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mark_kiple

hey, i realised i haven't given my thoughts on this book as a whole, so I'll review my own book lol. 1. Story: It depends on how you view it, it's technically slow-paced, but it's fast paced at the same time? idk how to describe it really, it starts at 5000 BCE, so quite far from modern day, and probably 70~80 % of the story takes place before canon, so if you don't like that sort of thing, you should find something else to read. the story is about a guy who's reincarnated as an eternal and he tried to live for thousands of years, seeing history using his own eyes, that's it really, that's the main premise, but a lot happened in between, the MC will 'lose' his sense of humanity as time goes on because of isolation, then gaining it again as he find love in the people he met along the way, this story isn't just about romantic love, it's also about familial love, how Mc deals with his family, and the love-hate relationship that comes with it. I admit, at the start is probably rough and cringy because I just started writing at that time and have no idea on what to do with the story, but it gets better(kind of?). I don't want to go to spoiler teritory here, but, let's be honest, most of you want to read a fanfic if you know who's the fml is, and in this fanfic, it's Thena, and only Thena. 2. World Building: I mean it's marvel. well, it's more history rather than marvel, cause as I said earlier it's 70~80% of the story takes place before canon so history plays a big part in this story. 3. Grammar: I don't speak english actively, so grammar is really hard to monitor sometimes, and I'm too lazy to find someone to proofread. 4. Stability: can't really update daily anymore, I'll just update when I have time 5. Character: Some say that this book doesn't have any character development, some say it has amazing development, and I guess both of them are right? I mean it depends on what 'Character Development' mean to you. if you like instant development, edgy/don't-care-about-people MC, that kind of stuff, than this book's not for you. anyways, if you want other opinions, scroll down, there's a lot of opinion lol. anyway, based on the review I saw, a lot of you dropped around 20ish chapters, and that's fine I guess, but I suggest you read until Chapter 50 until you form your opinion. Oh, and don't spam reviews, it's meaningless and annoying. I've got nothing else to say really, it's not really my best work per se as it's my second attempt at writing that went above expectations, but I'm quite proud of this book, mainly at me driving off the urges to drop it lol. that's it. bye

2yr
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I_DONT_FKN_EXIST

haven't read a shit but i will delete this and make new one after finishing it

19d
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Aria_sakti

love the story, but please could you continue it

3mth
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RICARDO_PISCOYA

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Jekyll_et_Hyde

It has not only good writing, but it has an alternate history due to MC presence, yet the author manages to incorporate it very nicely into the MCU. Sadly it is likely dropped, but only after reaching modern day. If you a history/western mythology nerd and also like fanfics, I would recommend this for you.

11mth
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HELLZHOUND

I really wish you continued this fanfiction. hands down one of my favorites

1yr
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Humbuub

This was surprisingly good, aside from probably being dropped, the writing is great. Story Development was enjoyable, though the ring bearers kinda made the Avengers redundant. The character design was flawed, his personality shouldn't be tampered so his actions should be similar to how humans would act when they suddenly become an eternal. Updates? Last update was a year ago. The World Background seems on point.

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reynelfe

me gustó mucho la historia agradable de leer y te deja con ganas de enterarte del desarrollo del mundo más que de los personajes que en lo personal no me molesta. muy buen FIC

1yr
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IzIm
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**SOME SPOILERS BELOW BEWARE^**⚠️ Honestly it’s a great book, some issues here and there but I had to drop it at chapter 200. The main character and thena have a child, a boy, which becomes the new Mc. Which then just focuses on drama and gwen, his love interest. The main character pluto became too human for my liking, which is not surprising as the chapters progres there’s not much action, mainly drama, timeline progression and slice of life. He had a lot of potential to become stronger and actually focus on defeating the celestial, yet his character development and progression stops there, which is extremely unfortunate because it would’ve been more entertaining seeing him interact with the current timeline hero’s. So, overall this was a pretty disappointing read considering how far I got but anything before chapter 120 was a good read I suppose 🤷‍♂️

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Wise_AF

Great story, character both grow and change with age, world evolves, and we see both consequences of it and outside perspective, nice one, but from the date of last update, it's probably never gonna get finished. 2 subjective problems: It's so long and full of information, characters and subplots, that if you take a break in the middle, then you will inevitably forget a lot of details. Secondly, I personally didn't care about all plot points, savanna or apes arcs kida bored me, yet from perspective of later chapters, are too important to skip. Generally great story that I hope will get proper closure one day.

1yr
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RandomCruelGuy

His stare was creepy. Too creepy. I did not like his stares.

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VoidReader8577

I really enjoyed the story. I especially liked the parts where people started to find out about the eternals, but then everyone's memories got erased unfortunately. I would rate this 5 stars, but I am giving it a 1 star simply because the author has abandoned the story without a word for over a year now. There is no other reason. Its honestly a real disappointment and very unprofessional of the author.

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Autarch_GRIM

mr. author, when will you come back for us. i miss this story.

1yr
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MasterGodKing101

Not worth! Mc doesn't at all act like he is from a higher dimension and the reason given is because he is old and thats fair. But its also boring. Basically the mc never actually got an advantage bc of his knowledge. And now later in the series he barely even shows up. Dropped,

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Mister_Reaper

I just love this story. I'm on vacation right now and I read it like 3 times. I think it's one when not even the best ff that I read this far.

1yr
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DaoisteAojdG

READING C157 STILL CANT FIND BORING PARTS WHY ARE YOU STILL READING THIS REVIEW GO READ THE FF NOW!!!VERY FANTASTIC NOVEL THAT FLESH OUT THE CHARACTER CAN LEARN FANTASY HISTORY AND VERY RECOMENDED TO ALL

1yr
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Imoliann

C'est une bonne histoire, c'est un peu long, certain passage sont totalement inutile ce qui fait que l'histoire peut être pénible à lire. mais je la recommande quand même pour sa qualité d'écriture.

1yr
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Kakarot_D_Uchiha

great world view character development recommended for marvel fansop mc as chapter progresspower level regulated accordingly

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Running_is_advised

honestly this is one of the rare fanfics that i can genuinely enjoy without turning my brain off and i’d love more updates but that isn’t my decision just know that if your going through something their will always be people supporting you

1yr
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Kashikomi

Hey I really loved this book did the author drop this?

1yr
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Black_0261

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1yr
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The_man_The_myth

Very good story sadly it was dropped but definitely good

1yr
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PlagueMan

More or less perfect in terms of world building and story up until around modern times, slightly due to the story mostly being alternative history mixed with marvel. Character personality wise there is a ton of development, both from side cast and MC. It takes a while but it does happen, mc goes from someone who has lost his humanity to regaining due to the influence of those near him aswell as finding love. It's a good story, I don't like the modernt parts due to the focus on his child instead of the main character. I can kind of understand why but reading that amount of chapters for a change of mc is a bit egh. Still I love the story, spent just the perfect amount of time on the other eternals, the mc and the historical periods. Sure it would have been cool if he spent more time and did more cool stuff in between but any more would have slowed the pace down too much. Its in my opinion extremely well paced for what it is and all the storiea it told over the time it did. I hope the author isn't dead so he can complete it though. but in that I am doubtful

1yr
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RexOmaneti

Boring story**************************************""""""""""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

1yr
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Deadauthor

POST MORE NOW!!!!!&$&&@&&&&!!!!

2yr
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MalleShi

Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good.

2yr
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AAGT
LV 4 Badge

Não quero e não vou entrar em detalhes, para ser sincero não gostei da história, mas teve bastante gente que gostou, boa leitura se decidir ler ;D

2yr
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ShamelessGengar

Great novel, came back to see if any new chapters were updated, looks like only a few were added and it may have been dropped? I really hope it hasn't but it says not updated in 2 months...hopefully it's only temporary and author is okay

2yr
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GMK_00

i like this novel It's a lot of fun for readers like me. Until wanting to bring this novel to translate for many novel readers to know about this novel

2yr
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Arion_Sturmklinge

Are you still posting Chapters? I really loved this story! ______________________________________________________________________________________

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2yr
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mark_kiple

hey, i realised i haven't given my thoughts on this book as a whole, so I'll review my own book lol. 1. Story: It depends on how you view it, it's technically slow-paced, but it's fast paced at the same time? idk how to describe it really, it starts at 5000 BCE, so quite far from modern day, and probably 70~80 % of the story takes place before canon, so if you don't like that sort of thing, you should find something else to read. the story is about a guy who's reincarnated as an eternal and he tried to live for thousands of years, seeing history using his own eyes, that's it really, that's the main premise, but a lot happened in between, the MC will 'lose' his sense of humanity as time goes on because of isolation, then gaining it again as he find love in the people he met along the way, this story isn't just about romantic love, it's also about familial love, how Mc deals with his family, and the love-hate relationship that comes with it. I admit, at the start is probably rough and cringy because I just started writing at that time and have no idea on what to do with the story, but it gets better(kind of?). I don't want to go to spoiler teritory here, but, let's be honest, most of you want to read a fanfic if you know who's the fml is, and in this fanfic, it's Thena, and only Thena. 2. World Building: I mean it's marvel. well, it's more history rather than marvel, cause as I said earlier it's 70~80% of the story takes place before canon so history plays a big part in this story. 3. Grammar: I don't speak english actively, so grammar is really hard to monitor sometimes, and I'm too lazy to find someone to proofread. 4. Stability: can't really update daily anymore, I'll just update when I have time 5. Character: Some say that this book doesn't have any character development, some say it has amazing development, and I guess both of them are right? I mean it depends on what 'Character Development' mean to you. if you like instant development, edgy/don't-care-about-people MC, that kind of stuff, than this book's not for you. anyways, if you want other opinions, scroll down, there's a lot of opinion lol. anyway, based on the review I saw, a lot of you dropped around 20ish chapters, and that's fine I guess, but I suggest you read until Chapter 50 until you form your opinion. Oh, and don't spam reviews, it's meaningless and annoying. I've got nothing else to say really, it's not really my best work per se as it's my second attempt at writing that went above expectations, but I'm quite proud of this book, mainly at me driving off the urges to drop it lol. that's it. bye

2yr
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I_DONT_FKN_EXIST

haven't read a shit but i will delete this and make new one after finishing it

19d
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Aria_sakti

love the story, but please could you continue it

3mth
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RICARDO_PISCOYA

Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal Marvel: Atravesando la historia como un eterno Desde del matrimonio con Athenea la historia de arruinó [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

4mth
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Jekyll_et_Hyde

It has not only good writing, but it has an alternate history due to MC presence, yet the author manages to incorporate it very nicely into the MCU. Sadly it is likely dropped, but only after reaching modern day. If you a history/western mythology nerd and also like fanfics, I would recommend this for you.

11mth
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HELLZHOUND

I really wish you continued this fanfiction. hands down one of my favorites

1yr
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Humbuub

This was surprisingly good, aside from probably being dropped, the writing is great. Story Development was enjoyable, though the ring bearers kinda made the Avengers redundant. The character design was flawed, his personality shouldn't be tampered so his actions should be similar to how humans would act when they suddenly become an eternal. Updates? Last update was a year ago. The World Background seems on point.

1yr
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reynelfe

me gustó mucho la historia agradable de leer y te deja con ganas de enterarte del desarrollo del mundo más que de los personajes que en lo personal no me molesta. muy buen FIC

1yr
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IzIm
LV 13 Badge

**SOME SPOILERS BELOW BEWARE^**⚠️ Honestly it’s a great book, some issues here and there but I had to drop it at chapter 200. The main character and thena have a child, a boy, which becomes the new Mc. Which then just focuses on drama and gwen, his love interest. The main character pluto became too human for my liking, which is not surprising as the chapters progres there’s not much action, mainly drama, timeline progression and slice of life. He had a lot of potential to become stronger and actually focus on defeating the celestial, yet his character development and progression stops there, which is extremely unfortunate because it would’ve been more entertaining seeing him interact with the current timeline hero’s. So, overall this was a pretty disappointing read considering how far I got but anything before chapter 120 was a good read I suppose 🤷‍♂️

1yr
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Wise_AF

Great story, character both grow and change with age, world evolves, and we see both consequences of it and outside perspective, nice one, but from the date of last update, it's probably never gonna get finished. 2 subjective problems: It's so long and full of information, characters and subplots, that if you take a break in the middle, then you will inevitably forget a lot of details. Secondly, I personally didn't care about all plot points, savanna or apes arcs kida bored me, yet from perspective of later chapters, are too important to skip. Generally great story that I hope will get proper closure one day.

1yr
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RandomCruelGuy

His stare was creepy. Too creepy. I did not like his stares.

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1yr
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VoidReader8577

I really enjoyed the story. I especially liked the parts where people started to find out about the eternals, but then everyone's memories got erased unfortunately. I would rate this 5 stars, but I am giving it a 1 star simply because the author has abandoned the story without a word for over a year now. There is no other reason. Its honestly a real disappointment and very unprofessional of the author.

1yr
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Autarch_GRIM

mr. author, when will you come back for us. i miss this story.

1yr
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MasterGodKing101

Not worth! Mc doesn't at all act like he is from a higher dimension and the reason given is because he is old and thats fair. But its also boring. Basically the mc never actually got an advantage bc of his knowledge. And now later in the series he barely even shows up. Dropped,

1yr
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Mister_Reaper

I just love this story. I'm on vacation right now and I read it like 3 times. I think it's one when not even the best ff that I read this far.

1yr
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DaoisteAojdG

READING C157 STILL CANT FIND BORING PARTS WHY ARE YOU STILL READING THIS REVIEW GO READ THE FF NOW!!!VERY FANTASTIC NOVEL THAT FLESH OUT THE CHARACTER CAN LEARN FANTASY HISTORY AND VERY RECOMENDED TO ALL

1yr
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Imoliann

C'est une bonne histoire, c'est un peu long, certain passage sont totalement inutile ce qui fait que l'histoire peut être pénible à lire. mais je la recommande quand même pour sa qualité d'écriture.

1yr
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Kakarot_D_Uchiha

great world view character development recommended for marvel fansop mc as chapter progresspower level regulated accordingly

img
1yr
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Running_is_advised

honestly this is one of the rare fanfics that i can genuinely enjoy without turning my brain off and i’d love more updates but that isn’t my decision just know that if your going through something their will always be people supporting you

1yr
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Kashikomi

Hey I really loved this book did the author drop this?

1yr
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Black_0261

*************************************🎉🎉🎉🎉🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹**************************************🎉🎉🎉🌹🌹🌹🌹🎉🎉🎉🌹🌹***********************************

1yr
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The_man_The_myth

Very good story sadly it was dropped but definitely good

1yr
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PlagueMan

More or less perfect in terms of world building and story up until around modern times, slightly due to the story mostly being alternative history mixed with marvel. Character personality wise there is a ton of development, both from side cast and MC. It takes a while but it does happen, mc goes from someone who has lost his humanity to regaining due to the influence of those near him aswell as finding love. It's a good story, I don't like the modernt parts due to the focus on his child instead of the main character. I can kind of understand why but reading that amount of chapters for a change of mc is a bit egh. Still I love the story, spent just the perfect amount of time on the other eternals, the mc and the historical periods. Sure it would have been cool if he spent more time and did more cool stuff in between but any more would have slowed the pace down too much. Its in my opinion extremely well paced for what it is and all the storiea it told over the time it did. I hope the author isn't dead so he can complete it though. but in that I am doubtful

1yr
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RexOmaneti

Boring story**************************************""""""""""",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

1yr
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Deadauthor

POST MORE NOW!!!!!&$&&@&&&&!!!!

2yr
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MalleShi

Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good.

2yr
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AAGT
LV 4 Badge

Não quero e não vou entrar em detalhes, para ser sincero não gostei da história, mas teve bastante gente que gostou, boa leitura se decidir ler ;D

2yr
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ShamelessGengar

Great novel, came back to see if any new chapters were updated, looks like only a few were added and it may have been dropped? I really hope it hasn't but it says not updated in 2 months...hopefully it's only temporary and author is okay

2yr
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GMK_00

i like this novel It's a lot of fun for readers like me. Until wanting to bring this novel to translate for many novel readers to know about this novel

2yr
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Arion_Sturmklinge

Are you still posting Chapters? I really loved this story! ______________________________________________________________________________________

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2yr
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