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Chapter 4: He put up a fight

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Written by: Moye Esther

Chapter 4✍️

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Evan opened his eyes, his vision blurry a bit as she tried to look around the room he was in. Looking around the room to, the bed and then to his naked body, he recalled everything that happened that last night and quicky looked to his side but he was disappointed as the bed was empty.

He touched it and it felt cold, meaning she had left for a long time. He wore his clothes, still disappointed and left the room.

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"Wtf you coming from?!" Charlie, Evan's brother screamed, obviously angry at his brother. His mother stood up, face red and stained with tears and quickly ran to him, hugging him tightly.

"I thought it happened again", she whispered to his ears.

"I'm sorry, I kinda passed out in a club", he said, avoiding Charlie's eyes. He knew Charlie could force the truth out of him, and it was kinda true anyways. "I wanna go freshen up", he muttered, walking fast to his room and secretly hoping Charlie wasn't following him.

Luck wasn't on his side as Charlie entered his room as he was about to close his door. He stared at him for a while, as if trying to fish the truth out if him.

"Fine, I really was in a club" he said, biting his lips tightly, so as not to say something else. Charlie thought his lips would burst at the effort he used in biting his.

"And?" Charlie asked, staring at him suspiciously.

"I kinda did somethings with a girl", he whispered fastly like something hot was in his mouth, his face flushed in embarrassment.

Charlie bursted out laughing, as tears brimmed his eyes. He obviously doesn't believe his brother. He can hardly start a conversation with his cousins and now he's telling him he has a thing with a girl! How was he supposed to believe that?

He slowed down a bit, staring at his brother as his brother's look remained the same, making him think he was saying the truth.

"You're actually saying the truth?" He asked, surprise evident in his voice and even on his face.

Evan slowly nodded, his face now red from embarrassment. Charlie looked at him, still shocked.

"Ya definitely telling me how it went" He stated. Evan nodded again. He obviously had no choice.

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"And where are you coming from young lady?" Stephanie, Dolly's mum's voice boomed in the dark and Dolly squinted her eyes as she tried to get used to the light her mum just put on.

She had tip-toed into the house to avoid seeing her mum till the next morning. She was startled as she heard her mum's voice as she step into the house, stopping her movement. She wasn't expecting to see her mum on the couch, in the dark, still on the dress she wore to the dinner with her granny.

She grinned nervously to her mum as she tried to hug her but one glare from her mum stopped her.

"I'm sorry mum, I went to a club and kinda got drunk and passed out", she replied, trying to keep her face blank. She knows her mum can read through her emotions and she was avoiding just that.

Stephanie knows her daughter is lying but she decided not to press further. After all, she's old enough to decide things herself. She just doesn't like her staying out late, except, of course if she has a mission to go. She has tried stopping her daughter from killing but she can't. The act is in her blood, the only thing she inherited from her dad.

"You won't be allowed into this house the next time you leave without telling me ya going out". She said, strictly, passing the desired information to her daughter as she saw her daughter bite her lips. Something she does when she's trying to say something that will lead her to her granny's place.

She would've ordered her to go to her granny's place but Dolly doesn't like going there. She claims her granny is too religious and can get a heart attack if she sees her in her leather suit.

Dolly tired her best to walk normally to her room. She can't limp or her mum would ask what happened to her. As she got to her room, she released the breathe she had been holding.

She dragged herself to her bathroom and turned in the tap, both the hot and the cold, making the water lukewarm, just the way she likes it.

As she adjusted herself well in the bathtub, she winced as she tried to wash her vagina. "She's really bruised badly", she thought, silently chuckling to herself.

The face of the handsome stranger came to her head, it was like she was seeing him right there. It's like she's going crazy, she shouldn't be thinking about him. She angrily brushed the thought away. She really shouldn't be thinking about him.

Maybe it's because if what they shared. "It must be some sort of romantic attraction", she concluded in her mind. That makes sense now. After all, he's her first.

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Charlie found it hard to believe as he heard Evan narrate all that happened the last night to him, flushing at intervals. He wondered how Evan could've done that with a woman and concluded it was because he was drunk.

"So what's her name?, he asked but got really shocked at the reply he got.

"I don't know", Evan replied. Sounding stupid to himself, but quickly added, "but I recognize her".

That seemed to calm Charlie a bit as he spoke softly to him, "did she force herself in you?" he asked, staring at Evan suspiciously.

"No", Evan bursted out laughing, not quite believing his brother might've thought he was raped.

"And she isn't a prostitute?" Charlie asked again.

"She's not, at least, she doesn't look like one." Evan replied, not liking where his brother was heading to.

"Do you pay her?"

"No!" Evan responded, almost harshly.

Charlie held a bemused look as he wondered why his brother supported this unknown girl with so much strength. Evan definitely doesn't argue this violently, even if it was about him but he supported a girl he had barely known for 7 hours.

An idea came to his mind. They had to find this girl. It seems like his brother really likes this girl, with the way he kept smiling to the air.

"Go freshen up, we're going out", he said in a final tone as he watched his brother grudgingly stand up then drag his feet to the bathroom.

He had always wished his brother will put up a fight to him and now because of a strange girl, he did just that. He really needs to know this girl.


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