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It see to have a really good story line. The main character seams well rounded and well thought out. I hope his powers progress and he looks after the little girl.
I love this story. The protagonist, Wang Ping lives on an Island, where cultivation resources are few and far between. Not only that, but Wang Ping's cultivation talent is sadly lacking. On the plus side, he has a Spirit Beast Wolf companion and a magic clamshell that holds a small dimensional realm that he can retire to—and since spatial treasures are very hard to come by—and rather piddling—say 3-cubic yards—his small Island dimension also doubles as a bang-up storage device. Demon Beast Meat loses its power very quickly. if not stored in an interstitial device. Consequently, most Demon Beast Meat is left to rot by these shiftless—and storage-device-less—cultivators. Wang Ping, his Wolf and later his per Bird all thrive on large amounts of Demon Beast Meat that would otherwise go to waste—and his inner world also absorbs energy from the Demon remains and grows in power and size. IF I have any criticism at all, I think that Wang Ping is a bit overdue for another plot armor promotion in level. I hope this one gets picked. I'm curious what the clamshell world may evolve into.
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A great novel but sadly, the author dropped this novel at chapter 234. He, the author has another job. 😢. Any recommendations for a new novel similar to this one?
author of this book has retired from writing anything anymore and he also didn't complete this so a sad ......................................
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Les figurines One Piece de Banpresto sont disponibles en précommande chez Zavvi ! Dans le monde des figurines, peu de marques sont reconnues pour leur grande qualité au fil des années. C'est pourtant le cas de Banpresto, une société japonaise qui s'est occupée de créer un grand nombre de figurines de licences iconiques, comme One Piece ou Naruto. Si elle a autant de liberté, c'est aussi grâce à son étroite relation avec Bandai, qui avait racheté partiellement l'entreprise en 1989. Ce rachat avait permis à l'entreprise de s'agrandir énormément, créant même un parc d'attraction et une société de développement de jeu vidéo avant d'être totalement absorbée par Bandai Namco. La qualité est toujours au rendez-vous et aujourd'hui on retrouve des figurines magnifiques des personnages de One Piece à la mode de Wano, donc de l'arc actuel du manga !
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No System????? No Arroggant Young Masters????? No Dog Mc????? No Braindead Characters????? No Hollow Side Characters????? Yeah nah, webnovel aint picking this, Im calling it right now. Therefore, I shall travel across the land of raws and mtls to seek pleasure in reading this novel
Pretty good read and very refreshing compared to the usual roster of Same old system novel that are generic and and bad (Few are good) - this is pretty good but idk if its gonna get picked
I am so glad this book made it to this point I saw it on the vote and loved the synopsis cant wait to see what the book has in store for the future
Now, I don’t normally do reviews but dear lord there is finally a novel that isn’t a system and doesn’t make me want to rip out my hair and bash my skull in with the stupidity of characters so far. That my friends, is a good sign because dear lord the amount of brain cells I have to lose to suspend my disbelief and not want to shoot myself is amazing. Anyways yeah, I like this novel, it has not been dumb so far.
No system? I’m in! Though I have to admit the premise worries me, I’m expecting a lot of face slapping and clichés but it not being a system novel and it not being modern, (meaning less racism) does excite me.
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I really enjoyed these first 20 chapters and would love to continue to read it. This novel has very good writing quality, the pacing of the story suits it and the main character isn't an idiot who is arrogant, we've also got an ok background of the world tho there are only 20 chapters from me writing this. Overall I didn't waste my time and would spend my fast passes or a few coins to read ahead, becoming one of only 2 stories on this site that I'd do that.
Well past the 1st 10 chps it's pretty generic ig , don't mind , I read something similar a while ago , I mean these tropes and ginks r bound to be repeated after all , still pretty fun read
a good novel. easily one of the best in this trial period (for me). no system. a likeable mc (for me tho). few cliche. ####################
Finally something different from the usual system overflow we have been having for a while now. Let's hope the synopsis is accurate.
I haved redead the raws and the MC is intelligent, humble and kind. There aren't young masters up until chapter 53. That chapter is where i am currently.
The synopsis had me at “#nosystem.” Even though I enjoy system novels, the quality of them has just been getting worse and worse. This one sounds fun. Farming and slice of life are right up my alley. Hopefully this one is chosen to be a trial read.
Its been a long time since I wanted to see a novel from here but I wanna read this novel just from the Author Note it shows so why not.
This really cought my attention not only because of the title but because I really like stories like these that start of crippled and then make them self super strong.
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I already love the plot, I hope it gets picked and or voted for. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .
It caught my attention I hope they release this novel and put it to vote for it, I am already tired of novels about systems, it is about time that we have novels with Mc workers
ALRIGHT.......i want this one! it seems rather good so i hope this gets picked rather quick!..................................................
Solid pick based on 102 chapters. The author improved after his last novel. While this one's pace is also slow and down to the ground, the MC there seems to have a better personality, earns things by himself instead of being indebted/burdened by clan, he gets his action time and comes out with a satisfying result, the side characters such as the girl are more interesting too and could indeed make up for interesting relations and situations years later. Author's interesting note after chapter 102: ,,As I said in the previous chapter, I abandoned a lot of constraints to write this book, and wrote it completely according to my own ideas, and I will no longer be influenced by anyone's opinions! If you don’t like to read it, you think it’s poisonous here, and there’s something unreasonable, please do it yourself. The starting point is such a large library, you can always find something that suits your heart. Or you can try to write a book you want, saying Maybe it will be a hit, and it will be a mortal one! I am actually very disgusted that some people say that my plot is unreasonable here, and there are many loopholes, because I am actually very concerned about the rationality of the plot and the self-consistency of logic. People who say this will make me more angry than directly scolding me for throwing on the street. Makes me feel like an insult to my writing! In the previous episodes of Lin Xiaoe, one by one shouted poison, and shouted that the little white dog gave up the book, and I laughed. I have read books for so many years, I don't know that there are many books with this kind of plot? But how many books did I deal with later? And I think this plot is handled very well, because she is used as a point to give the protagonist the first magic weapon, some life-saving charms, medicinal pills, including the following charts, which opens up a new situation, and more later Do a good job of the outline of the new plot. This kind of writing with dots and lines is exactly what I am good at and what I like. The so-called old bottle of new wine, the development of online literature to the present, if you want to say who has written a plot, no one else has written it before, that is impossible, and the creator can only slightly modify and innovate some plots. Just like domestic music, it is not because the predecessors have written all the lyrics and tunes that are easy to create, and now it is more and more difficult to introduce such classic songs. Besides, why is the protagonist an aboriginal? In the first two books, I chose a transmigrator protagonist, and then I found that although a transmigrator is easy to arouse readers' approval at first, the disadvantages will appear as the plot unfolds later. Once the protagonist encounters someone who wants to plot against him, but the protagonist doesn't see it, many readers will jump out and say that the protagonist is stupid, why is it so easy to trust people, and it's a transmigrator, they don't know anything! I really don't know how to explain it! Are there many examples of being deceived in reality? How many people who think they are smart don't know when they are being lied to? There is a good joke that you are not deceived, just because you are not worth being deceived. When those professional liars really want to deceive you face to face, you can't prevent it! Today's novel readers, many of them read a lot of books, they all know astronomy and geography, and know everything about ancient and modern China and foreign countries, and they are all transparent about the world. In their eyes, the protagonist of the transmigrator should be like this. But I really want to ask a question, even if you pass through and get the golden finger, can you really understand people's hearts? Then you can see from someone else's word or action that someone wants to hurt you? Then immediately preemptively kill others? There is no doubt that God's perspective is cool, but in the Xianxia world, especially in the mortal world view of Xianxia, God's perspective has become an obstacle that greatly affects the author's writing, at least for me. So I chose a native who would persuade many people at the beginning, an aboriginal who grew up from an orphan, an aboriginal protagonist who would make mistakes, correct them, and learn from them."
It see to have a really good story line. The main character seams well rounded and well thought out. I hope his powers progress and he looks after the little girl.
I love this story. The protagonist, Wang Ping lives on an Island, where cultivation resources are few and far between. Not only that, but Wang Ping's cultivation talent is sadly lacking. On the plus side, he has a Spirit Beast Wolf companion and a magic clamshell that holds a small dimensional realm that he can retire to—and since spatial treasures are very hard to come by—and rather piddling—say 3-cubic yards—his small Island dimension also doubles as a bang-up storage device. Demon Beast Meat loses its power very quickly. if not stored in an interstitial device. Consequently, most Demon Beast Meat is left to rot by these shiftless—and storage-device-less—cultivators. Wang Ping, his Wolf and later his per Bird all thrive on large amounts of Demon Beast Meat that would otherwise go to waste—and his inner world also absorbs energy from the Demon remains and grows in power and size. IF I have any criticism at all, I think that Wang Ping is a bit overdue for another plot armor promotion in level. I hope this one gets picked. I'm curious what the clamshell world may evolve into.
Reveal Spoiler Since it got dropped Jfjgjfjfjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjjffjjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfjfjjffjjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfjfj
A great novel but sadly, the author dropped this novel at chapter 234. He, the author has another job. 😢. Any recommendations for a new novel similar to this one?
author of this book has retired from writing anything anymore and he also didn't complete this so a sad ......................................
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Les figurines One Piece de Banpresto sont disponibles en précommande chez Zavvi ! Dans le monde des figurines, peu de marques sont reconnues pour leur grande qualité au fil des années. C'est pourtant le cas de Banpresto, une société japonaise qui s'est occupée de créer un grand nombre de figurines de licences iconiques, comme One Piece ou Naruto. Si elle a autant de liberté, c'est aussi grâce à son étroite relation avec Bandai, qui avait racheté partiellement l'entreprise en 1989. Ce rachat avait permis à l'entreprise de s'agrandir énormément, créant même un parc d'attraction et une société de développement de jeu vidéo avant d'être totalement absorbée par Bandai Namco. La qualité est toujours au rendez-vous et aujourd'hui on retrouve des figurines magnifiques des personnages de One Piece à la mode de Wano, donc de l'arc actuel du manga !
Reveal Spoiler No System????? No Arroggant Young Masters????? No Dog Mc????? No Braindead Characters????? No Hollow Side Characters????? Yeah nah, webnovel aint picking this, Im calling it right now. Therefore, I shall travel across the land of raws and mtls to seek pleasure in reading this novel
Pretty good read and very refreshing compared to the usual roster of Same old system novel that are generic and and bad (Few are good) - this is pretty good but idk if its gonna get picked
I am so glad this book made it to this point I saw it on the vote and loved the synopsis cant wait to see what the book has in store for the future
Now, I don’t normally do reviews but dear lord there is finally a novel that isn’t a system and doesn’t make me want to rip out my hair and bash my skull in with the stupidity of characters so far. That my friends, is a good sign because dear lord the amount of brain cells I have to lose to suspend my disbelief and not want to shoot myself is amazing. Anyways yeah, I like this novel, it has not been dumb so far.
No system? I’m in! Though I have to admit the premise worries me, I’m expecting a lot of face slapping and clichés but it not being a system novel and it not being modern, (meaning less racism) does excite me.
Unfortunately this has been dropped by original author at chap 200 [img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I really enjoyed these first 20 chapters and would love to continue to read it. This novel has very good writing quality, the pacing of the story suits it and the main character isn't an idiot who is arrogant, we've also got an ok background of the world tho there are only 20 chapters from me writing this. Overall I didn't waste my time and would spend my fast passes or a few coins to read ahead, becoming one of only 2 stories on this site that I'd do that.
Well past the 1st 10 chps it's pretty generic ig , don't mind , I read something similar a while ago , I mean these tropes and ginks r bound to be repeated after all , still pretty fun read
a good novel. easily one of the best in this trial period (for me). no system. a likeable mc (for me tho). few cliche. ####################
Finally something different from the usual system overflow we have been having for a while now. Let's hope the synopsis is accurate.
I haved redead the raws and the MC is intelligent, humble and kind. There aren't young masters up until chapter 53. That chapter is where i am currently.
The synopsis had me at “#nosystem.” Even though I enjoy system novels, the quality of them has just been getting worse and worse. This one sounds fun. Farming and slice of life are right up my alley. Hopefully this one is chosen to be a trial read.
Its been a long time since I wanted to see a novel from here but I wanna read this novel just from the Author Note it shows so why not.
This really cought my attention not only because of the title but because I really like stories like these that start of crippled and then make them self super strong.
finally something worth reading [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I already love the plot, I hope it gets picked and or voted for. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .
It caught my attention I hope they release this novel and put it to vote for it, I am already tired of novels about systems, it is about time that we have novels with Mc workers
ALRIGHT.......i want this one! it seems rather good so i hope this gets picked rather quick!..................................................
Solid pick based on 102 chapters. The author improved after his last novel. While this one's pace is also slow and down to the ground, the MC there seems to have a better personality, earns things by himself instead of being indebted/burdened by clan, he gets his action time and comes out with a satisfying result, the side characters such as the girl are more interesting too and could indeed make up for interesting relations and situations years later. Author's interesting note after chapter 102: ,,As I said in the previous chapter, I abandoned a lot of constraints to write this book, and wrote it completely according to my own ideas, and I will no longer be influenced by anyone's opinions! If you don’t like to read it, you think it’s poisonous here, and there’s something unreasonable, please do it yourself. The starting point is such a large library, you can always find something that suits your heart. Or you can try to write a book you want, saying Maybe it will be a hit, and it will be a mortal one! I am actually very disgusted that some people say that my plot is unreasonable here, and there are many loopholes, because I am actually very concerned about the rationality of the plot and the self-consistency of logic. People who say this will make me more angry than directly scolding me for throwing on the street. Makes me feel like an insult to my writing! In the previous episodes of Lin Xiaoe, one by one shouted poison, and shouted that the little white dog gave up the book, and I laughed. I have read books for so many years, I don't know that there are many books with this kind of plot? But how many books did I deal with later? And I think this plot is handled very well, because she is used as a point to give the protagonist the first magic weapon, some life-saving charms, medicinal pills, including the following charts, which opens up a new situation, and more later Do a good job of the outline of the new plot. This kind of writing with dots and lines is exactly what I am good at and what I like. The so-called old bottle of new wine, the development of online literature to the present, if you want to say who has written a plot, no one else has written it before, that is impossible, and the creator can only slightly modify and innovate some plots. Just like domestic music, it is not because the predecessors have written all the lyrics and tunes that are easy to create, and now it is more and more difficult to introduce such classic songs. Besides, why is the protagonist an aboriginal? In the first two books, I chose a transmigrator protagonist, and then I found that although a transmigrator is easy to arouse readers' approval at first, the disadvantages will appear as the plot unfolds later. Once the protagonist encounters someone who wants to plot against him, but the protagonist doesn't see it, many readers will jump out and say that the protagonist is stupid, why is it so easy to trust people, and it's a transmigrator, they don't know anything! I really don't know how to explain it! Are there many examples of being deceived in reality? How many people who think they are smart don't know when they are being lied to? There is a good joke that you are not deceived, just because you are not worth being deceived. When those professional liars really want to deceive you face to face, you can't prevent it! Today's novel readers, many of them read a lot of books, they all know astronomy and geography, and know everything about ancient and modern China and foreign countries, and they are all transparent about the world. In their eyes, the protagonist of the transmigrator should be like this. But I really want to ask a question, even if you pass through and get the golden finger, can you really understand people's hearts? Then you can see from someone else's word or action that someone wants to hurt you? Then immediately preemptively kill others? There is no doubt that God's perspective is cool, but in the Xianxia world, especially in the mortal world view of Xianxia, God's perspective has become an obstacle that greatly affects the author's writing, at least for me. So I chose a native who would persuade many people at the beginning, an aboriginal who grew up from an orphan, an aboriginal protagonist who would make mistakes, correct them, and learn from them."