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Its been like 6 months, this needs to be pushed down off of the popular tag. Its been like 6 months, this needs to be pushed down off of the popular tag.
It was pretty high up in popular filter so I wanted to push it down. It was pretty high up in popular filter so I wanted to push it down. It was pretty high up in popular filter so I wanted to push it down.
Does anyone know why the author deleted this book…. He wrote that he was too busy to write at the moment and that he needed to take a short break then a month later i check back and the book is gone…..the F***
Where?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
So, it's already march.Will you start the novel again or not?Because the chapters have been deleted.If you decided to end it at least end it at voldy resurrection at the end of year 4.I believe you can end it below 10 chapters.
why did u delete all the chapters? ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Can anyone recommend a similar op story with Hermione as the love interest? About this one, the story is pretty good but I can't actually say much as author was typically like teleporting, everything went really fast, while the author kept assuring that he will slow the pace when Fourth year comes and that that will be when the story will actually start....... But.... Just when the Fourth Year actually started..... guess what? The author went on Hiatus!!! I am just speechless........ Well can't do anything about it, please just recommend me a good one.....
What happened? Did he delete the book or is it just a rewrite?------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Why???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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One of the best i have ever read!!! I love this so much!!! I love the characters and the story! They are just so great. I want to read more!!!
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My opinion this story' is typical op MC in Harry Potter world.the MC is a good guy (even though he say he isnt his act say otherwise🙄),he smart(but he not like' knowledge/study but want to use it for his adventege),handsome(from the wish obviolusliy)and i sure the pairing is Hermione (from the anime romance i am felling from them ☺️😚 like that emoji). This just opinion and this is the place for to write review 🙏
its a laid back story about op mc but its still realy nice to read. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Liked the story. Going well. Loved that MC is independent and doesn't share excessive details. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nooooooooooo im begging you dont do that there is so much you can do in all that time with the characters and story 😂 please just take the story slow 🙏
Well it's nice Story....and I like that you didn't put mc like others in Reven claw....I mean, man every fan fic I saw was either on mc in Raven claw and doing this and that experiment. Please continue the story and don't drop it.
it's just way too good in terms of story character design and all ngl. Most of the fanfics just go on with the plot but there is character development here
Typical OP MC paired with good writing . good read for an avid FF HP Reader before you start the Next big one . a little Snack so to say :) ......
This review was written at Ch 13 Writing Quality: The author has mentioned that English is not they're first language, but proves that they are decently fluent. There are some minor errors here and there, most of which is the erratic changes in POV, but I've not found anything more dire than that. 4/5 Story Development: I feel that the pace is decent - not too fast nor too slow. The changes the MC has made hasn't shown any consequences yet as far as I've seen. The story is still in its infancy, so there's not much to say. 4/5 Character Design: As typical of wish fulfillment stories, the MC is a Gary Stu. Of course, that was already expected going in, so it's not a problem to me personally. The MC's family was structured with the use of typical clichés, which I feel the author made use of splendidly. Said family feels organic, and I applaud that. The most important thing though is the changes in Harry. Finally having a friend who is also a great role model does wonders for him. I await what their interactions will be like once Voldemort shows himself. I think the MC's course of action will be to train Harry, because he somehow feels responsible for him. We'll see though. 4/5 Updating Stability: I don't really know what to say here. I literally binged through to the most recent chapter (Ch 13) so I don't have any opinions. From what I've seen, the author uploads at least a chapter every two days, so that's something. 4/5 World Background: Both the easiest and most difficult thing about writing fanfiction is that there is already an established world lore. On one hand, you don't have to worry about making any plot holes that aren't already there and well known to the community. On the other hand, there's a standard that the community all agree is undisputable: and that is history. Most know that Merlin predates Hogwarts by at least a few hundred years. You could argue that Merlin used magic to place items for the MC within Hogwarts, but it's a weak excuse in my opinion. Though it doesn't really detract from the story, so I believe it doesn't matter much. 3/5 TL;DR - It's pretty good. Looking forward to more. 👍
It’s really a good read. It’s a type of fan fiction that I like. I love Harry Potter SI fan fictions. The only downside that I see is that it doesn’t have as much chapters as I would like and the release rate of chapters isn’t the best, but the authors starting to update faster now. I didn’t like some of his wish choices, for example the mutated SSS, he should have asked ROB to allow him to design his own SSS where he combined the best parts of other SSS into a new type of SSS.
ummm good start I guess. I see that it just started looking forward to reading the chapters. It seems like an awesome idea though. Hopefully I'll get to read more soon.
Its been like 6 months, this needs to be pushed down off of the popular tag. Its been like 6 months, this needs to be pushed down off of the popular tag.
It was pretty high up in popular filter so I wanted to push it down. It was pretty high up in popular filter so I wanted to push it down. It was pretty high up in popular filter so I wanted to push it down.
Does anyone know why the author deleted this book…. He wrote that he was too busy to write at the moment and that he needed to take a short break then a month later i check back and the book is gone…..the F***
Where?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
So, it's already march.Will you start the novel again or not?Because the chapters have been deleted.If you decided to end it at least end it at voldy resurrection at the end of year 4.I believe you can end it below 10 chapters.
why did u delete all the chapters? ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Can anyone recommend a similar op story with Hermione as the love interest? About this one, the story is pretty good but I can't actually say much as author was typically like teleporting, everything went really fast, while the author kept assuring that he will slow the pace when Fourth year comes and that that will be when the story will actually start....... But.... Just when the Fourth Year actually started..... guess what? The author went on Hiatus!!! I am just speechless........ Well can't do anything about it, please just recommend me a good one.....
What happened? Did he delete the book or is it just a rewrite?------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Why???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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One of the best i have ever read!!! I love this so much!!! I love the characters and the story! They are just so great. I want to read more!!!
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My opinion this story' is typical op MC in Harry Potter world.the MC is a good guy (even though he say he isnt his act say otherwise🙄),he smart(but he not like' knowledge/study but want to use it for his adventege),handsome(from the wish obviolusliy)and i sure the pairing is Hermione (from the anime romance i am felling from them ☺️😚 like that emoji). This just opinion and this is the place for to write review 🙏
its a laid back story about op mc but its still realy nice to read. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Liked the story. Going well. Loved that MC is independent and doesn't share excessive details. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nooooooooooo im begging you dont do that there is so much you can do in all that time with the characters and story 😂 please just take the story slow 🙏
Well it's nice Story....and I like that you didn't put mc like others in Reven claw....I mean, man every fan fic I saw was either on mc in Raven claw and doing this and that experiment. Please continue the story and don't drop it.
it's just way too good in terms of story character design and all ngl. Most of the fanfics just go on with the plot but there is character development here
Typical OP MC paired with good writing . good read for an avid FF HP Reader before you start the Next big one . a little Snack so to say :) ......
This review was written at Ch 13 Writing Quality: The author has mentioned that English is not they're first language, but proves that they are decently fluent. There are some minor errors here and there, most of which is the erratic changes in POV, but I've not found anything more dire than that. 4/5 Story Development: I feel that the pace is decent - not too fast nor too slow. The changes the MC has made hasn't shown any consequences yet as far as I've seen. The story is still in its infancy, so there's not much to say. 4/5 Character Design: As typical of wish fulfillment stories, the MC is a Gary Stu. Of course, that was already expected going in, so it's not a problem to me personally. The MC's family was structured with the use of typical clichés, which I feel the author made use of splendidly. Said family feels organic, and I applaud that. The most important thing though is the changes in Harry. Finally having a friend who is also a great role model does wonders for him. I await what their interactions will be like once Voldemort shows himself. I think the MC's course of action will be to train Harry, because he somehow feels responsible for him. We'll see though. 4/5 Updating Stability: I don't really know what to say here. I literally binged through to the most recent chapter (Ch 13) so I don't have any opinions. From what I've seen, the author uploads at least a chapter every two days, so that's something. 4/5 World Background: Both the easiest and most difficult thing about writing fanfiction is that there is already an established world lore. On one hand, you don't have to worry about making any plot holes that aren't already there and well known to the community. On the other hand, there's a standard that the community all agree is undisputable: and that is history. Most know that Merlin predates Hogwarts by at least a few hundred years. You could argue that Merlin used magic to place items for the MC within Hogwarts, but it's a weak excuse in my opinion. Though it doesn't really detract from the story, so I believe it doesn't matter much. 3/5 TL;DR - It's pretty good. Looking forward to more. 👍
It’s really a good read. It’s a type of fan fiction that I like. I love Harry Potter SI fan fictions. The only downside that I see is that it doesn’t have as much chapters as I would like and the release rate of chapters isn’t the best, but the authors starting to update faster now. I didn’t like some of his wish choices, for example the mutated SSS, he should have asked ROB to allow him to design his own SSS where he combined the best parts of other SSS into a new type of SSS.
ummm good start I guess. I see that it just started looking forward to reading the chapters. It seems like an awesome idea though. Hopefully I'll get to read more soon.