adventure time.. the player's story

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Golias

I liked the story, despite some inconsistencies, really interesting, I wish you had informed that it is a multiversal journey, I'm not a big fan of this type of travel story but I can swallow it, I hope it doesn't take too long to get back to adventure time.

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Arbestos

I ain’t wanna put 40 but whatever this is good

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vazmin_Mixolog5

The story is amazing!!.....................

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Indra_lord

it's a good read........................

LV 4

Indra_lord

a Good fanfic and a good read I recommend.

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Haise_Sasaki1

Straight up reading the original and translating each word by yourself gets you a better translation

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Pokepokemon1

autocritica :V........................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 1

Elfantasma6347

No está mal la historia pero parece que le falta mucho espíritu para que la obra tenga más unión con el público y no es por ser grosero pero parece que se apresuró demasiado a mejorar y checar al personaje pero es bueno no increíble pero bueno

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lutov

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