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The translation sucks, the story sucks, even the character sucks. I mean, whats the point of having saitama as the power of the MC if he doesnt have all his power? Having "elementary version" as you call it can only be called little strength. At best its just the same as the serum strength. Then I dont get why you need to put him as saitama. The point of having saitama here is the invincibility and the intense OPness with everything one punched.
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personally i like it but would work on the writing quality since it has a many errors. but yeah its good.
sometimes i wish i can read mandarin(Chinese )and joponic(Japanese) just to see how this came to be is it normal or just some mistakes made by the translator.
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the translation suxxx. the story should be good if someone could iron out the wrinkles and I mean the translation, pronunciation, and sentence structure.
it's a pain to read just like other Chinese fanfics so I'm not going to read anymore. it has a thug calling the mc little monkey and he calls Spiderman's spidy sense spider telepathy
It's about what you would expect from a chinese fanfic it just doesn't feel natural for the marvel world, grammar is ok and definitely needs editing but still readable.
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Bad grammer, random weird chinese references and lines takes up a large part of MC’s lines, dumb mc, nonsensical dialogue. Everything you typically find in a bad chinese fic.
The translation sucks, the story sucks, even the character sucks. I mean, whats the point of having saitama as the power of the MC if he doesnt have all his power? Having "elementary version" as you call it can only be called little strength. At best its just the same as the serum strength. Then I dont get why you need to put him as saitama. The point of having saitama here is the invincibility and the intense OPness with everything one punched.
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personally i like it but would work on the writing quality since it has a many errors. but yeah its good.
sometimes i wish i can read mandarin(Chinese )and joponic(Japanese) just to see how this came to be is it normal or just some mistakes made by the translator.
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the translation suxxx. the story should be good if someone could iron out the wrinkles and I mean the translation, pronunciation, and sentence structure.
it's a pain to read just like other Chinese fanfics so I'm not going to read anymore. it has a thug calling the mc little monkey and he calls Spiderman's spidy sense spider telepathy
It's about what you would expect from a chinese fanfic it just doesn't feel natural for the marvel world, grammar is ok and definitely needs editing but still readable.
is the Original or Translation? .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
Bad grammer, random weird chinese references and lines takes up a large part of MC’s lines, dumb mc, nonsensical dialogue. Everything you typically find in a bad chinese fic.