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You should really improve your English, this story may have potential but with so many mistakes, it leaves a very bad aftertaste. So I think this story needs a rewrite and I especially don't recommend it to people like to have it clean.
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this is your shameless author give the 5 star review I know there is alot of spelling problems sorry about it anyway English is not my first language I will fix it in the future
Sorry, I don't enjoy bashing but this story is completely unreadable, I mean there is a mistake every three words, I could not continue reading after chapter 4, although I enjoyed the jokes.
You should really improve your English, this story may have potential but with so many mistakes, it leaves a very bad aftertaste. So I think this story needs a rewrite and I especially don't recommend it to people like to have it clean.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
this is your shameless author give the 5 star review I know there is alot of spelling problems sorry about it anyway English is not my first language I will fix it in the future
Sorry, I don't enjoy bashing but this story is completely unreadable, I mean there is a mistake every three words, I could not continue reading after chapter 4, although I enjoyed the jokes.