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A good read. The story itself has potential to be something trully amazing, the plot seems promising through out the chapters and the character's are life like which is good at the reader's interpretation. Overall i liked the story.
Overall a very basic but good realistic story, it has some weird parts starting on chapter six where lines of code can be seen, I assume the author tried to add photos to the work but it failed. Other than that small and annoying problem to read around. Its a good story and if you have time and are looking for something to read, you might as well give this one a shot.
Author here :> I just finished publishing the first 5 chapters. This is my first time writing a novel so I hope you like it. The premisse is really simple and you can know this by the title. The purpose of this novel is to relate the days and a slice of the MC's life as an ordinary person in a ordinary world, showing his thoughts and emotions. You may see some grammar errors. If you are enjoying the novel I would appreciate if you do comments or reviews.
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A good read. The story itself has potential to be something trully amazing, the plot seems promising through out the chapters and the character's are life like which is good at the reader's interpretation. Overall i liked the story.
Overall a very basic but good realistic story, it has some weird parts starting on chapter six where lines of code can be seen, I assume the author tried to add photos to the work but it failed. Other than that small and annoying problem to read around. Its a good story and if you have time and are looking for something to read, you might as well give this one a shot.
Author here :> I just finished publishing the first 5 chapters. This is my first time writing a novel so I hope you like it. The premisse is really simple and you can know this by the title. The purpose of this novel is to relate the days and a slice of the MC's life as an ordinary person in a ordinary world, showing his thoughts and emotions. You may see some grammar errors. If you are enjoying the novel I would appreciate if you do comments or reviews.
it so good try it im also not a bot but i wanna be a fan so fyxhccffrrfrfrfrffrrrrdrrdrffrffrdrfddrdrxrrxdrdxrdrcrrdcdxdrcrrddrdrdrfrffrdrfrfrfrrfrf4f5ff5fttgg
update: the novel is paused 🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬😈😈😈🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡🤡😎😎😎😎😎🥸🥸🥳🥳🤠🤯🤯🤯🤯👿😕😯😦