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Write a reviewWriting is similar to composing music, or painting. Here, is the painting, the book, that gotten my attention because every detail etched well from one scene to another-- immersive. The use of words are concise which allows more space for extra description in most paragraphs, unlike most novels that lacks better wording either in long or short paragraphs. Besides that, I did got confused when reading some few lines but I got to understand them when rereading the lines, no biggie. Though, I know only fair amount about criticizing the ways of literature, but I know when I enjoy reading. Unless, if it is regarding character designs, then that is my forte. The character designs in this book are refreshing and excellent due to the fact that most novels involving fantasy (yes, I love using comparison) would either give the subspecies characters an almost splitting image design of existing characters like the ones from monster musume. In contrast, some examples from this author's book which are Alga with her authentic mushrooms, and Euglith with her 'smoky tears'. For world background, the original hero's world is intriguing while the other is similar to ours but the fact that there are also bits of supernatural jeopardy in Leah's world, leaves a large of potential background that the author can use. Other than that, Is it enjoyable? yes, and will also be for readers who loves angst, sweet genderbender and indulge in the dark side of humanity. Take a small read, and I ensure it will be a lovely ride. By the way, Leah best waifu, and I'm looking forward to your career, author TaffyCaster
It looks cool, it looks exactly like what I expected someone like Taffy to make, I am interested by how everything is introduced, the dialogue feels like an older book like that of TLTR author Tolkien, a few phrasings could get be improved but all in all it's cool. Recommended, i'mma put it in my collection.
Do the author's own review even count into it? Feels like a sham. But regardless, if you're writing a review, I ask you to be honest while writing it. Even if it's a one-star, your submission is appreciated.
Immaculate of darkness, had cursed the hero the be replaced by a housewife's soul at the moment of his end. There might be two MC: The housewife within the hero's body, the hero within the housewife's body, a little bit serious tone but amazingly written. The writing was too good for webnovel, the character are interesting and I'm liking the fungal lady already. Heavily reccomended, 20 out of 10, I just need more chapter really
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential
Writing is similar to composing music, or painting. Here, is the painting, the book, that gotten my attention because every detail etched well from one scene to another-- immersive. The use of words are concise which allows more space for extra description in most paragraphs, unlike most novels that lacks better wording either in long or short paragraphs. Besides that, I did got confused when reading some few lines but I got to understand them when rereading the lines, no biggie. Though, I know only fair amount about criticizing the ways of literature, but I know when I enjoy reading. Unless, if it is regarding character designs, then that is my forte. The character designs in this book are refreshing and excellent due to the fact that most novels involving fantasy (yes, I love using comparison) would either give the subspecies characters an almost splitting image design of existing characters like the ones from monster musume. In contrast, some examples from this author's book which are Alga with her authentic mushrooms, and Euglith with her 'smoky tears'. For world background, the original hero's world is intriguing while the other is similar to ours but the fact that there are also bits of supernatural jeopardy in Leah's world, leaves a large of potential background that the author can use. Other than that, Is it enjoyable? yes, and will also be for readers who loves angst, sweet genderbender and indulge in the dark side of humanity. Take a small read, and I ensure it will be a lovely ride. By the way, Leah best waifu, and I'm looking forward to your career, author TaffyCaster
It looks cool, it looks exactly like what I expected someone like Taffy to make, I am interested by how everything is introduced, the dialogue feels like an older book like that of TLTR author Tolkien, a few phrasings could get be improved but all in all it's cool. Recommended, i'mma put it in my collection.
Do the author's own review even count into it? Feels like a sham. But regardless, if you're writing a review, I ask you to be honest while writing it. Even if it's a one-star, your submission is appreciated.
Immaculate of darkness, had cursed the hero the be replaced by a housewife's soul at the moment of his end. There might be two MC: The housewife within the hero's body, the hero within the housewife's body, a little bit serious tone but amazingly written. The writing was too good for webnovel, the character are interesting and I'm liking the fungal lady already. Heavily reccomended, 20 out of 10, I just need more chapter really
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential