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Writing quality is good. There are only a few errors that don't really affect the flow of the story (like word choice or spelling). Story development doesn't feel rushed, but it also doesn't go to slow. It feels like there's progress every chapter. The characters are interesting, it's nice to see how their interactions with the mc gradually show the differences from who they were in the game. Although updates are pretty far apart, there's still at least one every month, so no complaining here. The world background is very intriguing, and with the newer chapters released, we're starting to get a look into some of its secrets, which is pretty cool. All in all, a much better novel than I was expecting, good stuff author. 👍
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it's a good story from what I have read until know just wishing there were more chapters. uftvtcechw8dhwidh8edh8wdh82dh3id3odj9whdi38jhjrju
pls give more chapters author san just pls don't make us pay . that's all I ask😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Writing quality is good. There are only a few errors that don't really affect the flow of the story (like word choice or spelling). Story development doesn't feel rushed, but it also doesn't go to slow. It feels like there's progress every chapter. The characters are interesting, it's nice to see how their interactions with the mc gradually show the differences from who they were in the game. Although updates are pretty far apart, there's still at least one every month, so no complaining here. The world background is very intriguing, and with the newer chapters released, we're starting to get a look into some of its secrets, which is pretty cool. All in all, a much better novel than I was expecting, good stuff author. 👍
Reveal Spoiler it's a good story from what I have read until know just wishing there were more chapters. uftvtcechw8dhwidh8edh8wdh82dh3id3odj9whdi38jhjrju
pls give more chapters author san just pls don't make us pay . that's all I ask😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭