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The comedy was good at the start but got annoying real quick with the fourth wall break like 5 times in each chapter. 1-dimensional mc that just kills so he can power up. He doesn't really have a goal in the story either. Just kills people randomly just to be "evil". A few grammatical mistakes, but you can expect it to be free of mistakes so yeah. This is something that you can read if there's nothing else to read. Might have to turn off your brain for the things the mc does.
The story is great and the mc's skills are quite balanced, the only problem about this story is that the author likes to spoil their book every fifty words! I could turn off paragraph comments but I can't help myself but look at the comments because of my curiosity. Please help stop the author, they're a monster of mass spoiling!!!
It was a great experience to read this story I never knew authors could be so interactive while being funny sadly I could never accomplish the feat myself so thanks for the chance to see it done
The story is pretty fun Intially, it would be great if it there was more world building and actual detail on how the cross over works, but in the latter story it becomes a convoluted mess with multiple timelines a d version of themselves, they shouldn't have gotten That strong that quickly or just get rid of alternate versions of the mc/timelines
I like the idea of rimuru in naruto initially but the author made him a ruthless muderer. Sure being ruthless to enemies is cool but not to innocent children as well. And authors excuse of him being a monster is idiotic. Even the actual rimuru wont kill humans on a whim. It took a war for him to kill humans. So this rimuru is a filthy scum of a murderer.
Wow! That rare instance when a talented writer writes a fic for properties you like, but the story just ain't for you! Otherwise a well written fic for what I read. If this is up your alley, you are quite lucky.
seriously, multiverse time-travel and a lot of god are too confusing. especially when u change the timeline one after another.
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Too much 4th wall breaking 'thoughts' and A/N comments - can't go a single chapter with immersion. Still good writing, but it's not my cup of tea. Solid 3-stars!
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
i would give a proper review but you already know how i feel about this fanfic. it's amazing! and with that being said. ShiroKurosaki out.
It seems like an interesting story, if you like bad mc who do anything to get stronger, the mc sometimes seems like he wants to make friends and sometimes he can kill them in the next moment, otherwise it seems like good writing.
You! yes you the author, hey wanna have a meme war? I haven't read your story but i will maybe in a few more months or maybe a year right now i have a lot of FF i need to catch up
Not gonna lie, I did enjoy the story and I laughed because of how self aware the author and for all its flaws it was a great parody that was fun to read however after a certain point, I just got lost and started asking myself what is even happening for goodness sake
The story might be good for other readers but not for me, what make me dropped this is that the MC just do and say whatever he wants(like crippling someone) as if he was a lord or something, he doesn't even think of consequences and the Author's excuse is cuz he's a CRAZY monster 🤷♂️ What made me dropped this more is the MC wasn't even Rimuru Tempest, not even his personality, the Author clearly just used Tensura's name, great Sage and some characters, for the clicks, it's just one of those CN fanfics where the mc got to Ninja World, got system, get skills, Do academy (well they time skipped it and got to the accepting mission thing already), mc also questioned why would Naruto only cares about the death's of the one he cared and called it hypocrisy like whaaat? like is it bad to not care about the death of your friend's mother but care about your friend's death like wth!? also his goal isn't even told or does he even have one? like he killed all those people, gained magical skill in a ninja world, and got strong for what???
My problem with this story is only the mc, doing villain thing for the sake of villain or 'power' are pretty hollow to me. Itachi, light yagami and even thanos are great villain because they have motive and greater purpose on why they do what they do. But so far this mc is just doing something evil because he can. He probably had already conquer his previous world (tensuru?) and become God to be able to travel to naruto verse. For what purpose? Power? Naruto verse are backwaters in power level compare to his previous world. Sentimentality? He just kill main cast characters with no thought or remorse whatsoever.
Great fanfic and all but I wish there was a sort of prologue chapter because it feels like I’ve been thrown into it very abruptly, if there was a prologue it would make me have a better understanding of how tf he got there and what’s going on
I enjoyed reading it but then the MC randomly ends up splitting into 2 bodies with different personalities and that just bugs me. I don't mind the NC shifting between genders or having different names for his male and female body but splitting into two separate personalities just put me off of it.
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Love the entire story, I dont usually like naruto fanfics, but this one is just superb. The writing style, the comedy, the intelligence, the evilness that somehow isnt cringe. It all mixes together into a near perfect story. The main character is laid back, and really funny, he takes advantage of everything he can, and the author has managed to make a story that I cant bare to not read. You should definitely read this, you wont regret it.
The comedy was good at the start but got annoying real quick with the fourth wall break like 5 times in each chapter. 1-dimensional mc that just kills so he can power up. He doesn't really have a goal in the story either. Just kills people randomly just to be "evil". A few grammatical mistakes, but you can expect it to be free of mistakes so yeah. This is something that you can read if there's nothing else to read. Might have to turn off your brain for the things the mc does.
The story is great and the mc's skills are quite balanced, the only problem about this story is that the author likes to spoil their book every fifty words! I could turn off paragraph comments but I can't help myself but look at the comments because of my curiosity. Please help stop the author, they're a monster of mass spoiling!!!
It was a great experience to read this story I never knew authors could be so interactive while being funny sadly I could never accomplish the feat myself so thanks for the chance to see it done
The story is pretty fun Intially, it would be great if it there was more world building and actual detail on how the cross over works, but in the latter story it becomes a convoluted mess with multiple timelines a d version of themselves, they shouldn't have gotten That strong that quickly or just get rid of alternate versions of the mc/timelines
I like the idea of rimuru in naruto initially but the author made him a ruthless muderer. Sure being ruthless to enemies is cool but not to innocent children as well. And authors excuse of him being a monster is idiotic. Even the actual rimuru wont kill humans on a whim. It took a war for him to kill humans. So this rimuru is a filthy scum of a murderer.
Wow! That rare instance when a talented writer writes a fic for properties you like, but the story just ain't for you! Otherwise a well written fic for what I read. If this is up your alley, you are quite lucky.
seriously, multiverse time-travel and a lot of god are too confusing. especially when u change the timeline one after another.
Is this droped ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓ ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓
Too much 4th wall breaking 'thoughts' and A/N comments - can't go a single chapter with immersion. Still good writing, but it's not my cup of tea. Solid 3-stars!
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
i would give a proper review but you already know how i feel about this fanfic. it's amazing! and with that being said. ShiroKurosaki out.
It seems like an interesting story, if you like bad mc who do anything to get stronger, the mc sometimes seems like he wants to make friends and sometimes he can kill them in the next moment, otherwise it seems like good writing.
You! yes you the author, hey wanna have a meme war? I haven't read your story but i will maybe in a few more months or maybe a year right now i have a lot of FF i need to catch up
Not gonna lie, I did enjoy the story and I laughed because of how self aware the author and for all its flaws it was a great parody that was fun to read however after a certain point, I just got lost and started asking myself what is even happening for goodness sake
The story might be good for other readers but not for me, what make me dropped this is that the MC just do and say whatever he wants(like crippling someone) as if he was a lord or something, he doesn't even think of consequences and the Author's excuse is cuz he's a CRAZY monster 🤷♂️ What made me dropped this more is the MC wasn't even Rimuru Tempest, not even his personality, the Author clearly just used Tensura's name, great Sage and some characters, for the clicks, it's just one of those CN fanfics where the mc got to Ninja World, got system, get skills, Do academy (well they time skipped it and got to the accepting mission thing already), mc also questioned why would Naruto only cares about the death's of the one he cared and called it hypocrisy like whaaat? like is it bad to not care about the death of your friend's mother but care about your friend's death like wth!? also his goal isn't even told or does he even have one? like he killed all those people, gained magical skill in a ninja world, and got strong for what???
My problem with this story is only the mc, doing villain thing for the sake of villain or 'power' are pretty hollow to me. Itachi, light yagami and even thanos are great villain because they have motive and greater purpose on why they do what they do. But so far this mc is just doing something evil because he can. He probably had already conquer his previous world (tensuru?) and become God to be able to travel to naruto verse. For what purpose? Power? Naruto verse are backwaters in power level compare to his previous world. Sentimentality? He just kill main cast characters with no thought or remorse whatsoever.
Great fanfic and all but I wish there was a sort of prologue chapter because it feels like I’ve been thrown into it very abruptly, if there was a prologue it would make me have a better understanding of how tf he got there and what’s going on
I enjoyed reading it but then the MC randomly ends up splitting into 2 bodies with different personalities and that just bugs me. I don't mind the NC shifting between genders or having different names for his male and female body but splitting into two separate personalities just put me off of it.
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Love the entire story, I dont usually like naruto fanfics, but this one is just superb. The writing style, the comedy, the intelligence, the evilness that somehow isnt cringe. It all mixes together into a near perfect story. The main character is laid back, and really funny, he takes advantage of everything he can, and the author has managed to make a story that I cant bare to not read. You should definitely read this, you wont regret it.