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I love this story soo much. The only lack in this novel is the writing other thing is just wholesome🫶🏻
The storyline and character development were great and you can actuslly feel the feelings of the characters. I reslly enjoyed reading your novel. However, frequent grammar mistakes have become tripping points or stumbling blocks that hinder your reader from following your flow of your story. May I suggest that you get a native English speaker to help you edit this. So that your English reader will totally enjoy your story without constantly correcting the grammar or idiom usage in some of your paragraphs. Keep on writing. You have potential. Let your creativity and imagination flow. I anticipate your next novel. Please note : Your English translator of your novel should not be your English language editor of your work. This will ensure a better quality and a steadier reading flow. Good Luck and Happy Writing!
There were certain tropes that, I feel, weren't properly explored, most being left forgotten. Some things worked out miraculously, with almost no effort, understandable if there was a prophet or a system spilling all the secrets and answers, but that was not the case. At least the protagonists were distracting enough for me to ignore most of the mistakes.
Its an amazing story, the best i ever read, you will definely fall in love with the characters. The best author ever too, you won regreded reading this story. I [img=recommend]Strong revomendede this.
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I've read this multiple times, and each time I have a hard time putting it down once I start it.
just finished. had so much fun reading it, thank you for your hard work dear author! hope to read more works! I liked the characters very much, the story is interesting too, loved the general and his little wife too 😏 it is a pity it ended so soon 😅
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i liked it. i think the author would benefit from a beta reader. otherwise the story and characters are great. :)
so cute- didn’t stress me with a ridiculous amount of angst. literally love both couples sm. the pacing was good- they didn’t take freaking forever to get together and the conclusion was sweet. 🫶
Very good story, no problem with the world background since it was explained perfectly, i gave onle less star in writing since there were some mistakes but it's normal, and am really impressed but the story. The character were good and over-all they didn't did anything fast it was good and hope everyone thinks the same.
this is a really great book would love a follow up story about all the children maybe a marriage
the most beautiful writen story with really interesting and good plot i've ever read
Very fulfilling story with a lot of drama action love scenes passion.Cheering on the side for the characters. This was a marathon reading . Worth the extra money spent on it.
I know I've said this before, but i cannot stress how much I loved this story. MC is intelligent, calm and very lovable. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]. ML is very very sweet and he expresses himself and his love for ML without letting his ego hold him back, even though he's an emperor. All the characters are too good and drama free. No Angst drama at all. It was exactly the kind of story i was looking for.[img=update][img=update][img=update]. Thank you so much author! Please keep up the good work. Hugs and cheers for you!
I loved this story, I wish there were more stories of this genre with ancient times and submissive males able to get pregnant. I feel like the protagonist forgave the male lead too easily but that’s just my personal opinion, but the story overall was beautiful, this is my third time re-reading this exact novel. 10/10 would recommend.
Such a beautiful and heartwarming story ❤ . All the characters so thoughtful and caring. I really fell in love with this story. I really enjoyed and recommend it to those who want to fall in love with love .
very disappointed . characters lacked depth, the writing is immature, the language is teenage level, story development well there's none. if you want a bad comedy, no brainstormed, or is under 20year old, that's for you.
the story so was so good to read romatic and comedy second leads characters are equally attractive, the story has all emotions that made me to enjoy this 🥰❤️
Aside from the grammar issues and a few mix up between character names causing mild confusion. The story itself is well laid out, and the flow of the story was smooth to read. It also had a charm that many top rated books lack nowadays. All-around, this is a very cute story, and the author deserves so praise for putting it out there. I can feel the heart put into it, and I hope you continue to produce more works like this one.[img=recommend][img=update]
This is such a perfect novel!! Love it so much, thanks author!! Create more of this in the futuree!! 💖💖💖
Wonderful story. I enjoy reading. Only part that could be change. As it doesn’t make sense unless the author trying to do a flashback. The last chapter they had the baby. They were doing things with the baby. However, the first bonus chapter. Is about when they returned to the castle. The baby hasn’t been born yet. Only celebrated. They are waiting. Then the 2nd bonus chapter it’s mention the baby has been born over a year so far. Just feels like at the end of the last chapter about feeding the cake to the baby should’ve been in the bonus chapter since the baby hasn’t been bonus in the 1s bonus chapter. It’s mention in the 2nd bonus chapter.
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The storyline and character development were great and you can actuslly feel the feelings of the characters. I reslly enjoyed reading your novel. However, frequent grammar mistakes have become tripping points or stumbling blocks that hinder your reader from following your flow of your story. May I suggest that you get a native English speaker to help you edit this. So that your English reader will totally enjoy your story without constantly correcting the grammar or idiom usage in some of your paragraphs. Keep on writing. You have potential. Let your creativity and imagination flow. I anticipate your next novel. Please note : Your English translator of your novel should not be your English language editor of your work. This will ensure a better quality and a steadier reading flow. Good Luck and Happy Writing!
There were certain tropes that, I feel, weren't properly explored, most being left forgotten. Some things worked out miraculously, with almost no effort, understandable if there was a prophet or a system spilling all the secrets and answers, but that was not the case. At least the protagonists were distracting enough for me to ignore most of the mistakes.
Its an amazing story, the best i ever read, you will definely fall in love with the characters. The best author ever too, you won regreded reading this story. I [img=recommend]Strong revomendede this.
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I've read this multiple times, and each time I have a hard time putting it down once I start it.
just finished. had so much fun reading it, thank you for your hard work dear author! hope to read more works! I liked the characters very much, the story is interesting too, loved the general and his little wife too 😏 it is a pity it ended so soon 😅
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i liked it. i think the author would benefit from a beta reader. otherwise the story and characters are great. :)
so cute- didn’t stress me with a ridiculous amount of angst. literally love both couples sm. the pacing was good- they didn’t take freaking forever to get together and the conclusion was sweet. 🫶
Very good story, no problem with the world background since it was explained perfectly, i gave onle less star in writing since there were some mistakes but it's normal, and am really impressed but the story. The character were good and over-all they didn't did anything fast it was good and hope everyone thinks the same.
this is a really great book would love a follow up story about all the children maybe a marriage
the most beautiful writen story with really interesting and good plot i've ever read
Very fulfilling story with a lot of drama action love scenes passion.Cheering on the side for the characters. This was a marathon reading . Worth the extra money spent on it.
I know I've said this before, but i cannot stress how much I loved this story. MC is intelligent, calm and very lovable. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]. ML is very very sweet and he expresses himself and his love for ML without letting his ego hold him back, even though he's an emperor. All the characters are too good and drama free. No Angst drama at all. It was exactly the kind of story i was looking for.[img=update][img=update][img=update]. Thank you so much author! Please keep up the good work. Hugs and cheers for you!
I loved this story, I wish there were more stories of this genre with ancient times and submissive males able to get pregnant. I feel like the protagonist forgave the male lead too easily but that’s just my personal opinion, but the story overall was beautiful, this is my third time re-reading this exact novel. 10/10 would recommend.
Such a beautiful and heartwarming story ❤ . All the characters so thoughtful and caring. I really fell in love with this story. I really enjoyed and recommend it to those who want to fall in love with love .
very disappointed . characters lacked depth, the writing is immature, the language is teenage level, story development well there's none. if you want a bad comedy, no brainstormed, or is under 20year old, that's for you.
the story so was so good to read romatic and comedy second leads characters are equally attractive, the story has all emotions that made me to enjoy this 🥰❤️
Aside from the grammar issues and a few mix up between character names causing mild confusion. The story itself is well laid out, and the flow of the story was smooth to read. It also had a charm that many top rated books lack nowadays. All-around, this is a very cute story, and the author deserves so praise for putting it out there. I can feel the heart put into it, and I hope you continue to produce more works like this one.[img=recommend][img=update]
This is such a perfect novel!! Love it so much, thanks author!! Create more of this in the futuree!! 💖💖💖
Wonderful story. I enjoy reading. Only part that could be change. As it doesn’t make sense unless the author trying to do a flashback. The last chapter they had the baby. They were doing things with the baby. However, the first bonus chapter. Is about when they returned to the castle. The baby hasn’t been born yet. Only celebrated. They are waiting. Then the 2nd bonus chapter it’s mention the baby has been born over a year so far. Just feels like at the end of the last chapter about feeding the cake to the baby should’ve been in the bonus chapter since the baby hasn’t been bonus in the 1s bonus chapter. It’s mention in the 2nd bonus chapter.
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