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Write a reviewI just love this fic, for now it's one of the best dbz fanfics in this site, not too OP but building up, usually all the dbz fics have the mc be a saiyan, be as strong or almost as strong as beerus and learn all the techniques and abilities before Goku even starts his own journey, this mc has a more realistic (taking into account that this is dbz) raise to power, also, the mc is not an evil or a morally grey person, he is kind and helps people, which is refreshing with all the oportunistic and/or evil mc here, I just hope that this doesn't turn into a 'mc is far more powerful than anyone else so he has to fight everyone's battles for them' it would be interesting seeing the mc having a rivalry with goku and vegeta to see who's stronger, and be equally powerful, also this mc is pure human (with some majin cells which give him some of majin buu's abilities) , which is nice for me because I was a little sick of so many saiyans, I like them, but I like a little diversity more, and no harem which is 😩👌, the grammar seems fine to me, but english is not my native language, so I can't be of much help there, hope you don't abandone this fic, this has a lot of potential and you're doing great.
You can feel how much the author loves the Dragon Ball anime. The conversations between the characters are very good and make you feel in the Dragon Ball world. I hope the author continues this story.
The writing is very bad, I just can't stomach the stupidity and shame of every single though and interaction from every character. It's like a very bad middle school acting drama.
The only problem for me is the frequency of updates. I sincerely hope that the author will publish many chapters in the future. If he still has the motivation to continue his wonderful story. Goodluck author!!![img=recommander]
the comedy and the characters are truly faithfull to the original.even though there is not much action you won't get bored...........................
Finally a good dbz fanfic but it's dropped??? @ s s s s s s s z djsjjdndmxksnsbjdmsmdmdmdmkdkdkdkdmxmdmkdksksmdkkdkxkxkxkxkxkkxkxkxkzlzkkskski
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Keep going It's really rare to find a really good fan these days This fan is really like his jewel💎I hope it goes on.........................
This is one of the best dragon ball fic I ever read. Would recommend 10/10 __________________________________________________________________
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É uma boa história. Dá uma sensação de estou assistindo ao Dragon Ball clássico. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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Really great writing and pacing in the story. I love the fact that he has great powers but isn't OP for the world. Please keep writing! ....
a good dragon ball fanfic without system (I was fed up) and the Mc doesn't really have a cheat (but it has advantages) and this well written , And the plot is well done with a touch of freshness in the dialogue between the character (and especially the Mc is not arrogant despite being stronger than these masters)👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I just love this fic, for now it's one of the best dbz fanfics in this site, not too OP but building up, usually all the dbz fics have the mc be a saiyan, be as strong or almost as strong as beerus and learn all the techniques and abilities before Goku even starts his own journey, this mc has a more realistic (taking into account that this is dbz) raise to power, also, the mc is not an evil or a morally grey person, he is kind and helps people, which is refreshing with all the oportunistic and/or evil mc here, I just hope that this doesn't turn into a 'mc is far more powerful than anyone else so he has to fight everyone's battles for them' it would be interesting seeing the mc having a rivalry with goku and vegeta to see who's stronger, and be equally powerful, also this mc is pure human (with some majin cells which give him some of majin buu's abilities) , which is nice for me because I was a little sick of so many saiyans, I like them, but I like a little diversity more, and no harem which is 😩👌, the grammar seems fine to me, but english is not my native language, so I can't be of much help there, hope you don't abandone this fic, this has a lot of potential and you're doing great.
You can feel how much the author loves the Dragon Ball anime. The conversations between the characters are very good and make you feel in the Dragon Ball world. I hope the author continues this story.
The writing is very bad, I just can't stomach the stupidity and shame of every single though and interaction from every character. It's like a very bad middle school acting drama.
The only problem for me is the frequency of updates. I sincerely hope that the author will publish many chapters in the future. If he still has the motivation to continue his wonderful story. Goodluck author!!![img=recommander]
the comedy and the characters are truly faithfull to the original.even though there is not much action you won't get bored...........................
Finally a good dbz fanfic but it's dropped??? @ s s s s s s s z djsjjdndmxksnsbjdmsmdmdmdmkdkdkdkdmxmdmkdksksmdkkdkxkxkxkxkxkkxkxkxkzlzkkskski
************* Good Work! ************** **************************************** *************And I need more! ********* ****************************************
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Keep going It's really rare to find a really good fan these days This fan is really like his jewel💎I hope it goes on.........................
This is one of the best dragon ball fic I ever read. Would recommend 10/10 __________________________________________________________________
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É uma boa história. Dá uma sensação de estou assistindo ao Dragon Ball clássico. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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Sem harém, espero que o autor não deixe cair.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Really great writing and pacing in the story. I love the fact that he has great powers but isn't OP for the world. Please keep writing! ....
a good dragon ball fanfic without system (I was fed up) and the Mc doesn't really have a cheat (but it has advantages) and this well written , And the plot is well done with a touch of freshness in the dialogue between the character (and especially the Mc is not arrogant despite being stronger than these masters)👍👍👍👍👍👍👍