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Overall it's a good read. Interesting ideas going around here. One thing that only needs some rework is the amount of the larger paragraphs, give paces between them so it's easier to read (especially for mobile readers) Keep writing, author.
The main character really made me laugh. It was written really nicely and I enjoyed the chapters. This novel really has the potential to be something great. I hope to see more!
I laughed at the "I crave explicit sword fighting" cause it's a pun (at least to me it is. My favourite chapter was Chapter 11: Enforcer. I found Shezmu quite interesting. It was like he has this dominating presence and I really liked that. The chapter also made me go "The punishment is death?" and "Wow". I really feel like most of the BL's I have seen on here are not as fantasy-based as I hoped they would be so this was a breath of fresh air. I am saving this to my library and will be keeping an eye on it. All the best and looking forward to reading the upcoming chapters.
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Loved the writing, good grammar great pace can see a lot of potential in this book keep it up .....Recommended. Total score !!! It's an amazing book ,hope to see more books from this author .
great read-- loved the writing style and intricate character relationships. looking forward to how it will all unfold! the daily updates are a PLUS [img=recommend]
A good read. The story itself has potential to be something trully amazing, the plot seems promising through out the chapters and the character's are life like which is good at the reader's interpretation. Overall i liked the story.
Great writing style detailed intricate writing good pace kept me hooked Overall a good read Good to be desired or approved of. "a good quality of life" 2. having the qualities required for a particular role. "the schools here are good
Overall it's a good read. Interesting ideas going around here. One thing that only needs some rework is the amount of the larger paragraphs, give paces between them so it's easier to read (especially for mobile readers) Keep writing, author.
The main character really made me laugh. It was written really nicely and I enjoyed the chapters. This novel really has the potential to be something great. I hope to see more!
I laughed at the "I crave explicit sword fighting" cause it's a pun (at least to me it is. My favourite chapter was Chapter 11: Enforcer. I found Shezmu quite interesting. It was like he has this dominating presence and I really liked that. The chapter also made me go "The punishment is death?" and "Wow". I really feel like most of the BL's I have seen on here are not as fantasy-based as I hoped they would be so this was a breath of fresh air. I am saving this to my library and will be keeping an eye on it. All the best and looking forward to reading the upcoming chapters.
Reveal Spoiler Loved the writing, good grammar great pace can see a lot of potential in this book keep it up .....Recommended. Total score !!! It's an amazing book ,hope to see more books from this author .
great read-- loved the writing style and intricate character relationships. looking forward to how it will all unfold! the daily updates are a PLUS [img=recommend]
A good read. The story itself has potential to be something trully amazing, the plot seems promising through out the chapters and the character's are life like which is good at the reader's interpretation. Overall i liked the story.
Great writing style detailed intricate writing good pace kept me hooked Overall a good read Good to be desired or approved of. "a good quality of life" 2. having the qualities required for a particular role. "the schools here are good