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Writing Quality Good Stability of Updates Good Story Development Good Character Design Good World Background Good ..........................
I give you five star young man keep on writing!!! I give you five star young man keep on writing!!! I give you five star young man keep on writing!!!
So, I usually do not even read on this app, I mostly just write because it’s my passion, but I saw this book and it looked really interesting. Welp. It is. I love when writers open up with a strong and impactful chapter right off the boot, and I hate when it’s those basic “my name is so and so and I’m so and so years old and I look like so and so and this is my life” it’s boorish and boring to read. I love when you set the world and describe the looks of characters through the story itself, not just plainly explaining it, and I can say without a doubt, the opening chapter on this book is phenomenal. It sets up the stage and explains what the world is like, what the people live through, how it all began, gets your intrigued with “what the heck did that?” (No spoiler as to what I’m talking about did what) but it is extremely good and a very intriguing plot idea. Stop reading this review and read the story.. don’t waste precious time. This book is worth the read.
I like the review and the comment. Just getting started..... I believe it going to be a great novel couple with the cultivation stuff.👍👌😘
This is a great novel with an suberb world building, The cliche is barely minimum and the story is awesome , the author focus on every character present , very less mistakes which will annoy you but one thing that i would like to change about this novel is making only one main character and making him a lil highlighted that would make this a polished gem really a very good xanxia loving this the updating stability need to be increased a lil ( I would recommend you to try this novel if you are a fan of xanxia thanks
Great story, if only you would update the chapters faster it would be better. Also explain the past of the heirs twin brother more, for example why was he locked up.
Has potential .. ............................................................................................................................. .|.
Hey guys, for those who are like me and scrolled down to the review section before reading a book, then I just wanted to say that I just realized that my tags are currently not showing. So I'll post them here until the situation is sorted out: Action, Adventure Cultivation, Gods Martial Arts, Academy Slowromance, Multiplerealms Immortals, Betrayal Dao Comprehension, Soul Power Sibling Rivalry, Two Protags Comedic Undertones, Plot Twits Bloodline Ability. So here they are, basically all my fav tags in one novel. I hope you lovely readers find some you like too. See ya!! ~waves gb~
~This is not really a review, but eh..~ Hey there you lovely readers, author TSETH here. If you're a new reader of my novel I just wanted to say welcome!! From some of the chapters in the novel, you guys could probably tell that this book has already been published before, so yeah, this is a new account that was created, and why this happened is explained in chapter 28 so read till there to find out. The previous account was closing in at 100,000 views so it's kind of a bummer to have to start over from scratch, but hey! since my old lovely readers enjoyed the novel that much in the past, I'm sure you guys will love it. I think those numbers can easily be reached again and then be surpassed with the help of you lovely new readers. So what are you lovely readers waiting for? Go and read my novel!! Go and read your novel!! Go and read our novel!! ~waves gb~
Frankly pleasantly surprised. I have read dozens of xianxia and this one is by far in my top 3. It changes a lot compared to other just already by the fact that there are 2 mc. Following the history of the 2 sets is very interesting. Not much to say except go read the story. Author I see you haven't published a chapter for a while on this story... Do you want to abandon this story?
Don't judge me, there was only one review until I get an official rating.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Reveal Spoiler Writing Quality Good Stability of Updates Good Story Development Good Character Design Good World Background Good ..........................
I give you five star young man keep on writing!!! I give you five star young man keep on writing!!! I give you five star young man keep on writing!!!
So, I usually do not even read on this app, I mostly just write because it’s my passion, but I saw this book and it looked really interesting. Welp. It is. I love when writers open up with a strong and impactful chapter right off the boot, and I hate when it’s those basic “my name is so and so and I’m so and so years old and I look like so and so and this is my life” it’s boorish and boring to read. I love when you set the world and describe the looks of characters through the story itself, not just plainly explaining it, and I can say without a doubt, the opening chapter on this book is phenomenal. It sets up the stage and explains what the world is like, what the people live through, how it all began, gets your intrigued with “what the heck did that?” (No spoiler as to what I’m talking about did what) but it is extremely good and a very intriguing plot idea. Stop reading this review and read the story.. don’t waste precious time. This book is worth the read.
I like the review and the comment. Just getting started..... I believe it going to be a great novel couple with the cultivation stuff.👍👌😘
This is a great novel with an suberb world building, The cliche is barely minimum and the story is awesome , the author focus on every character present , very less mistakes which will annoy you but one thing that i would like to change about this novel is making only one main character and making him a lil highlighted that would make this a polished gem really a very good xanxia loving this the updating stability need to be increased a lil ( I would recommend you to try this novel if you are a fan of xanxia thanks
Great story, if only you would update the chapters faster it would be better. Also explain the past of the heirs twin brother more, for example why was he locked up.
Has potential .. ............................................................................................................................. .|.
Hey guys, for those who are like me and scrolled down to the review section before reading a book, then I just wanted to say that I just realized that my tags are currently not showing. So I'll post them here until the situation is sorted out: Action, Adventure Cultivation, Gods Martial Arts, Academy Slowromance, Multiplerealms Immortals, Betrayal Dao Comprehension, Soul Power Sibling Rivalry, Two Protags Comedic Undertones, Plot Twits Bloodline Ability. So here they are, basically all my fav tags in one novel. I hope you lovely readers find some you like too. See ya!! ~waves gb~
~This is not really a review, but eh..~ Hey there you lovely readers, author TSETH here. If you're a new reader of my novel I just wanted to say welcome!! From some of the chapters in the novel, you guys could probably tell that this book has already been published before, so yeah, this is a new account that was created, and why this happened is explained in chapter 28 so read till there to find out. The previous account was closing in at 100,000 views so it's kind of a bummer to have to start over from scratch, but hey! since my old lovely readers enjoyed the novel that much in the past, I'm sure you guys will love it. I think those numbers can easily be reached again and then be surpassed with the help of you lovely new readers. So what are you lovely readers waiting for? Go and read my novel!! Go and read your novel!! Go and read our novel!! ~waves gb~
Frankly pleasantly surprised. I have read dozens of xianxia and this one is by far in my top 3. It changes a lot compared to other just already by the fact that there are 2 mc. Following the history of the 2 sets is very interesting. Not much to say except go read the story. Author I see you haven't published a chapter for a while on this story... Do you want to abandon this story?