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There is simply nothing wrong with it the connections the power ups and drawbacks explained in the anime were used to show a different MC with and without Quirk I truly love the fanfic and hope that it doesn't gets dropped
i really like how plot holes get fixed and the new worlds all work in a good way with the mc having good involvement also really like how you fit the mcs personality to his situation from, energetic loud and arrogant in mha due to his quirk, more calculative in the naruto arc and his wild nature in the one piece arc due to him being the son of kaido
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Well i just read it and it was good in sense just why you dropped it you could have continued and could have skipped divinity part for a while and send him to marvel universe the only training he did was during my hero academia arc and rest was all from gaccha , well i can't complain well good one
1. Mc gets too op in Naruto arc,like it can't even be described as just being op.With haki and awakened drakness devil fruit he can basically one hit kill otsusuki. 2. Mc stupidly joins akatsuki to help capture tailed beast and start 4th ninja war and with all the killing he does,he is still some how a good person. Well im skipping to One piece arc, cuz i found this from that tag, Hopefully writing gets better馃ぎ馃槱
1. Mc gets too op in Naruto arc,like it can't even be described as just being op.With haki and awakened drakness devil fruit he can basically one hit kill otsusuki. 2. Mc stupidly joins akatsuki to help capture tailed beast and start 4th ninja war and with all the killing he does,he is still some how a good person. Well im skipping to One piece arc, cuz i found this from that tag, Hopefully writing gets better馃い
The start was amazing with the BNHA story of a older brother for a female todroki whith him basically being a rengoku in the BNHA world, loved it. then it show him dead again and I thought he was going to be reincarnated again in BNHA as a kid and do the whole gets a system becomes more powerful in a BNHA that has an increased difficulty then you had it where he went to another world and I was shooketh amazing story and fantastic character he was rengoku because his quirk in the BNHA world smart and calculated because he didn't grow attached to anyone in the naruto world and wild in one pice do to being kaidos kid then got depressed and serious when his friends died. amazing character development
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Literal mente creaste una quimera de personaje sistemas de energ铆a conflictivas habilidades repetidas con diferentes nombres. l铆neas de sangr茅 in relevante . Acumular poderes fut铆les.
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You know when i started reading it up to chapter 9 it was good the whole plot then he dies and the mc communicates with the ROB it was disappointing cause what's the point of multiverse and then that path it killed it i wont lie. But if you stayed true with that same world of My hero academia and developed more plots and story line it would be really good after i found out about multiverse and then adding system for whatever reason it killed the whole story I'm sure there a people who agree. So if you restart that MHA it'll be good up to you though.
I just finished the Naruto arc and decided to stop reading for now. This review will be of everything before the one piece arc. So, the story starts in BNHA world, honestly, you can probably skip it and not miss anything, he leaves that world at chapter 11 or something like that and he never returns to it or does it make any big play, it would have probably been important if the story wasn't dropped, but since it is he will never go back to that world, just read the first chapter and you can skip it if you want or you can give it a read, it isn't bad, I would give it 3 stars. As for the Naruto arc, I did enjoy it for the most part, but there were things I didn't enjoy. First, the MC does stuff but it pretty much changes nothing to the plot, even when MC defeated Naruto a few time, it didn't make Naruto stronger or anything, the plot is the same until the end of the war where MC starts doing something, there were also like 6 chapters of just recap of the story, which can be good for people who don't remember or didn't watch Naruto, but it is annoying for people that did, since I read them all just to see if there are any changes, and thinking about the people that had to wait days just for recap chapters, those are the problems I had with that arc, though I did enjoy most of it. And then there is the end of the arc which made me drop the story, MC had a fight for divinity which he lost, and by losing it he got a punishment, MC got a nerf where all of his powers were scattered and he had to find them and get them back, which is something I hate, then his pet (Future wife) also was separated from him and he had to find her too, that one chapter honestly ruined the whole thing for me and made me drop it. I give this fan fic (Before the one piece arc) 3.6 stars, although I enjoyed most of it, it still had big problems so I couldn't give it a 4. Give this fan fic a try, you might enjoy it, if you don't enjoy it than you can always just drop it.
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This is garbage... He has a gacha system where the cost of using it is Free or quests that we don't even see until mc finish a quest... Every gatcha has package of things (skills bloodlines etc) and those things have packages... and those packages can have MORE PACKAGES. CHAPTERS ARE BASICALLY A SYSTEM REWARD MESSAGES, THAT'S IT!!!! GARBAGE!
No me gusta mucho la personalidad de mc, es demasiado arrogante y la t铆pica trama que envuelve todo de manera que mc tenga m谩s opciones de remojar el churro.
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The story is about Sanemi who is starting his journey to become the next R.O.B. . He gets reincarnetad in different Anime Worlds in which he can grow stronger and collect Karma(doing good deads/ killing people with bad Karma). He does have a system but he is no slave to the sytem, there are Achievement which give him rewards and the daily Gacha where he can get bloodlines, abilitys, weapons, food... . He is growing as an character trough the differnt expierences he gets while traveling and isn't like most of the mainstream MC's out there. Overall: a good story, ok world building, good development, and good character design
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Well, just frustrating, the MC just jumps from multiverse to multiverse to catch the world's protagonist, the title should be "The Greatest Masochist in the Omniverse". Honestly, I don't know if it changes after the Naruto arc, because I didn't even want to read it anymore. Apart from the plot, the writing quality is good, the interactions are 'raw', no better words to describe it.
The writing style is annoying to read. Other than that, I have no problem because I stop at ch 3. Wordeordword2o4r2ordwordwordwo4dwordwordwordwrodwrodwrod. Ndbjdjsbsbsksnsbsjsjsjbsjssjjjjdjdijdbsnsksidjsbdjdjdjdbdjdidhdjdndndmjdidhshebehshdudiidjdbshdudjdhdjdodi88didu
No come莽o 茅 bem diferente e at茅 inovador, mas eu acho que o mundo de Naruto foi o pico m谩ximo de poder do protagonista. no mundo de one Pierce ele perde quase tudo, um nerf gigantesco, e ele tem reencarna no mundo de one pierce s贸 com as memorias. Eu acho que o autor tentou fazer um protagonista shonem, mas quando ele nerfou o mc, me deu uma sensa莽茫o de o Naruto sem a Kurama ou um Sasuke cego, o gr谩fico de poder do protagonista caiu. Eu t么 esperando o protagonista voltar ao poder total. (Cap铆tulo da mirineFord)
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The following contains spoilers so read at your won discretion... The story starts with MHA than Naruto and currently at one piece. The story is good but not great. why? Cause there are a lot of (system, god and power level tier) shenanigans that makes it more confusing( atleast for me). And making MC OP in Naruto than nerfing him in one piece distorts the flow which makes it less appealing as a story. I personally really hate the nerf part in any fic. Hope the author learns from this experience. And improves as a author. So conclusion.....although the fic is imbalanced in some part, it is a good read. I finished it within a day. So try it and find out yourself.
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I didn't read the whole thing but dropped it because there is one thing that I hate about this story is the system in it. so let me says this I hate system that just gives the mc too much different abilities while he still mastering the ones he already have or in some cases gives him powers that he is never going to use because he has too much already so it becomes pointless. other than that the fic is not bad the grammar is a bit good but yeah the system also talks most of the word count in each chapter
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Too good for me, I don't know how there are people who don't like this story. i love you tobi (I would like it to go to Tensura, great anime and many possibilities).
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if you are tired of usual fanfics, give it a try. I was surprized when MC vs league of villains fight ended like that. things got a little slow at end of naruto arc but author finished it in few chapters as per reader demand. I'm curious to see new developments in BnHA. 1 suggession - I feel like we need more interaction of MC and various characters.
i dont like characters like the mc ive read up to chap 12 and i dislike this the MC is just too nice for my taste i couldve just ignored this but im writing this review so people dont waste their time reading this if they dislike idiot mcs but other then that good luck
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Best BNHA story at the start so far very unique intro and idea. The moves and attack description is also good the info dump is not really much and slight info given to us helps the reader's theories. I hope it continues. May the Lord bless the author.
There is simply nothing wrong with it the connections the power ups and drawbacks explained in the anime were used to show a different MC with and without Quirk I truly love the fanfic and hope that it doesn't gets dropped
i really like how plot holes get fixed and the new worlds all work in a good way with the mc having good involvement also really like how you fit the mcs personality to his situation from, energetic loud and arrogant in mha due to his quirk, more calculative in the naruto arc and his wild nature in the one piece arc due to him being the son of kaido
Reveal Spoiler Well i just read it and it was good in sense just why you dropped it you could have continued and could have skipped divinity part for a while and send him to marvel universe the only training he did was during my hero academia arc and rest was all from gaccha , well i can't complain well good one
1. Mc gets too op in Naruto arc,like it can't even be described as just being op.With haki and awakened drakness devil fruit he can basically one hit kill otsusuki. 2. Mc stupidly joins akatsuki to help capture tailed beast and start 4th ninja war and with all the killing he does,he is still some how a good person. Well im skipping to One piece arc, cuz i found this from that tag, Hopefully writing gets better馃ぎ馃槱
1. Mc gets too op in Naruto arc,like it can't even be described as just being op.With haki and awakened drakness devil fruit he can basically one hit kill otsusuki. 2. Mc stupidly joins akatsuki to help capture tailed beast and start 4th ninja war and with all the killing he does,he is still some how a good person. Well im skipping to One piece arc, cuz i found this from that tag, Hopefully writing gets better馃い
The start was amazing with the BNHA story of a older brother for a female todroki whith him basically being a rengoku in the BNHA world, loved it. then it show him dead again and I thought he was going to be reincarnated again in BNHA as a kid and do the whole gets a system becomes more powerful in a BNHA that has an increased difficulty then you had it where he went to another world and I was shooketh amazing story and fantastic character he was rengoku because his quirk in the BNHA world smart and calculated because he didn't grow attached to anyone in the naruto world and wild in one pice do to being kaidos kid then got depressed and serious when his friends died. amazing character development
Reveal Spoiler Literal mente creaste una quimera de personaje sistemas de energ铆a conflictivas habilidades repetidas con diferentes nombres. l铆neas de sangr茅 in relevante . Acumular poderes fut铆les.
nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf nerf
You know when i started reading it up to chapter 9 it was good the whole plot then he dies and the mc communicates with the ROB it was disappointing cause what's the point of multiverse and then that path it killed it i wont lie. But if you stayed true with that same world of My hero academia and developed more plots and story line it would be really good after i found out about multiverse and then adding system for whatever reason it killed the whole story I'm sure there a people who agree. So if you restart that MHA it'll be good up to you though.
I just finished the Naruto arc and decided to stop reading for now. This review will be of everything before the one piece arc. So, the story starts in BNHA world, honestly, you can probably skip it and not miss anything, he leaves that world at chapter 11 or something like that and he never returns to it or does it make any big play, it would have probably been important if the story wasn't dropped, but since it is he will never go back to that world, just read the first chapter and you can skip it if you want or you can give it a read, it isn't bad, I would give it 3 stars. As for the Naruto arc, I did enjoy it for the most part, but there were things I didn't enjoy. First, the MC does stuff but it pretty much changes nothing to the plot, even when MC defeated Naruto a few time, it didn't make Naruto stronger or anything, the plot is the same until the end of the war where MC starts doing something, there were also like 6 chapters of just recap of the story, which can be good for people who don't remember or didn't watch Naruto, but it is annoying for people that did, since I read them all just to see if there are any changes, and thinking about the people that had to wait days just for recap chapters, those are the problems I had with that arc, though I did enjoy most of it. And then there is the end of the arc which made me drop the story, MC had a fight for divinity which he lost, and by losing it he got a punishment, MC got a nerf where all of his powers were scattered and he had to find them and get them back, which is something I hate, then his pet (Future wife) also was separated from him and he had to find her too, that one chapter honestly ruined the whole thing for me and made me drop it. I give this fan fic (Before the one piece arc) 3.6 stars, although I enjoyed most of it, it still had big problems so I couldn't give it a 4. Give this fan fic a try, you might enjoy it, if you don't enjoy it than you can always just drop it.
Reveal Spoiler This is garbage... He has a gacha system where the cost of using it is Free or quests that we don't even see until mc finish a quest... Every gatcha has package of things (skills bloodlines etc) and those things have packages... and those packages can have MORE PACKAGES. CHAPTERS ARE BASICALLY A SYSTEM REWARD MESSAGES, THAT'S IT!!!! GARBAGE!
No me gusta mucho la personalidad de mc, es demasiado arrogante y la t铆pica trama que envuelve todo de manera que mc tenga m谩s opciones de remojar el churro.
Reveal Spoiler The story is about Sanemi who is starting his journey to become the next R.O.B. . He gets reincarnetad in different Anime Worlds in which he can grow stronger and collect Karma(doing good deads/ killing people with bad Karma). He does have a system but he is no slave to the sytem, there are Achievement which give him rewards and the daily Gacha where he can get bloodlines, abilitys, weapons, food... . He is growing as an character trough the differnt expierences he gets while traveling and isn't like most of the mainstream MC's out there. Overall: a good story, ok world building, good development, and good character design
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Reveal Spoiler Well, just frustrating, the MC just jumps from multiverse to multiverse to catch the world's protagonist, the title should be "The Greatest Masochist in the Omniverse". Honestly, I don't know if it changes after the Naruto arc, because I didn't even want to read it anymore. Apart from the plot, the writing quality is good, the interactions are 'raw', no better words to describe it.
The writing style is annoying to read. Other than that, I have no problem because I stop at ch 3. Wordeordword2o4r2ordwordwordwo4dwordwordwordwrodwrodwrod. Ndbjdjsbsbsksnsbsjsjsjbsjssjjjjdjdijdbsnsksidjsbdjdjdjdbdjdidhdjdndndmjdidhshebehshdudiidjdbshdudjdhdjdodi88didu
No come莽o 茅 bem diferente e at茅 inovador, mas eu acho que o mundo de Naruto foi o pico m谩ximo de poder do protagonista. no mundo de one Pierce ele perde quase tudo, um nerf gigantesco, e ele tem reencarna no mundo de one pierce s贸 com as memorias. Eu acho que o autor tentou fazer um protagonista shonem, mas quando ele nerfou o mc, me deu uma sensa莽茫o de o Naruto sem a Kurama ou um Sasuke cego, o gr谩fico de poder do protagonista caiu. Eu t么 esperando o protagonista voltar ao poder total. (Cap铆tulo da mirineFord)
Reveal Spoiler Good book ........................................................................................................................................................................ . . . . . .
The following contains spoilers so read at your won discretion... The story starts with MHA than Naruto and currently at one piece. The story is good but not great. why? Cause there are a lot of (system, god and power level tier) shenanigans that makes it more confusing( atleast for me). And making MC OP in Naruto than nerfing him in one piece distorts the flow which makes it less appealing as a story. I personally really hate the nerf part in any fic. Hope the author learns from this experience. And improves as a author. So conclusion.....although the fic is imbalanced in some part, it is a good read. I finished it within a day. So try it and find out yourself.
Reveal Spoiler I didn't read the whole thing but dropped it because there is one thing that I hate about this story is the system in it. so let me says this I hate system that just gives the mc too much different abilities while he still mastering the ones he already have or in some cases gives him powers that he is never going to use because he has too much already so it becomes pointless. other than that the fic is not bad the grammar is a bit good but yeah the system also talks most of the word count in each chapter
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Too good for me, I don't know how there are people who don't like this story. i love you tobi (I would like it to go to Tensura, great anime and many possibilities).
my stomach hurts, me duele el est贸mago, my stomach hurts, me duele el est贸mago, my stomach hurts, me duele el est贸mago, my stomach hurts, me duele el est贸mago, my stomach hurts, me duele el est贸mago, my stomach hurts, me duele el est贸mago,
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5 stars just continue reading it has its own good and bad but that bad will become good sooner or later[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
if you are tired of usual fanfics, give it a try. I was surprized when MC vs league of villains fight ended like that. things got a little slow at end of naruto arc but author finished it in few chapters as per reader demand. I'm curious to see new developments in BnHA. 1 suggession - I feel like we need more interaction of MC and various characters.
i dont like characters like the mc ive read up to chap 12 and i dislike this the MC is just too nice for my taste i couldve just ignored this but im writing this review so people dont waste their time reading this if they dislike idiot mcs but other then that good luck
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Best BNHA story at the start so far very unique intro and idea. The moves and attack description is also good the info dump is not really much and slight info given to us helps the reader's theories. I hope it continues. May the Lord bless the author.