Marvel: The Unknown Story

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wheretonow

Guys you the drill. I am leaving a 5* review and I hope ou guys will also do the same. __________________________________________________________________

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HeavensWay

Love the way you made this story integrating elements from multiple series into marvel while still having good world building and reasonable story line five stars for you.

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MrSleepyAsh98ij3g

It was quite a nice read and I don't feel like I waste any time reading it...A nice 9 chapter ride and I can't wait to see how the story proceeds..

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FoolishPanda_25

I have read part of the mtl and I've really liked the story the only problem is the mtl translation is sometimes difficult I hope this makes it better.

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UnorthodoxFox

4 Chapters already in and I loved it. What I love is how the Author implements technology so beautifully. I beg of you Author to not drop it take your rest as to not burnout. I know you can do it

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LeonToralla

ready for read this novel, expect a lot of fin and chapters :v [img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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reader12143546

this fanfic is so great the world dont need a hero no the mc bring all humanity in a greatness. is a first time i see that and is so refreching, not a lone hero or mc carry the world no the mc bring manking in the star. ty author for the fanfic.

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Rexar999

Pure gold that inputs most common and popular action movies in it (GI Joe, call of duty, chapie to name a few) Only downside is that the update is a little slow but other than that its great

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Isaiah_1217

Love the idea of how u did this book and the way that the plot is going not just that but the MC/OC having his own company Atlas selling weapons and in a way having his own private army this book has been quite interesting and intriguing not just that but also going through time to another game verse and bringing back new technology with him not just that but way he handles dealing with the government and other people along with Tony Stark look forward to reading more of this book and hopefully be able to find out what will happen next cant wait for when ur able to hopefully get the chance to continue on with this book it's truly quite unique and different and overall enjoy reading it

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Underworld000

must read list .........................................................................................................................................

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SneakyKosher

Pretty good, MC ain't that overpowered, The flow of the story gets iffy at times because of the sudden jump in perspective but nothing too bad, and no problem grammar wise. Pretty solid 👍

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MAIDENLESS

this is the most boring novel that I have ever read in my entire live .

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rudraksh_kothari

Brother from all the work you have done, this is the far best of it, it gets technical very often but otherwise its very very very bise. Updates are stable, Plot meets logic (a bit lack of terms that convinces me that it can be possible are not there but you've done a fabulous work), World Background perfect (base mcu timeline, nit too congested '' with solid 300 m underground support structure'' kinda stability), Charector are beautiful ly designed but later in it gets too much, Quality of your work is fabulous, I even wish to fund you should you pursue the literature side. Best of Luck from me.

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Red_Dex

Can anyone tell me the real name of this fanfic? ........................................................................................................

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Huntsman

Well, let's get this over with then. Writing quality? Decent, but the dialogue feels wrong somehow, it's like I'm reading those Chinese Xianxia fanfics and not Marvel, that's the best way I can describe it. Updating stability is good, every chapter is around 5-10K words and the author updates regularly. The problem is every chapter feels bloated with information I feel rather unnecessary. Story development is fine. Decent plot, reasonable explanation for almost every action taken. Same goes for character design and World building. Overall, I give this a 3.6/5. Better than a lot of fanfics, the author doesn't skip out on the boring part so the world feels real, but at the same time that makes the story bloated, it feels like a chore to read and half the time the MC isn't even on screen.

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Dexterixx

Best fanfic novel up to date that is able to integrate cod series without any error. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Shanky_S

currently at ch17. the book is good. translation is also good. . . . . . . . . . .

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mythoscribe

The story has been great until now...all in all it's a great story for you if you are a military enthusiast too...the mc isn't op in terms of raw power but his background political power his troops techs etc make him an op character...