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Write a reviewThe story as a whole is enticing and the writer’s work is ironed and clean, leaving very few errors. The story has extreme potential, and the worldbuilding the author does is, to me, masterful. And that’s just in 4 chapters. I know you might think I’m blowing smoke, but trust me, its worth a read. Keep up the good work, author.
Well, there are only 4 chapters out so i will say what I think so far. First of all, the writing style is very good and your errors were rather little. Secondly, your story so far intrigues me to know where the story is heading to and so far the MC is really my type of guy. Anyways good novel, keep writing, I look forward to reading.
The story as a whole is enticing and the writer’s work is ironed and clean, leaving very few errors. The story has extreme potential, and the worldbuilding the author does is, to me, masterful. And that’s just in 4 chapters. I know you might think I’m blowing smoke, but trust me, its worth a read. Keep up the good work, author.
Well, there are only 4 chapters out so i will say what I think so far. First of all, the writing style is very good and your errors were rather little. Secondly, your story so far intrigues me to know where the story is heading to and so far the MC is really my type of guy. Anyways good novel, keep writing, I look forward to reading.