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one of the best novels, although at the beginning the development of the MC is a bit inconsistent in the future everything fits, you only have to endure 47 chapters of little development of the MC, the only thing I can point out is that the development came very late and surely due to this the novel lost readers.
At first the story does not convince me, but the more it progressed it got better, if you don't like the story at the beginning I recommend you not to leave it since it gets more interesting while you continue reading, congratulations to the author and I hope you do not leave this story . PD: sorry if it is not understood, this was translated by google.[img=update]
Meh I thought it would be amazing, but it wasn't. One day you lose, and the next you lose even more. This fic wasn't for me, but you might like it
I had read this story before and saw that new chapters were released, I was wondering why I dropped this story. Then I remembered, zero character development, I see that the author expresses emotions in the characters, but there was development of the world and the MC, it looks like a child wants to write A story with him as the main character.
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I don't usually comment but this is such a bad fanfic I wasted my time because comments said that it will become good after 50 chaps. But this just keeps getting worse. Don't waste your time on this 😔
not interesting at all , not attachment to mc as a reader , nothing like a ninja , few chapters after mc fought madara uchiha , but find himself in trouble every time . . . world becoming unknown somehow , unknown clan , unknown people. not interesting at all . . no character attention expect MC . MC has no character to himself , no goals . no directions. meaningless or none POV . no awesome moments.
Ta książka jest świetna dla osób lubiących mc który nir podrywa wszystkich ładnych dziewczyn(brak haremu) nie jest on ani złoczyńcą ani bohaterem który wybawia cały świta. Nie jest też op. Ja osobiście kocham te historie łatwo można utożsamić się z bohaterem. Kilkanaście pierwszych rozdziałów nie jest za bardzo ciekawych ale potem robi się ciekawiej. Serdecznie polecam. Niestety nie wszędzie mogę dac 5 gwiazdek ponieważ teraz ta historia utknęła na 159 rozdziałach od 6 miesięcy niecierpliwie oczekuje na aktualizacje
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Congratulations on your first 100+ chapter work! I appeciate ur effort for making that first step. Aight now we get down to business... MY ISSUE WITH THE NOVEL: 1. No need fancy synonyms -- when there's still typo even with the simplest of words, it's best to just keep it simple. There's no extra points in using uncommonly used words in random places. Usually ppl use it when things get dramatic, but if it showed up randomly out of no where, it just become confusing instead. (English doesn't seem to be ur first language so not gonna dive into grammar, u'll improve as u read more novels.) 2. Where's the #overpowered tag??? -- MC started strong and system always gives what the MC needs. Plus, the system is just outright BROKEN -- everyone is valued the same no matter weak or strong, young or old. Then why not just kill normal civilians in the outskirt?? Then move to bandits, all of a sudden there's a kage-level powerhouse hunting anything that moves in the outskirts of all villages... Then every hidden village becomes alert of all the massacre... And keep working from there. (Honestly? If u did this, it would've made a better story than the current one) 3. Character design -- MC feels like inside of a game, and there's 0 development. Other character? I forgot there're other characters, they all sound so generic it's not worth remembering. That's why overall this is a 3/5 4. Lastly, the plot holes & the weak opening -- perhaps the plot holes only happen in the beginning. But in the world of webnovel "Opening is KING". If u couldn't even come up with a strong opening, reader's interest will drop like flies. (Based on common sense, Authors have all the time in the world to create opening chapters. Then, build up from that foundation within a scheduled time.) This is why a weak opening is just an easy sign that the novel WILL be short-lived. --- Hope, u keep improving on ur writing... A little polish here and there, and I won't be surprise if I see ur name again in the top rankings.
Esta es una de las mejores Fanfiction de naruto donde no se termina arrastrando a los pie de los de más y Es independiente gracias por el trabajo en esta novela GRACIAS
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author really said at the last updated chaprter calm before the storm and had to take a break like AOT animators lol Anyway, one of the best stories I've read about Naruto World.
chaps up to 50 should be edited, most personality makes 0 sense and is kind of annoying, its very inconsistent up until 50 or so, its annoying that mc is a normal guy who has never used a sword before is able to just use one and beat a guy who's been training with swords since he was like 5, especially the "I decapitate ___ in a single strike, his body falls lifelessly on the floor" BS, especially since mc shouldn't know how to even sheath a sword (much harder than expected), I can't stress this enough, he has never used a sword and does all of this stuff flawlessly, its supposed to be a realistic ish sword fighting webnovel with some chakra in there. if its the main thing of the novel do it right
Very good ☺️☺️☺️☺️ are you doing..,..................................... Мне очень понравились игровые приставки ....................................... ....................................... ....................................... .......................................
Would've been somewhat enjoyable if the main character's development was realistic. But no. The guy went from a egoistic social reject to killing children in a matter of seconds and he didn't feel anything. And what bugs me is that you didn't even try. Such a dissapointment but honestly I'm not surprised at this point.
The writing quality is pretty bad due to poor translation or otherwise, add this together with the poor wording and it makes for a hard read. Most of the story boils down to people shouting "who are you!? So powerful!? Unphatomable (unfathomable)!?" or the mc just runs till his system (instantly) throws him some bs way to win. Got to chapter 35 hoping it was just teething issues before I couldn't read anymore. Overall 2/10 **
anti spam de bot de 5 estrelas ............................................. ......................................... Eu sinto que perdi meu tempo aqui, não leia.
The story was ok to me, I think the Mc was brain dead in some parts of the first 80+ chapters of the story so far, but I’ve seen a lot worse honestly, he doesn't use the system the way I would think he would, I thought he would buy all the op Jutsu an stuff after killing Madara (he gets 800 mill points off of killing Madara) then goes savage mode on Hashirama and the leaf killing everyone to get points which he would use to get stronger with his system unlocking more features an stuff like that
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I really like this novel, mainly because it is one of the only fan-fics from the first war period, the writing is good and the development is good too. very good
feels like the author has to many ideas so the character development becomes basically nonexistent due to how many ideas he's shoving in the fanfic Story by itself is pretty good just don't expect much intelligence do to the chaos of the whole thing
Overall this is a good story but I have some questions. 1.why is the Mc not using his points, because he could buy wood style right now and it would be so much easier. 2. Why are kekkei genkai like vegetation release not available in the system shop? 3. Why are there no dojutsu in the shop (which I love by the way, because in every Naruto fic everyone always focuses on dojutsus nothing else) Ps: I love the story pls keep going.
мое мнение по этому поводу 1) история очень быстро развивается 2) она нуждается в более подробном написании 3) нуждается в большем развитии персонажа (мс)
Me encanta la historia, el principio fue algo raro, pero ahora no puedo parar de leer, por favor actualiza más seguido!!! Me hice una cuenta solo para comentar.
I didn't like Tobirama's character, I just feel that she's different. She lacks prestige, and I feel that Madara died a little early. I would have preferred more fights between him and the hero of the story, but I think that the next one is better and he is also the most beautiful.
this is a great read, I would give it 5 if it wasn't for the beginning, the beginning of the story kind of jumpy here and there, but it gets better as you read further, you can see as the author becomes better and better at writing, I say this tho I have no experience writing myself but, this is a review as a reader not an author. I highly recommend giving this work of Fan Fiction a chance.
1. MC is really stupid and has very little character development. 2.The MC's personality keeps changing.(multiple personalities). 3.The fights and the story's development seem very forced. 4.The MC is very reliant on the system.
Very nicee...it can be better...kentaros character could be better...and overall very nice and maybe different POV's..,...................................
only one 5 star which is the world background since its a fanfic, anyways there is 0 i repeat 0! character development WHOLE STORY, be it chapter 1 to chapter 90+ his naivety NEVER CHANGES. He's like a retard who transmigrated to naruto.
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Author here This is a shameless review of myself. As some of you may have noticed, I am not a native English speaker. I will do my best to enrich my vocabulary. My story development is going pretty well from what I see, a lot of you seem to enjoy it. The character design could sometimes be better but I will give myself five stars haha. I try to post new chapters everyday, sometimes I will post one, two or maybe three. It will happen that I don't post on some days:( As for the world background, I think that im doing a pretty nice job portraying the warring states period, what do you guys think? Anyways, I hope that you guys stick with me to follow the adventures of Kentaro. Peace:)
one of the best novels, although at the beginning the development of the MC is a bit inconsistent in the future everything fits, you only have to endure 47 chapters of little development of the MC, the only thing I can point out is that the development came very late and surely due to this the novel lost readers.
At first the story does not convince me, but the more it progressed it got better, if you don't like the story at the beginning I recommend you not to leave it since it gets more interesting while you continue reading, congratulations to the author and I hope you do not leave this story . PD: sorry if it is not understood, this was translated by google.[img=update]
Meh I thought it would be amazing, but it wasn't. One day you lose, and the next you lose even more. This fic wasn't for me, but you might like it
I had read this story before and saw that new chapters were released, I was wondering why I dropped this story. Then I remembered, zero character development, I see that the author expresses emotions in the characters, but there was development of the world and the MC, it looks like a child wants to write A story with him as the main character.
more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/more plz/
I don't usually comment but this is such a bad fanfic I wasted my time because comments said that it will become good after 50 chaps. But this just keeps getting worse. Don't waste your time on this 😔
not interesting at all , not attachment to mc as a reader , nothing like a ninja , few chapters after mc fought madara uchiha , but find himself in trouble every time . . . world becoming unknown somehow , unknown clan , unknown people. not interesting at all . . no character attention expect MC . MC has no character to himself , no goals . no directions. meaningless or none POV . no awesome moments.
Ta książka jest świetna dla osób lubiących mc który nir podrywa wszystkich ładnych dziewczyn(brak haremu) nie jest on ani złoczyńcą ani bohaterem który wybawia cały świta. Nie jest też op. Ja osobiście kocham te historie łatwo można utożsamić się z bohaterem. Kilkanaście pierwszych rozdziałów nie jest za bardzo ciekawych ale potem robi się ciekawiej. Serdecznie polecam. Niestety nie wszędzie mogę dac 5 gwiazdek ponieważ teraz ta historia utknęła na 159 rozdziałach od 6 miesięcy niecierpliwie oczekuje na aktualizacje
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Congratulations on your first 100+ chapter work! I appeciate ur effort for making that first step. Aight now we get down to business... MY ISSUE WITH THE NOVEL: 1. No need fancy synonyms -- when there's still typo even with the simplest of words, it's best to just keep it simple. There's no extra points in using uncommonly used words in random places. Usually ppl use it when things get dramatic, but if it showed up randomly out of no where, it just become confusing instead. (English doesn't seem to be ur first language so not gonna dive into grammar, u'll improve as u read more novels.) 2. Where's the #overpowered tag??? -- MC started strong and system always gives what the MC needs. Plus, the system is just outright BROKEN -- everyone is valued the same no matter weak or strong, young or old. Then why not just kill normal civilians in the outskirt?? Then move to bandits, all of a sudden there's a kage-level powerhouse hunting anything that moves in the outskirts of all villages... Then every hidden village becomes alert of all the massacre... And keep working from there. (Honestly? If u did this, it would've made a better story than the current one) 3. Character design -- MC feels like inside of a game, and there's 0 development. Other character? I forgot there're other characters, they all sound so generic it's not worth remembering. That's why overall this is a 3/5 4. Lastly, the plot holes & the weak opening -- perhaps the plot holes only happen in the beginning. But in the world of webnovel "Opening is KING". If u couldn't even come up with a strong opening, reader's interest will drop like flies. (Based on common sense, Authors have all the time in the world to create opening chapters. Then, build up from that foundation within a scheduled time.) This is why a weak opening is just an easy sign that the novel WILL be short-lived. --- Hope, u keep improving on ur writing... A little polish here and there, and I won't be surprise if I see ur name again in the top rankings.
Esta es una de las mejores Fanfiction de naruto donde no se termina arrastrando a los pie de los de más y Es independiente gracias por el trabajo en esta novela GRACIAS
Reveal Spoiler author really said at the last updated chaprter calm before the storm and had to take a break like AOT animators lol Anyway, one of the best stories I've read about Naruto World.
chaps up to 50 should be edited, most personality makes 0 sense and is kind of annoying, its very inconsistent up until 50 or so, its annoying that mc is a normal guy who has never used a sword before is able to just use one and beat a guy who's been training with swords since he was like 5, especially the "I decapitate ___ in a single strike, his body falls lifelessly on the floor" BS, especially since mc shouldn't know how to even sheath a sword (much harder than expected), I can't stress this enough, he has never used a sword and does all of this stuff flawlessly, its supposed to be a realistic ish sword fighting webnovel with some chakra in there. if its the main thing of the novel do it right
Very good ☺️☺️☺️☺️ are you doing..,..................................... Мне очень понравились игровые приставки ....................................... ....................................... ....................................... .......................................
Would've been somewhat enjoyable if the main character's development was realistic. But no. The guy went from a egoistic social reject to killing children in a matter of seconds and he didn't feel anything. And what bugs me is that you didn't even try. Such a dissapointment but honestly I'm not surprised at this point.
The writing quality is pretty bad due to poor translation or otherwise, add this together with the poor wording and it makes for a hard read. Most of the story boils down to people shouting "who are you!? So powerful!? Unphatomable (unfathomable)!?" or the mc just runs till his system (instantly) throws him some bs way to win. Got to chapter 35 hoping it was just teething issues before I couldn't read anymore. Overall 2/10 **
anti spam de bot de 5 estrelas ............................................. ......................................... Eu sinto que perdi meu tempo aqui, não leia.
The story was ok to me, I think the Mc was brain dead in some parts of the first 80+ chapters of the story so far, but I’ve seen a lot worse honestly, he doesn't use the system the way I would think he would, I thought he would buy all the op Jutsu an stuff after killing Madara (he gets 800 mill points off of killing Madara) then goes savage mode on Hashirama and the leaf killing everyone to get points which he would use to get stronger with his system unlocking more features an stuff like that
Reveal Spoiler I really like this novel, mainly because it is one of the only fan-fics from the first war period, the writing is good and the development is good too. very good
feels like the author has to many ideas so the character development becomes basically nonexistent due to how many ideas he's shoving in the fanfic Story by itself is pretty good just don't expect much intelligence do to the chaos of the whole thing
Overall this is a good story but I have some questions. 1.why is the Mc not using his points, because he could buy wood style right now and it would be so much easier. 2. Why are kekkei genkai like vegetation release not available in the system shop? 3. Why are there no dojutsu in the shop (which I love by the way, because in every Naruto fic everyone always focuses on dojutsus nothing else) Ps: I love the story pls keep going.
мое мнение по этому поводу 1) история очень быстро развивается 2) она нуждается в более подробном написании 3) нуждается в большем развитии персонажа (мс)
Me encanta la historia, el principio fue algo raro, pero ahora no puedo parar de leer, por favor actualiza más seguido!!! Me hice una cuenta solo para comentar.
I didn't like Tobirama's character, I just feel that she's different. She lacks prestige, and I feel that Madara died a little early. I would have preferred more fights between him and the hero of the story, but I think that the next one is better and he is also the most beautiful.
this is a great read, I would give it 5 if it wasn't for the beginning, the beginning of the story kind of jumpy here and there, but it gets better as you read further, you can see as the author becomes better and better at writing, I say this tho I have no experience writing myself but, this is a review as a reader not an author. I highly recommend giving this work of Fan Fiction a chance.
1. MC is really stupid and has very little character development. 2.The MC's personality keeps changing.(multiple personalities). 3.The fights and the story's development seem very forced. 4.The MC is very reliant on the system.
Very nicee...it can be better...kentaros character could be better...and overall very nice and maybe different POV's..,...................................
only one 5 star which is the world background since its a fanfic, anyways there is 0 i repeat 0! character development WHOLE STORY, be it chapter 1 to chapter 90+ his naivety NEVER CHANGES. He's like a retard who transmigrated to naruto.
nice .......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Is there a delay in the update for this Fanfic ?..…....?.................... ......................... ............, ........... ......... ....... ..... ... .. .
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Author here This is a shameless review of myself. As some of you may have noticed, I am not a native English speaker. I will do my best to enrich my vocabulary. My story development is going pretty well from what I see, a lot of you seem to enjoy it. The character design could sometimes be better but I will give myself five stars haha. I try to post new chapters everyday, sometimes I will post one, two or maybe three. It will happen that I don't post on some days:( As for the world background, I think that im doing a pretty nice job portraying the warring states period, what do you guys think? Anyways, I hope that you guys stick with me to follow the adventures of Kentaro. Peace:)