Reviews of High Human in Crossed Worlds - A HP x DxD Fic by DonnutHermit - Webnovel

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DonnutHermit

I'm being shameless here and giving my own story a review. At least it is not a 5 stars one because I know where it can get better. 4 stars in writing bcs english is not my main laguage, so I still strugle with the vocabulary 5 stars in stability bcs I pretend to realease one chapter per day, at 12h in the webnovel time 5 stars in development bcs I know where I'm going with the story and have a 'script' to get there 4 stars in character because I'm not very good at describing them 5 stars in world bcs is a mix between the sandboxes created by JKRowling and Ichiei Ishibumi, and their worlds are amazing

LV 14

Siegetheone

I really hope author can continue this book soon. I like it quite a lot.

LV 4

Rohan_Hades

The story starts towards the end and will jump later to the start, but it wasn't pulled off right. Should have left a little mystery with a teaser and then show how he became a lord. NOOOO tell us how he is a lord 5 different ways, no journey, adventure just I AM. Waifus, okay I'm fine with a twin sister to a cannon character, but to add two is over board and isn't creative. The author tried to convey their relationships a little, but felt so so. Would have been more impactful if we seen it developing from the beginning, like most things in this story. Honestly its a good story, but needs tweaking and restructuring, you will get the feeling the author wanted to get the idea onto paper without fore thought on how it would work. 1000 years old, magecraft, wizard, ageless, waifus, LORD RAVENCLAW AND HOGWARTS, lets start here so I can shit on the mcs of harry potter. Okay, but then lets do pov and time skips to explain things(Put in a little randomly). How about not making the character 1000 years old and make him maybe 600 (we all know he's that old just for waifus) so he's older than serafall and will have some power to help possibly in the devil civil war, sure have the ageless thing, but lord of all 4 houses of hogwarts? Nope, should have just kept it ravenclaw and hufflepuff, that would added contention on his right to be owner of hogwarts castle. Overall I might seem to dislike the story, but in reality this story just felt like the a great story could have been told if only it was told in order

LV 3

LukeMorningStar

Issei is alive.

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Shyottee_Carl

keep writing this story you have not updated for a year

LV 1

JoseOfTerrasen

No es una mala historia, habiendo escogido un punto de vista mas original para crear el fanfic. El extraño crossover sin conexiones es un poco meh, pero en general las ideas y las interracciones estan bien. Una pena que haya dejado la historia colgada.

LV 13

iamaguynamedtre

The story is cool nothing bad to say but if you are going to read it I would start with CH70. I don't know if it was uploaded in the wrong order but 1-69 is MC in HP which is fine but then at ch70 all of sudden it's like the story has just begun. It's his reincarnation and choosing Wishes. So if you want to read it "in order" I would start there and then chapter 1 once you finish that arc.

LV 2

Spielar

The beginning and the middle should be switched around in order to flow better and allow a better way of introducing characters. I personally like how the different worlds are combined and how they interact with one another. At the same time I find it to have some issues with how the main character acts. He at some times is forceful and at others doesn't act.

LV 2

R0B

I don't know what the author was thinking... chapters from 1 to 70 is about a 1010 year old reincarnated mc and chapters starting 71 is about mc past (basically a normal story). I stopped at chapter 141 (the story is still in the past).... Author, just reorder chaps, I'm not sure how I even managed to read up to the first 70 chaps. Everything just feels like a major spoil and now I'm not invested in the story

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Nikolay_S

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Gman2123

Another author who says they will be back in a day or 2 but doesn’t update for months on end and doesn’t respond to readers or say if they are on hiatus. Only giving 1 star due to ghosting.

LV 4

Jimbai3870

This is incredibly boring ngl. I don’t like any of the characters they are flat. I couldn’t get past chapter 22 it’s insanely monotonous. ITs written decently I guess in comparison to other works on this site. But otherwise it’ not very good.

LV 4

JohnnieWalker

Erik Runes Ravenclaw the mc name, ultra booriing start. Weird harem selectioon and not expanding much, no quality lemons. Weird choice of the start + mc doesnt know what is happening boring as ppluckk

LV 15

SSDreadnought

Sadly the author has seemingly abandoned the story and many of us who have been here since chapter 1 are stuck with wondering why. “Life happens” is open to too many interpretations. Did you lose family, catch Covid, had legal issues, had a kid, other medical issues? A proper explanation after a week of being gone when you stated a day or two max would have been nice. Going on three weeks without hearing anything? You’re asking for people dropping this. Unfortunately, I am one of those. Toodles, it was fun while it lasted.

LV 3

abcdefghi987654321

It's good at the beginning when Erik is still the mc then the dxd canon cane and *PUFF* Erik became issei's plot armor and like every fanfiction, I read with issei on it the author is a simp for issei like issei this issei that, issei is not even a likable character but oh well author wants author do😒

LV 1

Cesar_Castillo_7925

Me encanta la historia, espero que agregues viajes a otros mundos sería divertido ver cómo "la versión original de los gremory y sitri " reaccionan a los personajes de la historia, más que todo la interacción de las 2 serafal.

LV 4

Devil023

It start well in beginning and was going good until the main canon story of HP.

LV 4

noka_999

5/5

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noka_999

5/5

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Shurasik

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Henrique_Paiao

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noka_999

5/5

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KlausStarup

love your story well writen and fun actualy, you mentioned a last wife. for all that is holy and good about your story dont let it be yasaka or kuroka its done in every story and its tiering to see ppl only pick them for huge brests and nothing else. hera or amaterasu and to some extent luna lovegood, since she would become able to become like him and his 1st wife.

LV 4

noka_999

5/5

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noka_999

5/5

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GrrodGroot2002

Very interesting story and rather interesting storyline that combine you woudl want form those two Universe. I cant wait to read more. And Im waiting to read what autor will write after the "canon".