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A great story. While it starts obviously more slowly, to introduce the MC, his thought process and personality and the characters around him, it picks up. The fights are interesting, the powers (be it magic or something else) contestualized and fleshed out. The MC is smart and, overall, you have a good impression of his strenght at the moment, overpowered where he should be, weak against people he shoul be. Each chracter with interaction is slowly developed. The Harem is not rushed and built around relationships without inglobing every female ever encountered. Overall I strongly recommend reading. Besides that I invite you to take reviews, expecially some bad ones that I saw, with a pinch of salt. If you want an edgy MC who thinks only for himself, detest everything male and holds everything without a second thought, just go away. If you want something more interesting, with characters you want to grow fond of, then read. It will be worth it.
This novel is absolutely amazing! The main character is so well-written, and his growth throughout the story feels real and natural. He’s funny, shameless, and a joy to read about. His interactions with the other characters are fantastic and feel so genuine. Even though this is a harem story, it’s really well done. The harem members feel like real people, not just trophies. They have their own personalities and play an important role in the story. The relationships between the main character and the harem members, as well as between the harem members themselves, are written with so much care and detail. The writing is excellent, with perfect grammar that makes it easy to read. The story is a great mix of humor, action, and exciting moments that keep you hooked. The different worlds visited in the story are also super interesting and well-built, with lots of fun and exciting events happening in each one. I also love how the main character makes new friends in every world—this adds a really nice touch. One of the best parts is the family feeling in Wilhelm’s family. It adds warmth and makes the story even more special. There’s never a boring moment, with scenes that are funny, serious, or full of action. Every chapter makes you want to keep reading, and I hope the author keeps writing more of this fantastic story. If you’re looking for something exciting, funny, and well-written, I can’t recommend this enough. It’s one of my favorite books, and I just can’t get enough of it!
This has got to be one of the best Fate-centric fanfictions I have ever read. The story is unlike most fanfictions, where they just take the original world setting and make it basically the same, except with Willhelm inserted into it. The changes and modifications the author makes to the world's canon makes sense and improves the story overall. He is also not the "OP beyond measure" type, where he does still face difficult or outright impossible beings and it is actually written like it is a danger. Overall, I enjoy it, although the update schedule can be slightly inconsistent, but that's fine for me.
Subarashi fanfic 🔥 A simple request from a humble fan Add Benemune in the MC's harem She is a fallen angel from Grigori I will put a picture of him . . …….
GOATED if you're able to get past the initial chapters. Took me three times to do it, and two times to reread all of it coz it's just that good. Ngl, Artoria being a waifu what carried me through.
I do not recommend reading it because the logic in each chapter commits suicide. Most of the protagonist's problems could be solved with a single phone call, but no—the protagonist is not like that. He will watch his friends die, barely escape alive from battles himself, but instead of asking for help from his beloved (an incredibly powerful goddess), he prefers not to even think about it. In the 400+ chapters I've read, the main character has not asked Meridia for help even once. She could have solved many (if not most) of the problems with just a snap of her fingers. Additionally, the protagonist very often spares enemies and acts stupidly in situations where collaboration could resolve the problem in a day or two. Instead, he acts alone, gets beaten up, and then complains about how everything is bad. If you don't think too much and read with your brain turned off, this "work" might somehow pass. Otherwise, I highly do not recommend it.
This is a temporary estimate. I wanted to ask if there was Yuri in the harem? 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
I dunno if you guys know what this is, but the scene in GoW where Kratos is yelling Zeus!!!!, is me everytime this author posts. This shits peak, and on point every goddamn time
Author you are doing a good job at explaining the worlds that I'm not familiar with. I can't wait to read more.
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Author has really stepped up his writing since 2 years ago, really enjoying the story!
This is almost ironic how much it’s like dxd. A world and interesting backstory turned into a harem slice of life where all the women are turned into npc’s and the mc has no ambition outside of them. Boggles my mind honestly how you could ruin such an interesting concept to write boring smut that ruins the depth of the female characters your depicting making them nothing more then smitten damsels
I love the explanation on the difference between God/Titan/Giant, it’s amazing. You have talent in the way you describe the characters and their developments. I also love the world building aspect.
This should be the first story of the Author which is completely insane because this is among the best I have ever read. The interactions, dialogues and characters are so fleshed out it's wonderful. I also love that, despite the MC being a Troll, he isn't like the modern Marvel MC's that would probably keel over and unalive if they didn't say something funny for 3 sentences or actually had personal problems/issues to work through and are not perfect at all times The discord server is also a great place to get more information, asks questions and all kinds of nonsense
Shtty story. Hope there are more 1 star review cuz it's too high. This should be max at 3 rating not 4.5. ................................................................
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It’s a fanfic that pretends to be a story it’s such a cool idea ruined by some Pokémon catcher level harem where it turns the interest female characters into the mcs cheap carbon copy smut members. I’ve tried reading every chapter then I tried skipping and seeing if it got better but it just doesn’t. And if you think there are scenes where he interacts with blood family the gremorys but no it’s just him going to different worlds that the author is incapable of writing properly to collect women.
I read it on qq, probably one of the best fanfics you'll ever read. Very comprehensive and author does a wonderful job of making each character unique. The only downside I have is how large the harem has gotten, however the author makes it so you like them regardless. Hopefully it isn't too full for Unohana
This novel, never mind the fact that it's a fan fiction, has ruined most of the books I am currently reading with its sheer bloody quality and potential. I literally just deleted like half of the stuff I was reading before I picked up Nascent Kaleidoscope, simply because they pale so much in comparison, that I have no wish to continue reading them... Regarding the story itself, it's a slow paced character development, but the story itself is constantly evolving, as in there was not a single chapter I didn't enjoy and simply skim through. The girls in the harem have personalities, which is already huge. He doesn't exactly go women collecting, they do kinda gravitate towards him, but not like he marries them in the first second of the meeting Everything is thought through and properly explained, while taking in the account the MC's character, abilities and nature (dragon, devil, etc.), as well as those of the girls All in all, one of the best stories out there, the author motivated me a lot, as well as give me a huge amount of inspiration 🍺
The only thing I hear about this web novel is how you forgive his parents so easily. After all, it is either 15 or 16 years. He abandoned you
Não sei fazer crítica só to escrevendo porque preciso bater a meta de caracteres necessários para avaliar o trabalho como 5 estrelas porque esse é um dos livros que eu mais gosto de acompanhar durante a semana
relly good fan fic the first World IS Skyrim i didn't like it but After that it becam better
Overall Im very Satisfied of your keep up the good work PS: please make more Omake of Grand order
Lo mejor de lo mejor, me encanta la historia, me facina, me entretiene, gracias por la historia autor.
I didn't like the first few chapters, so I skipped to chapter 60, and then I liked it.
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A great story. While it starts obviously more slowly, to introduce the MC, his thought process and personality and the characters around him, it picks up. The fights are interesting, the powers (be it magic or something else) contestualized and fleshed out. The MC is smart and, overall, you have a good impression of his strenght at the moment, overpowered where he should be, weak against people he shoul be. Each chracter with interaction is slowly developed. The Harem is not rushed and built around relationships without inglobing every female ever encountered. Overall I strongly recommend reading. Besides that I invite you to take reviews, expecially some bad ones that I saw, with a pinch of salt. If you want an edgy MC who thinks only for himself, detest everything male and holds everything without a second thought, just go away. If you want something more interesting, with characters you want to grow fond of, then read. It will be worth it.
This novel is absolutely amazing! The main character is so well-written, and his growth throughout the story feels real and natural. He’s funny, shameless, and a joy to read about. His interactions with the other characters are fantastic and feel so genuine. Even though this is a harem story, it’s really well done. The harem members feel like real people, not just trophies. They have their own personalities and play an important role in the story. The relationships between the main character and the harem members, as well as between the harem members themselves, are written with so much care and detail. The writing is excellent, with perfect grammar that makes it easy to read. The story is a great mix of humor, action, and exciting moments that keep you hooked. The different worlds visited in the story are also super interesting and well-built, with lots of fun and exciting events happening in each one. I also love how the main character makes new friends in every world—this adds a really nice touch. One of the best parts is the family feeling in Wilhelm’s family. It adds warmth and makes the story even more special. There’s never a boring moment, with scenes that are funny, serious, or full of action. Every chapter makes you want to keep reading, and I hope the author keeps writing more of this fantastic story. If you’re looking for something exciting, funny, and well-written, I can’t recommend this enough. It’s one of my favorite books, and I just can’t get enough of it!
This has got to be one of the best Fate-centric fanfictions I have ever read. The story is unlike most fanfictions, where they just take the original world setting and make it basically the same, except with Willhelm inserted into it. The changes and modifications the author makes to the world's canon makes sense and improves the story overall. He is also not the "OP beyond measure" type, where he does still face difficult or outright impossible beings and it is actually written like it is a danger. Overall, I enjoy it, although the update schedule can be slightly inconsistent, but that's fine for me.
Subarashi fanfic 🔥 A simple request from a humble fan Add Benemune in the MC's harem She is a fallen angel from Grigori I will put a picture of him . . …….
GOATED if you're able to get past the initial chapters. Took me three times to do it, and two times to reread all of it coz it's just that good. Ngl, Artoria being a waifu what carried me through.
I do not recommend reading it because the logic in each chapter commits suicide. Most of the protagonist's problems could be solved with a single phone call, but no—the protagonist is not like that. He will watch his friends die, barely escape alive from battles himself, but instead of asking for help from his beloved (an incredibly powerful goddess), he prefers not to even think about it. In the 400+ chapters I've read, the main character has not asked Meridia for help even once. She could have solved many (if not most) of the problems with just a snap of her fingers. Additionally, the protagonist very often spares enemies and acts stupidly in situations where collaboration could resolve the problem in a day or two. Instead, he acts alone, gets beaten up, and then complains about how everything is bad. If you don't think too much and read with your brain turned off, this "work" might somehow pass. Otherwise, I highly do not recommend it.
This is a temporary estimate. I wanted to ask if there was Yuri in the harem? 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
I dunno if you guys know what this is, but the scene in GoW where Kratos is yelling Zeus!!!!, is me everytime this author posts. This shits peak, and on point every goddamn time
Author you are doing a good job at explaining the worlds that I'm not familiar with. I can't wait to read more.
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Author has really stepped up his writing since 2 years ago, really enjoying the story!
This is almost ironic how much it’s like dxd. A world and interesting backstory turned into a harem slice of life where all the women are turned into npc’s and the mc has no ambition outside of them. Boggles my mind honestly how you could ruin such an interesting concept to write boring smut that ruins the depth of the female characters your depicting making them nothing more then smitten damsels
I love the explanation on the difference between God/Titan/Giant, it’s amazing. You have talent in the way you describe the characters and their developments. I also love the world building aspect.
This should be the first story of the Author which is completely insane because this is among the best I have ever read. The interactions, dialogues and characters are so fleshed out it's wonderful. I also love that, despite the MC being a Troll, he isn't like the modern Marvel MC's that would probably keel over and unalive if they didn't say something funny for 3 sentences or actually had personal problems/issues to work through and are not perfect at all times The discord server is also a great place to get more information, asks questions and all kinds of nonsense
Shtty story. Hope there are more 1 star review cuz it's too high. This should be max at 3 rating not 4.5. ................................................................
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It’s a fanfic that pretends to be a story it’s such a cool idea ruined by some Pokémon catcher level harem where it turns the interest female characters into the mcs cheap carbon copy smut members. I’ve tried reading every chapter then I tried skipping and seeing if it got better but it just doesn’t. And if you think there are scenes where he interacts with blood family the gremorys but no it’s just him going to different worlds that the author is incapable of writing properly to collect women.
I read it on qq, probably one of the best fanfics you'll ever read. Very comprehensive and author does a wonderful job of making each character unique. The only downside I have is how large the harem has gotten, however the author makes it so you like them regardless. Hopefully it isn't too full for Unohana
This novel, never mind the fact that it's a fan fiction, has ruined most of the books I am currently reading with its sheer bloody quality and potential. I literally just deleted like half of the stuff I was reading before I picked up Nascent Kaleidoscope, simply because they pale so much in comparison, that I have no wish to continue reading them... Regarding the story itself, it's a slow paced character development, but the story itself is constantly evolving, as in there was not a single chapter I didn't enjoy and simply skim through. The girls in the harem have personalities, which is already huge. He doesn't exactly go women collecting, they do kinda gravitate towards him, but not like he marries them in the first second of the meeting Everything is thought through and properly explained, while taking in the account the MC's character, abilities and nature (dragon, devil, etc.), as well as those of the girls All in all, one of the best stories out there, the author motivated me a lot, as well as give me a huge amount of inspiration 🍺
The only thing I hear about this web novel is how you forgive his parents so easily. After all, it is either 15 or 16 years. He abandoned you
Não sei fazer crítica só to escrevendo porque preciso bater a meta de caracteres necessários para avaliar o trabalho como 5 estrelas porque esse é um dos livros que eu mais gosto de acompanhar durante a semana
relly good fan fic the first World IS Skyrim i didn't like it but After that it becam better
Overall Im very Satisfied of your keep up the good work PS: please make more Omake of Grand order
Lo mejor de lo mejor, me encanta la historia, me facina, me entretiene, gracias por la historia autor.
I didn't like the first few chapters, so I skipped to chapter 60, and then I liked it.