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Hayzzz

the story is good but the ending is terrible. the author cannot come up with a beautiful ending. itsssss terrriiibleeeee.. . . it's a waste of time, resources and energy.

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DaoistM0uhgH

Good start lots of things to catch the reader’s attention . But, the ending was rushed and several good story lines were underdeveloped and left hanging.

7mth
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Dayane_Ferreira

what type of en is that, the ML died in the end, man this is crazy. The ML suffered a lot during his life how could the author do this. it's insensible.

8mth
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maelstrom143

Beautiful story and overall buildup. Terrible ending.

9mth
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Baba03angel

The novel was great! had me reading, crying, laughing. i enjoyed the book so much the ending was a bummer. lol there's a lot of some missing info here and there but the details are pretty good. especially what happens behind closed door 😁 but overall i still enjoyed reading it. thanks for the read.

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Chris_Aguiar

I found the raw of this novel, although it has some different parts, the story in general is very similar. 冷冰冰的残疾大佬站起来亲了我

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Hb17
LV 1

Hey @Nyoi-bo studio, can you please tell me the Chinese name of this novel, as I wish to read this novel in Chinese. I will highly appreciate that.

11mth
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Hb17
LV 1

Dear Author, please change the ending of this novel. I really liked it. I hope that you will change the ending of this novel. Please let Qu xiao and Shang Yan have a happy ending. Pretty please.

11mth
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Beaniebaebie_T

I love this short story. The story telling method is concise and clear. The relationship between the ML and FL is relatable to the current era.

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radhika_rao

Story is good Plot is not new but with the characters it’s interesting The ending is a bit disappointing

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anaselene

That ending was so trash tht it took away everything good from it. The enjoyment I had ruined in seconds is this what you meant by positive.

1yr
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chizuai

I'm actually really disappointed with the FL. I didn't expect her to be a super genius or overpowering, but I see that she is wise. However, it's useless when Qiqi and other girls keep attempting to kill her. There's a lot of evidence, but they are dismissed by the MCs as if nothing happened. The FL almost lost her life, but she can't even punish those people who wanted to kill her. They still have the time and freedom to enjoy shopping and curse her. This fact is really, really disappointing. I don't know if this is the author's strategy to prolong the story, but it doesn't make sense anymore. The FL doesn't punish them or take revenge for their attempts to kill her; she just allows them, and it doesn't make sense at all. I am still in chapter 50+ I see that the fl really hurt that qiqi's face but that's all ??

1yr
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ginseng_baby

this is so bad, don't even bother reading it

1yr
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DaoistZ1anfy

Before reading the whole story read the last chapter

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_Michele_

Modern Day Transmigrating FL salvages and improves the life that her body’s previous owner had ruined in this s€xy slice-of-life drama. Unfortunately the author decided to end this novel in a heavily meaningful way which doesn’t match the plot-line type of this story. Is the author planning a “Part 2” or does the author not care about writing on this platform anymore? The shockingly hurried way the best character in this novel was slaughtered at the end while his wife is giving birth to his son is extremely unforgiving and shows the author’s disrespect for the story and the reader’s. I empathize with this statement in the novel:

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DaoistRay

If I m not wrong FL transmitted to a novel.in that case FL should change the fate for herself and for ML . But the author represents ML is dead. That is a huge worst mistake for transmitted person.I think author never seen the main concept for transmission.

1yr
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xz_Bichen_Suibian

I actually love the story, but it doesn't make sense that the FL goes through so much trouble just to save the ML health problem only be killed at the ending. My heart aches for her. I just hope there is reason beyond this ending, a book 2 perhaps??😅😅😅

1yr
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MsShei29

USUAL school trope people bullying and accusing FL of crazy things, other people bullying her but she comes out strong. One thing I liked though is that author made ML's disability and recovery the goal of the story and never lost sight of that direction. However, the ending is really just disappointing. If you want heartache and shock in the end, then read at your own risk!

1yr
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BulkySandwich

Do not spend coins to read! Great story some of the "climax" chapters are crowed together though. The worse thing about this novel is the ending the author showed no care for the readers honestly a hiatus would have been better!

1yr
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TeeWhy85

I don't like the way the story ended...... but I love the fact that it's a short story. thanks author .

2yr
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Maikou_Thao

The story was good and then the ending happen and now I’m so confused. Why did the author end the story like that? It just doesn’t make any sense..? If you’re looking for a HE this story isn’t it. I would consider this more a bittersweet ending. So disappointed, if I had known from the beginning I wouldn’t have wasted my time reading this, unless there’s a part 2 somewhere or the story isn’y finished..?

2yr
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Spv153

this is a short story unlike others which are lengthy.male and female leads characters are well developed.fl went through so much to cure fl and i was expecting a happy ending with baby. but I never thought the end to be sad and its abrupt,that i can't accept it.it totally spoiled the escence of the beautiful story.if i had known it i wouldn't have read this story.

2yr
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prakashcept

y end the novel at a sad ending. finally FL had a settled happy life but the end made it sad again

2yr
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imimmi
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The novel had a great start and a good plot, but the ending ruined it all. Killing the male lead and ending the book has no sense. Totally disappointed!!

2yr
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the_unknown_name

it's a really heartbreaking ending especially after everything that they passed through together 💔💔💔 i certainly did not expect this to happen at last when things were so smoothly going for the lead couple 😭😭😭 this will never get out of my head and heart

2yr
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Light_Dance

Story was so perfect.. but everything went wrong in the end! ML died!! I cant believe it 😪😪 after reading such a good story.. the ending is so bad!! please continue the book...or change the ending.. it's heartbreaking 😭

2yr
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Harshitasatsangi

I am writing this review only for the Future reader to save their coins, time, and high expectations because this novel is huge disappointment. Is has a hashtag of (lightnovel , positive) but in reality its nothing like that. The ending was unsatisfactory, fast paced, a bit illogical too. Reading this will only left you with heavy heart and bad mood. If Author should have started the new story with the end of there novel book love story to convert it into real life then I would have appreciated it..

2yr
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UnspokenBeauty

The book had an excellent start, but the ending was horrible. I wish they would have finished the novel correctly or just not start it. It cost us a lot of coins to read this, but we’re not getting our money’s worth. Im sick of spending 1000’s in coin, but can never freaking finish the book because they abruptly end or they drop the book.

2yr
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PenelopeKnight

I thought this book was pretty good in the beginning. However, I don’t understand why the ending was so abrupt. The male lead dies never getting to see his son or getting to live his life peacefully after recovery. It’ s make me wonder what was actually the point of it all. Why heal his legs if he’s going to die 8 months later. Why be reborn and make the two lead fall in love if one dies. What was the point of it all?

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annalynettes

well, this story at first I read it I feel excited. But when I see the ending I was so mad!!! You know, even if you want to create a sad ending, at least make it more detail. Such as how Qu Xiao will react? did she give birth safely? not like this rubbish! I'm so unsatisfied with this ending. I feel even if you want to wrap it up, at least not like this 🥹

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2yr
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Hayzzz

the story is good but the ending is terrible. the author cannot come up with a beautiful ending. itsssss terrriiibleeeee.. . . it's a waste of time, resources and energy.

1mth
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DaoistM0uhgH

Good start lots of things to catch the reader’s attention . But, the ending was rushed and several good story lines were underdeveloped and left hanging.

7mth
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Dayane_Ferreira

what type of en is that, the ML died in the end, man this is crazy. The ML suffered a lot during his life how could the author do this. it's insensible.

8mth
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maelstrom143

Beautiful story and overall buildup. Terrible ending.

9mth
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Baba03angel

The novel was great! had me reading, crying, laughing. i enjoyed the book so much the ending was a bummer. lol there's a lot of some missing info here and there but the details are pretty good. especially what happens behind closed door 😁 but overall i still enjoyed reading it. thanks for the read.

9mth
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Chris_Aguiar

I found the raw of this novel, although it has some different parts, the story in general is very similar. 冷冰冰的残疾大佬站起来亲了我

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10mth
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Hb17
LV 1

Hey @Nyoi-bo studio, can you please tell me the Chinese name of this novel, as I wish to read this novel in Chinese. I will highly appreciate that.

11mth
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Hb17
LV 1

Dear Author, please change the ending of this novel. I really liked it. I hope that you will change the ending of this novel. Please let Qu xiao and Shang Yan have a happy ending. Pretty please.

11mth
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Beaniebaebie_T

I love this short story. The story telling method is concise and clear. The relationship between the ML and FL is relatable to the current era.

1yr
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radhika_rao

Story is good Plot is not new but with the characters it’s interesting The ending is a bit disappointing

1yr
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anaselene

That ending was so trash tht it took away everything good from it. The enjoyment I had ruined in seconds is this what you meant by positive.

1yr
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chizuai

I'm actually really disappointed with the FL. I didn't expect her to be a super genius or overpowering, but I see that she is wise. However, it's useless when Qiqi and other girls keep attempting to kill her. There's a lot of evidence, but they are dismissed by the MCs as if nothing happened. The FL almost lost her life, but she can't even punish those people who wanted to kill her. They still have the time and freedom to enjoy shopping and curse her. This fact is really, really disappointing. I don't know if this is the author's strategy to prolong the story, but it doesn't make sense anymore. The FL doesn't punish them or take revenge for their attempts to kill her; she just allows them, and it doesn't make sense at all. I am still in chapter 50+ I see that the fl really hurt that qiqi's face but that's all ??

1yr
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ginseng_baby

this is so bad, don't even bother reading it

1yr
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DaoistZ1anfy

Before reading the whole story read the last chapter

1yr
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_Michele_

Modern Day Transmigrating FL salvages and improves the life that her body’s previous owner had ruined in this s€xy slice-of-life drama. Unfortunately the author decided to end this novel in a heavily meaningful way which doesn’t match the plot-line type of this story. Is the author planning a “Part 2” or does the author not care about writing on this platform anymore? The shockingly hurried way the best character in this novel was slaughtered at the end while his wife is giving birth to his son is extremely unforgiving and shows the author’s disrespect for the story and the reader’s. I empathize with this statement in the novel:

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1yr
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DaoistRay

If I m not wrong FL transmitted to a novel.in that case FL should change the fate for herself and for ML . But the author represents ML is dead. That is a huge worst mistake for transmitted person.I think author never seen the main concept for transmission.

1yr
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xz_Bichen_Suibian

I actually love the story, but it doesn't make sense that the FL goes through so much trouble just to save the ML health problem only be killed at the ending. My heart aches for her. I just hope there is reason beyond this ending, a book 2 perhaps??😅😅😅

1yr
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MsShei29

USUAL school trope people bullying and accusing FL of crazy things, other people bullying her but she comes out strong. One thing I liked though is that author made ML's disability and recovery the goal of the story and never lost sight of that direction. However, the ending is really just disappointing. If you want heartache and shock in the end, then read at your own risk!

1yr
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BulkySandwich

Do not spend coins to read! Great story some of the "climax" chapters are crowed together though. The worse thing about this novel is the ending the author showed no care for the readers honestly a hiatus would have been better!

1yr
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TeeWhy85

I don't like the way the story ended...... but I love the fact that it's a short story. thanks author .

2yr
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Maikou_Thao

The story was good and then the ending happen and now I’m so confused. Why did the author end the story like that? It just doesn’t make any sense..? If you’re looking for a HE this story isn’t it. I would consider this more a bittersweet ending. So disappointed, if I had known from the beginning I wouldn’t have wasted my time reading this, unless there’s a part 2 somewhere or the story isn’y finished..?

2yr
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Spv153

this is a short story unlike others which are lengthy.male and female leads characters are well developed.fl went through so much to cure fl and i was expecting a happy ending with baby. but I never thought the end to be sad and its abrupt,that i can't accept it.it totally spoiled the escence of the beautiful story.if i had known it i wouldn't have read this story.

2yr
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prakashcept

y end the novel at a sad ending. finally FL had a settled happy life but the end made it sad again

2yr
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imimmi
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The novel had a great start and a good plot, but the ending ruined it all. Killing the male lead and ending the book has no sense. Totally disappointed!!

2yr
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the_unknown_name

it's a really heartbreaking ending especially after everything that they passed through together 💔💔💔 i certainly did not expect this to happen at last when things were so smoothly going for the lead couple 😭😭😭 this will never get out of my head and heart

2yr
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Light_Dance

Story was so perfect.. but everything went wrong in the end! ML died!! I cant believe it 😪😪 after reading such a good story.. the ending is so bad!! please continue the book...or change the ending.. it's heartbreaking 😭

2yr
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Harshitasatsangi

I am writing this review only for the Future reader to save their coins, time, and high expectations because this novel is huge disappointment. Is has a hashtag of (lightnovel , positive) but in reality its nothing like that. The ending was unsatisfactory, fast paced, a bit illogical too. Reading this will only left you with heavy heart and bad mood. If Author should have started the new story with the end of there novel book love story to convert it into real life then I would have appreciated it..

2yr
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UnspokenBeauty

The book had an excellent start, but the ending was horrible. I wish they would have finished the novel correctly or just not start it. It cost us a lot of coins to read this, but we’re not getting our money’s worth. Im sick of spending 1000’s in coin, but can never freaking finish the book because they abruptly end or they drop the book.

2yr
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PenelopeKnight

I thought this book was pretty good in the beginning. However, I don’t understand why the ending was so abrupt. The male lead dies never getting to see his son or getting to live his life peacefully after recovery. It’ s make me wonder what was actually the point of it all. Why heal his legs if he’s going to die 8 months later. Why be reborn and make the two lead fall in love if one dies. What was the point of it all?

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annalynettes

well, this story at first I read it I feel excited. But when I see the ending I was so mad!!! You know, even if you want to create a sad ending, at least make it more detail. Such as how Qu Xiao will react? did she give birth safely? not like this rubbish! I'm so unsatisfied with this ending. I feel even if you want to wrap it up, at least not like this 🥹

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