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Don't listen to the one star reviews i actually enjoyed the story very much and the things that may seem strange in the first few chapters are explained in the rest of the story so in total: Good story with interesting development. Looking forward for more. Hope you release more of it as soon as possible.
its one of those stories you read while turning off your brain, still its cool. give it a read......mmmmmmmmmejejjdfjjrjeejdjjfjfrjksksoaskjddjrj
well as expert who right all power fanfic it's make me fell insult Superman can become near omnipotent cause his power not sun absorb but radiation absorb ,as you know sun release radiation that help Superman grow stronger because sun release many radiation but earth protect it by release some shield around atmosphere but even that some people get uv Ray ( sub radiation) so just imagine Superman get nuke เฒ _เฒ his power will become like Godzilla when become atomic
Writing 5 stars Story 5 stars Character 5 stars Update speed 1 star World 5 star Just update faster author. I believe in you. So give the next chapter faster will you?
Incrivel muito bom continua essa obra maravilhoso a historia ta incrivel sem cliches augo totalmente diferente e novo gostei parabรฉns ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Me gusta la historia y como se desarrolla los personajes solo espero que tengan un buen final como siempre pienso en las histoeias como estas pero solo espero que me sorprenda el autor para bien xD.
๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐คญ๐๐คญ๐คช๐คญ๐คช๐๐คช๐๐๐คค๐คค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คซ๐๐ฅต๐๐๐พ๐๐๐๐๐๐ฆ๐คก๐ฆ๐๐ค๐ค๐โโ๐ค๐๐คโ๐๐ ๐คฆ๐๐ฉโ๐๐คฆ๐๐งโโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ง๐คฆ๐งโ๐ฆฑ๐จโ๐๐ณโโ๏ธ๐จโ๐ผ๐ณโโ๏ธ๐จโ๐ผ๐ณโโ๏ธ๐จโ๐ผ๐คฐ๐จโ๐ผ๐ฉโ๐ผ๐ฅท๐คตโโ๏ธ๐ฎโโ๏ธ๐ต๐ต๐ค๐ฉโ๐ง๐ค๐จโ๐ฉโ๐ฆโ๐ฆ๐ค๐จโ๐ฆ๐ฌ๐๐ฌ๐คฝโโ๏ธ๐ฃ๐๐ท๐ ๐๐๐๐ฎ๐๐ฆฌ๐๐ฆฃ๐๐๐๐๐๐ฆ๐บ๐ต๐น๐ต๐พ๐น๐ชณ๐ต๐ฆ๐บ๐ฆ๐๐ฆ๐ฆ
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I have not even read the FF BUT just from seeing that sym โSuperman will get a kick from light speedโ knows that Author must be ๐ง ๐ Did he forgot Superman showing multiple feats moving at light speed AND the reason why he isnโt As fast on Earth is literally because if he was to go that fast and some casual People or building will just be Thanos Snapped
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-------------------------------------------------------------- I like this story, grammars pretty good. Keep it up author! --------------------------------------------------------------
Itโs decent, a good read to pass the time but thatโs all. Before you read know that there is a quite a few plot holes and some of the things the mc does is just stupid you will also be confused especially at the start i didnt like this FF for those reasons though mainly the Mcโs behavior, the guy acted like he was stronger than super man and even threatened him which is extremely stupid all he has was light powers, superman was literally stated to be able to move millions of times faster than the speed of light the mc has nothin on him anyway enough rant read or donโt read idc
Itโs really good man, I hope you keep at it and continue to give us quality writing. While there are people complaining about him staying with that chick I totally understand your reasoning. Thanks for the enjoyment.
The story does not make sense, it's good to want to play the big tough but forgot as easily as what this woman did to this body before it's pretty stupid and he has no plan, nothing.
it is not the best fan fiction out there but it is still pretty good. author if you read this you should give some more background to characters even if we know them from the comics and movies.
If you want to read a beta simp MC who is still a slave despite his power, this story is for you.
The chapters lacks plot, also characters are empty as dols. Author, u should add more details In ur story, in order to make the fanfic interesting.
Any way, this piece has good potential and the back ground story leaves space for more details to be added. The pace of the story is good enough considering even though the mc is rapidly getting stronger , I doubt the story's pace would accelerate considering his laidback personality . And also strangely enough, with the smuts going on its actually relaxing for me to read๐๐๐
Will his powere are limited like only light introduce more variety like ice or fire or anything else the romance is going good rather than just going for the crazy or yandere type try to introduce different types of girls and let interact more with the characters of the DC verse more
Shameless Author Review! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It's rubbish, the story doesn't make any sense, of course it could be a funny fanfic but no, just reading the first chapter I knew that this story will be rubbish
I know it's not a great a place to ask but this is the only app i use to socialise online. Anyways, i messaged this girl. She said take it slow and she said I'm special to her and then we continued to flirt with each other. Like what does that mean???
Don't listen to the one star reviews i actually enjoyed the story very much and the things that may seem strange in the first few chapters are explained in the rest of the story so in total: Good story with interesting development. Looking forward for more. Hope you release more of it as soon as possible.
its one of those stories you read while turning off your brain, still its cool. give it a read......mmmmmmmmmejejjdfjjrjeejdjjfjfrjksksoaskjddjrj
well as expert who right all power fanfic it's make me fell insult Superman can become near omnipotent cause his power not sun absorb but radiation absorb ,as you know sun release radiation that help Superman grow stronger because sun release many radiation but earth protect it by release some shield around atmosphere but even that some people get uv Ray ( sub radiation) so just imagine Superman get nuke เฒ _เฒ his power will become like Godzilla when become atomic
Writing 5 stars Story 5 stars Character 5 stars Update speed 1 star World 5 star Just update faster author. I believe in you. So give the next chapter faster will you?
Incrivel muito bom continua essa obra maravilhoso a historia ta incrivel sem cliches augo totalmente diferente e novo gostei parabรฉns ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Me gusta la historia y como se desarrolla los personajes solo espero que tengan un buen final como siempre pienso en las histoeias como estas pero solo espero que me sorprenda el autor para bien xD.
๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐คญ๐๐คญ๐คช๐คญ๐คช๐๐คช๐๐๐คค๐คค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คซ๐๐ฅต๐๐๐พ๐๐๐๐๐๐ฆ๐คก๐ฆ๐๐ค๐ค๐โโ๐ค๐๐คโ๐๐ ๐คฆ๐๐ฉโ๐๐คฆ๐๐งโโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ง๐คฆ๐งโ๐ฆฑ๐จโ๐๐ณโโ๏ธ๐จโ๐ผ๐ณโโ๏ธ๐จโ๐ผ๐ณโโ๏ธ๐จโ๐ผ๐คฐ๐จโ๐ผ๐ฉโ๐ผ๐ฅท๐คตโโ๏ธ๐ฎโโ๏ธ๐ต๐ต๐ค๐ฉโ๐ง๐ค๐จโ๐ฉโ๐ฆโ๐ฆ๐ค๐จโ๐ฆ๐ฌ๐๐ฌ๐คฝโโ๏ธ๐ฃ๐๐ท๐ ๐๐๐๐ฎ๐๐ฆฌ๐๐ฆฃ๐๐๐๐๐๐ฆ๐บ๐ต๐น๐ต๐พ๐น๐ชณ๐ต๐ฆ๐บ๐ฆ๐๐ฆ๐ฆ
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Reveal Spoiler I have not even read the FF BUT just from seeing that sym โSuperman will get a kick from light speedโ knows that Author must be ๐ง ๐ Did he forgot Superman showing multiple feats moving at light speed AND the reason why he isnโt As fast on Earth is literally because if he was to go that fast and some casual People or building will just be Thanos Snapped
-------------------------------------------------------------- Love this, keep it up!--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
don't forget raven don't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget ravendon't forget raven
-------------------------------------------------------------- I like this story, grammars pretty good. Keep it up author! --------------------------------------------------------------
Itโs decent, a good read to pass the time but thatโs all. Before you read know that there is a quite a few plot holes and some of the things the mc does is just stupid you will also be confused especially at the start i didnt like this FF for those reasons though mainly the Mcโs behavior, the guy acted like he was stronger than super man and even threatened him which is extremely stupid all he has was light powers, superman was literally stated to be able to move millions of times faster than the speed of light the mc has nothin on him anyway enough rant read or donโt read idc
Itโs really good man, I hope you keep at it and continue to give us quality writing. While there are people complaining about him staying with that chick I totally understand your reasoning. Thanks for the enjoyment.
The story does not make sense, it's good to want to play the big tough but forgot as easily as what this woman did to this body before it's pretty stupid and he has no plan, nothing.
it is not the best fan fiction out there but it is still pretty good. author if you read this you should give some more background to characters even if we know them from the comics and movies.
If you want to read a beta simp MC who is still a slave despite his power, this story is for you.
The chapters lacks plot, also characters are empty as dols. Author, u should add more details In ur story, in order to make the fanfic interesting.
Any way, this piece has good potential and the back ground story leaves space for more details to be added. The pace of the story is good enough considering even though the mc is rapidly getting stronger , I doubt the story's pace would accelerate considering his laidback personality . And also strangely enough, with the smuts going on its actually relaxing for me to read๐๐๐
Will his powere are limited like only light introduce more variety like ice or fire or anything else the romance is going good rather than just going for the crazy or yandere type try to introduce different types of girls and let interact more with the characters of the DC verse more
Shameless Author Review! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It's rubbish, the story doesn't make any sense, of course it could be a funny fanfic but no, just reading the first chapter I knew that this story will be rubbish
I know it's not a great a place to ask but this is the only app i use to socialise online. Anyways, i messaged this girl. She said take it slow and she said I'm special to her and then we continued to flirt with each other. Like what does that mean???