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the book started off well if you disregard the grammar errors. I did find there were some big contradictions in the story with regards when they discovered her as their mate. Was very disappointed with the end as it jumped with no explanation. Did enjoy the characters especially Ashley.
love this book all the way needs to e spell checked but still amazing thank you for this wonderful book and I hope there will be more[img=fp][img=coins]
is there going to be any chapters released ,it's been 22 days & although the story is good there needs to be an editor going over it because it's almost impossible to read
i love the story specially I like Avery. She is kind and soft heated girl and also strong well power. want to beat the boys how they hurt the girl like Avery
the book started off well if you disregard the grammar errors. I did find there were some big contradictions in the story with regards when they discovered her as their mate. Was very disappointed with the end as it jumped with no explanation. Did enjoy the characters especially Ashley.
love this book all the way needs to e spell checked but still amazing thank you for this wonderful book and I hope there will be more[img=fp][img=coins]
is there going to be any chapters released ,it's been 22 days & although the story is good there needs to be an editor going over it because it's almost impossible to read
i love the story specially I like Avery. She is kind and soft heated girl and also strong well power. want to beat the boys how they hurt the girl like Avery