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bro i see potential but a lot of spelling error like 'aboruto' it is 'Naruto' ................................................................................
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you are doing well so far you just have a lot of spelling errors so I would recommend getting someone to check your spelling or a spell check app to help you other then that it is a great book so far
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bro i see potential but a lot of spelling error like 'aboruto' it is 'Naruto' ................................................................................
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you are doing well so far you just have a lot of spelling errors so I would recommend getting someone to check your spelling or a spell check app to help you other then that it is a great book so far
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