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I recommend reading this fanfic and it's fun to read and don't look at the main character's gender. Just start reading, sometimes you don't need to look at other people's ratings, sometimes they may differ from yours.
*Ehem* Writing quality is immaculate, a moron like me can understand how heavenly a fan-fic like this is. Update stability needs some work but everyone's got their own lives and doesn't always have free time for stuff like this. Story development is wonderful, its kind of fast paced but it still has some slower side development that keeps you from getting bored quickly. Character design is great, I feel like I can connect to the MC on quite a bit, there are some things I think could be better but its still good enough for me. World background... One day I set my eyes up to the sky And like a plane my dreams were passing by And I awoke to tears that had filled my eyes I need to spread my wings out and fly I lie awake at night with these memories Of feeling powerless and they're haunting me I'm always reaching out for this destiny To make it happen that's all on me Cruel fate sets in motion And no one else knows why Waiting for the day to come, when will it show up? Claiming what's before my eyes With every issue, I gotta breathe through Or the moment might just pass They all told me I can't, they were laughing Well look who's laughing now Now I can feel the fire burning deep within me I'll be the hero and no one can stop me Loudly I will scream it from the top of my lungs You got those tired eyes from crying every moment You cannot hide it, someone's gonna notice I'll be your hero, no one's gonna hurt you again Gonna raise my hand with a peace sign Our story will last forever No, I could never say I'm protecting you I know you're stronger than me and you know it too And yet you still detest when I'm helping you Why can't you see it's all I can do? You know I had to change ever since the day The day I dried up my tears and I walked away So go ahead and laugh, there's no other way I'm all alone and that's nothing new Now I've been kicking and screaming It's like I don't know how to breathe You know that I try my best, but within my depths There's a mess inside of me But like an ember, I'll remember There's a fire inside of me Tell me to forget this, but I want this It's all I'll ever need Now I can feel the fire burning deep within me I'll be the hero and no one can stop me Loudly I will scream it from the top of my lungs You got those tired eyes from crying every moment You cannot hide it, someone's gonna notice I'll be your hero, no one's gonna hurt you again Gonna raise my hand with a peace sign Our story will last forever 'Cause I can feel it, I can hear it screaming, keep on going You'll go the distance, there's so much in you that's worth the showing Give me the go and then I'll show you what I got I'll break myself apart, I'm never gonna stop So now you know that all my dreams and memories within me All play so vividly and wake me up, my soul is screaming Never take them back, I'd do it all again Now I can feel the fire burning deep within me I'll be the hero and no one can stop me I'll go the distance, no one's gonna get in my way It's time to dry your eyes, we've got no time for crying You're gonna show them and you'll keep on smiling And be a hero, gotta give your all every day Now's the time to throw up a peace sign We won't back down, no never You and I will make our own story I've got your back forever
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Love the story so far, keep it up author!!!!!! Love the main character, can't wait to see what will happen when the MHA main story starts.
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is there going to be a normal romance or yuri I'll still read either way just want to know.................. ...............................
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i came for the warframe content, and that left me seriously disapointed *sigh* either way, the story is good and i have no other complains tumbs up, author-san
Review From A Cute Little Shota Here: I really, really love this FanFic. Like, the MC's personality, the advancement of plot, and the interaction between characters. I'm an impatient person and I hate waiting for the next update but I will break that and wait for the next chapter of this FanFic. Keep up the good work, be happy, and enjoy your day, Author-san. Muah <3
liking it already pls do more and i want momo and others to create a.a.a like from misaka mikoto yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa a
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I was finding genshin impact fanfiction when I stumbled upon this masterpiece! I love this book! I love the way the mc do things! I love the way you portray their powers! And overall I love this story very much! Keep up the good work!
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i really like your idea and your character, also the story is pretty good or at least i like it, i'm reading it through google translator(since i don't know english and i'm still learning) and even so it's easily my favorite genshin story so far and i hope i can read it until the end or when you leave it, although if I give you an idea since the main character was a man before reincarnating and clearly likes women I would recommend you to make the story a yuri (girl x girl), although it is only a recommendation and I would still read it if you don't I hope I can continue to enjoy your story and thanks for reading it.
interesting and all But he dosent really change characters you'd think this would be like a non-gendered sorta novel but no the character is full on girl dosent even get paimon,some things are not explained like the time skips how long did it last? or how did the Mc not craft something for himself if "It"(idk) crafted a full on mini generator.
This is my review. The book is really enjoyable so far, and I really hope that this doesn't turn out to be a yuri book. The writing quality is readable, which is a great point for me. I am a huge gender bender fan and I hope the MC didn't lose her identity as Fischl. I know that this is just my opinion, but I already loved the book when the MC's life as Kirari started. Next is the world, the most important point if the book needs to stay enjoyable for the reader. First is MHA, there are many possibilities you could make without following the canon timeline, which, of course, could be hard for an author who has no creativity, but I trust the author that you could be creative with your own ideas. Story development: it's only 6 chapters, so it's too early for me to say anything about it but I'll give it 5 stars because it's enjoyable and it all matters. What's bad about this book for now? There's some cringe humor and some parts that make me think that this is crackfic, which could be disappointing if it really is. What do I really hope for? No yuri or no romance, but if the MC turns male and has a romance, I don't really care as long as it's not yuri.
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nice keep it up pls dont drop it jsjshsbsjshshsushshsusvsusbsusvsusvsusgsusgsusgsushsisjsishsishs9shsishsushsushsidjsjskeiosidjdhdudududhhdudsu
Shameless Author review here! Enjoy the story of a man who is reincarnated with cheats in a supernatural anime world. I'm trying to improve my writing skills so let me know of any grammatical errors you find in the paragraph comments as you read~ I'll fix it after a while.
I recommend reading this fanfic and it's fun to read and don't look at the main character's gender. Just start reading, sometimes you don't need to look at other people's ratings, sometimes they may differ from yours.
*Ehem* Writing quality is immaculate, a moron like me can understand how heavenly a fan-fic like this is. Update stability needs some work but everyone's got their own lives and doesn't always have free time for stuff like this. Story development is wonderful, its kind of fast paced but it still has some slower side development that keeps you from getting bored quickly. Character design is great, I feel like I can connect to the MC on quite a bit, there are some things I think could be better but its still good enough for me. World background... One day I set my eyes up to the sky And like a plane my dreams were passing by And I awoke to tears that had filled my eyes I need to spread my wings out and fly I lie awake at night with these memories Of feeling powerless and they're haunting me I'm always reaching out for this destiny To make it happen that's all on me Cruel fate sets in motion And no one else knows why Waiting for the day to come, when will it show up? Claiming what's before my eyes With every issue, I gotta breathe through Or the moment might just pass They all told me I can't, they were laughing Well look who's laughing now Now I can feel the fire burning deep within me I'll be the hero and no one can stop me Loudly I will scream it from the top of my lungs You got those tired eyes from crying every moment You cannot hide it, someone's gonna notice I'll be your hero, no one's gonna hurt you again Gonna raise my hand with a peace sign Our story will last forever No, I could never say I'm protecting you I know you're stronger than me and you know it too And yet you still detest when I'm helping you Why can't you see it's all I can do? You know I had to change ever since the day The day I dried up my tears and I walked away So go ahead and laugh, there's no other way I'm all alone and that's nothing new Now I've been kicking and screaming It's like I don't know how to breathe You know that I try my best, but within my depths There's a mess inside of me But like an ember, I'll remember There's a fire inside of me Tell me to forget this, but I want this It's all I'll ever need Now I can feel the fire burning deep within me I'll be the hero and no one can stop me Loudly I will scream it from the top of my lungs You got those tired eyes from crying every moment You cannot hide it, someone's gonna notice I'll be your hero, no one's gonna hurt you again Gonna raise my hand with a peace sign Our story will last forever 'Cause I can feel it, I can hear it screaming, keep on going You'll go the distance, there's so much in you that's worth the showing Give me the go and then I'll show you what I got I'll break myself apart, I'm never gonna stop So now you know that all my dreams and memories within me All play so vividly and wake me up, my soul is screaming Never take them back, I'd do it all again Now I can feel the fire burning deep within me I'll be the hero and no one can stop me I'll go the distance, no one's gonna get in my way It's time to dry your eyes, we've got no time for crying You're gonna show them and you'll keep on smiling And be a hero, gotta give your all every day Now's the time to throw up a peace sign We won't back down, no never You and I will make our own story I've got your back forever
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Love the story so far, keep it up author!!!!!! Love the main character, can't wait to see what will happen when the MHA main story starts.
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is there going to be a normal romance or yuri I'll still read either way just want to know.................. ...............................
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i came for the warframe content, and that left me seriously disapointed *sigh* either way, the story is good and i have no other complains tumbs up, author-san
Review From A Cute Little Shota Here: I really, really love this FanFic. Like, the MC's personality, the advancement of plot, and the interaction between characters. I'm an impatient person and I hate waiting for the next update but I will break that and wait for the next chapter of this FanFic. Keep up the good work, be happy, and enjoy your day, Author-san. Muah <3
liking it already pls do more and i want momo and others to create a.a.a like from misaka mikoto yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa a
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I was finding genshin impact fanfiction when I stumbled upon this masterpiece! I love this book! I love the way the mc do things! I love the way you portray their powers! And overall I love this story very much! Keep up the good work!
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i really like your idea and your character, also the story is pretty good or at least i like it, i'm reading it through google translator(since i don't know english and i'm still learning) and even so it's easily my favorite genshin story so far and i hope i can read it until the end or when you leave it, although if I give you an idea since the main character was a man before reincarnating and clearly likes women I would recommend you to make the story a yuri (girl x girl), although it is only a recommendation and I would still read it if you don't I hope I can continue to enjoy your story and thanks for reading it.
interesting and all But he dosent really change characters you'd think this would be like a non-gendered sorta novel but no the character is full on girl dosent even get paimon,some things are not explained like the time skips how long did it last? or how did the Mc not craft something for himself if "It"(idk) crafted a full on mini generator.
This is my review. The book is really enjoyable so far, and I really hope that this doesn't turn out to be a yuri book. The writing quality is readable, which is a great point for me. I am a huge gender bender fan and I hope the MC didn't lose her identity as Fischl. I know that this is just my opinion, but I already loved the book when the MC's life as Kirari started. Next is the world, the most important point if the book needs to stay enjoyable for the reader. First is MHA, there are many possibilities you could make without following the canon timeline, which, of course, could be hard for an author who has no creativity, but I trust the author that you could be creative with your own ideas. Story development: it's only 6 chapters, so it's too early for me to say anything about it but I'll give it 5 stars because it's enjoyable and it all matters. What's bad about this book for now? There's some cringe humor and some parts that make me think that this is crackfic, which could be disappointing if it really is. What do I really hope for? No yuri or no romance, but if the MC turns male and has a romance, I don't really care as long as it's not yuri.
Good stuff going on here :) ..................................................................................................................
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nice keep it up pls dont drop it jsjshsbsjshshsushshsusvsusbsusvsusvsusgsusgsusgsushsisjsishsishs9shsishsushsushsidjsjskeiosidjdhdudududhhdudsu
Shameless Author review here! Enjoy the story of a man who is reincarnated with cheats in a supernatural anime world. I'm trying to improve my writing skills so let me know of any grammatical errors you find in the paragraph comments as you read~ I'll fix it after a while.
This was a surprisingly good story I regret overlooking it