jar Jars' antics anymore and said: "Stay calm. We're not in trouble yet."

Jar Jar: "What yet? Monstairs out dare! Leak'n in here, all'n sink'n, and

nooooo power! You nutsen! WHEN YOUSA TINK WESAIN TROUBLE?!!!?"

Obi-Wan the savage then said: "Power's back."

The lights flickered on, revealing an ugly giant FISH (see Capital letters so it's really big) right in front of them.

Jar Jar: "Monstairs back!"

The large COLO CLAW FISH is surprised and rears back. The sub turned around and sped away.

Jar Jar: "Wesa in trouble now??"

Qui-Gon: "Relax."

Qui-Gon put his hand on Jar Jar's shoulder. Jar Jar relaxed and got unconscious.

Acedia: "OMG, you could have done that all the time?"

Obi-Wan: "You overdid it master and btw white hair guy thank you for saving my life back there. Let's become friends. What's your name?"

Acedia: "Ahh my name is Acedia. Nice to meet yo--

Before Acedia couldn't end his sentence, the ugly FISH leaped after the fleeing sub as it shot out of the tunnel and into the waiting jaws of the SANDO AQUA MONSTER.

Obi-Wan: "This is not good!"

Jar Jar regains consciousness.

Jar Jar : "Wesa dead yet?? Oie Boie!"

Jar Jar's eyes bulge, and he faints again (lol). The sub narrowly avoided the deadly teeth of the AQUA MONSTER. The COLO CLAW FISH chasing them isn't so lucky. It is munched in half by the larger predator. The little sub slips away.

Qui-Gon: "Head for that outcropping."

And that is how our little boy band arrives in theed.


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