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writing - understandable 5โญ story - Idk what to write but i feel giving it a 5โญ character - Best Mc ๐ฟ 5โญ update - 200+ 5โญ world - idk what to write but i will give it a 5โญ Thank For The Fanfic Author ๐๐ฟ
Pretty good. I like that this story has an ending though. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
who are the waifus and Hey Translator. Im confused. you are translating this novel, or you are modifying this novel? i ask this because of the author notes that you have written. I found this whole novel in the MTLNOVEl dot C0M. I checked the first few chapters and they are the same. also... be a god and write lemons.
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๐ฎโค๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐ฎโคโค๐ซโน๐โน๐ซ๐๐๐๐ฎ๐โค๐โค๐ซ๐ซ๐คฉ๐ซ๐คฉ๐ซ๐คฉ๐ซ๐ซ๐ฎ๐ซ๐คฉ๐ซ๐ซ๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐๐คฉ๐๐โค๐๐๐คฉ๐โค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐โค๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐โค๐โค๐ฅฐโค๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
The truth leaves me speechless the novel, already with 152 chapters all interconnected, is one of the best of any web novel. Although the "System" trap may seem absurd at first, the plot in general is incredible, each chapter can only generate discontent, but it is like a chain, one after another, you will be stuck reading. Among others, there are rat children who read without understanding and complain about the development of the scene, but those children do not know anything, if they read several more chapters they will understand why and there are scenes that will boil your blood but they have a purpose and in general It's like the first xianxia novels that were good, not like the current ones that are basophical in general, ATG falls short with this version.
ะั ัะตะฝะฐ ัะฐะบ ะฟะพะนะดัั ะธะปะธ ะฝะต ะฝะฐะดะพ ะฑัะดะตั ะฝะฐ ัะฐะผะพะผ ะดะตะปะต ัะฐะนัะต ััะพ ะดะตะปะพ ััะพ ะปะฐัะฐ ะฒะฐะฝ ะฟะธั ะธ ะณะตะฝะตัะฐัะพั ะปะฐัะฐ ะฒะธะดะต ะธ ะปะฐัะฐ ะฒะฐะฝ ะฒ ะฝะตะผ ัะถะต ะฑัะปะธ ะฒ ะธ ัะตะทะพะฝะต ะฝะฐ ะฟะตัะฒะพะผ ััััะบะพะผ ะฝะฐ ะธ ะบะฐะฝะฐะปะต ะฝะฐ ะฒัะตั ะผะฐัะธะฝะฐั ะณะพัะพะดะฐ ะณะพัะพะดะฐ ะณะพัะพะดะฐ ะะพัะบะฒั ะธ ะฝะฐ ะฒ ะ ะตะบั ะฒ ัะฒัะทะธ ะฒัะตะน ะพะฑะปะฐััะธ ะ ะค ะณะพัะพะดะพะผ ะดะพ ัะป ะฒัะตะผะตะฝะธ ะฒ ะบะพะผะฐะฝะดะต ะกะจะ ะฝะต ะฟะพะฝะธะผะฐั ะผะพะณั ะธะปะธ ัะธะปัะฝะพ
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
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Alright honest judgment here, I really liked the start. How the MC grows slowly and the plot is so different from other FFs. But it was destroyed halfway with the destruction of the Holy Family with our MC strength being at bronze rank 2... I mean bruh, I know you said our MC has true cultivation, but what is that OP power??? Even MC's story of being a colonizer is fine, but not to mess up the entire Glory of MC's body cradle. Well... Just like that, I stopped reading at CH 30.
Very good! hope you keep going until the end! _-_--_-_-_--_-_-_-_---_-_-_--_-_-_--_-_-_-_--_-_--_--------_-_-_-_--_-_-_-__-_--_-_-_-_--_
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Es bueno supongo... Pero definitivamente no es de mi agrado, puede que le guste a mucha gente pero para mi no, se siente algo 'vacรญo' no se como explicarlo. Pero leela, tal vez te guste.
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I really liked the start of this fic. But then there was the PAIRING and I don't like her very much. m
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Grammar is terrible, lots of mistakes and misspelling. Use grammerly and go over all your chapters. I otherwise enjoyed the fic, spelling just never got better. Iโll check in later to see if the spelling is fixed
This fanfic is an interesting read and can help you spend your time with it. At least try it and you decide. ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ
bruh i like the novel, but too many informations(like powers, scriptures and stuff) there, i kinda find it messy and dont want to waste too many brain cells reading as im reading for leisure, thanks for the novel though
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Well, I just binge-watched the story, and while MC was a retard, I really liked the story, in between the story I really was disappointed in MC but in the end the story turned out for better, the Author had skipped too much content in some of the last stories, it could've been even more interesting, but oh well! The Novel is already completed and it cannot be changed again. Author improved his writing techniques in this story very well. Well now I am thinking to read MURIM story. ND at last I wanna say thank you for giving us a good Book, Hope you write more exiting novels. Have a good day!!๐
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writing - understandable 5โญ story - Idk what to write but i feel giving it a 5โญ character - Best Mc ๐ฟ 5โญ update - 200+ 5โญ world - idk what to write but i will give it a 5โญ Thank For The Fanfic Author ๐๐ฟ
Pretty good. I like that this story has an ending though. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
who are the waifus and Hey Translator. Im confused. you are translating this novel, or you are modifying this novel? i ask this because of the author notes that you have written. I found this whole novel in the MTLNOVEl dot C0M. I checked the first few chapters and they are the same. also... be a god and write lemons.
Is this a Translation????? [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
๐ฎโค๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐ฎโคโค๐ซโน๐โน๐ซ๐๐๐๐ฎ๐โค๐โค๐ซ๐ซ๐คฉ๐ซ๐คฉ๐ซ๐คฉ๐ซ๐ซ๐ฎ๐ซ๐คฉ๐ซ๐ซ๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐๐คฉ๐๐โค๐๐๐คฉ๐โค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐โค๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐โค๐โค๐ฅฐโค๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
The truth leaves me speechless the novel, already with 152 chapters all interconnected, is one of the best of any web novel. Although the "System" trap may seem absurd at first, the plot in general is incredible, each chapter can only generate discontent, but it is like a chain, one after another, you will be stuck reading. Among others, there are rat children who read without understanding and complain about the development of the scene, but those children do not know anything, if they read several more chapters they will understand why and there are scenes that will boil your blood but they have a purpose and in general It's like the first xianxia novels that were good, not like the current ones that are basophical in general, ATG falls short with this version.
ะั ัะตะฝะฐ ัะฐะบ ะฟะพะนะดัั ะธะปะธ ะฝะต ะฝะฐะดะพ ะฑัะดะตั ะฝะฐ ัะฐะผะพะผ ะดะตะปะต ัะฐะนัะต ััะพ ะดะตะปะพ ััะพ ะปะฐัะฐ ะฒะฐะฝ ะฟะธั ะธ ะณะตะฝะตัะฐัะพั ะปะฐัะฐ ะฒะธะดะต ะธ ะปะฐัะฐ ะฒะฐะฝ ะฒ ะฝะตะผ ัะถะต ะฑัะปะธ ะฒ ะธ ัะตะทะพะฝะต ะฝะฐ ะฟะตัะฒะพะผ ััััะบะพะผ ะฝะฐ ะธ ะบะฐะฝะฐะปะต ะฝะฐ ะฒัะตั ะผะฐัะธะฝะฐั ะณะพัะพะดะฐ ะณะพัะพะดะฐ ะณะพัะพะดะฐ ะะพัะบะฒั ะธ ะฝะฐ ะฒ ะ ะตะบั ะฒ ัะฒัะทะธ ะฒัะตะน ะพะฑะปะฐััะธ ะ ะค ะณะพัะพะดะพะผ ะดะพ ัะป ะฒัะตะผะตะฝะธ ะฒ ะบะพะผะฐะฝะดะต ะกะจะ ะฝะต ะฟะพะฝะธะผะฐั ะผะพะณั ะธะปะธ ัะธะปัะฝะพ
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐I need more ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Alright honest judgment here, I really liked the start. How the MC grows slowly and the plot is so different from other FFs. But it was destroyed halfway with the destruction of the Holy Family with our MC strength being at bronze rank 2... I mean bruh, I know you said our MC has true cultivation, but what is that OP power??? Even MC's story of being a colonizer is fine, but not to mess up the entire Glory of MC's body cradle. Well... Just like that, I stopped reading at CH 30.
Very good! hope you keep going until the end! _-_--_-_-_--_-_-_-_---_-_-_--_-_-_--_-_-_-_--_-_--_--------_-_-_-_--_-_-_-__-_--_-_-_-_--_
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Es bueno supongo... Pero definitivamente no es de mi agrado, puede que le guste a mucha gente pero para mi no, se siente algo 'vacรญo' no se como explicarlo. Pero leela, tal vez te guste.
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I really liked the start of this fic. But then there was the PAIRING and I don't like her very much. m
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Grammar is terrible, lots of mistakes and misspelling. Use grammerly and go over all your chapters. I otherwise enjoyed the fic, spelling just never got better. Iโll check in later to see if the spelling is fixed
This fanfic is an interesting read and can help you spend your time with it. At least try it and you decide. ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ
bruh i like the novel, but too many informations(like powers, scriptures and stuff) there, i kinda find it messy and dont want to waste too many brain cells reading as im reading for leisure, thanks for the novel though
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Well, I just binge-watched the story, and while MC was a retard, I really liked the story, in between the story I really was disappointed in MC but in the end the story turned out for better, the Author had skipped too much content in some of the last stories, it could've been even more interesting, but oh well! The Novel is already completed and it cannot be changed again. Author improved his writing techniques in this story very well. Well now I am thinking to read MURIM story. ND at last I wanna say thank you for giving us a good Book, Hope you write more exiting novels. Have a good day!!๐