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Chapter 3: What just happened?

Title: SUBMISSIVE ☄️

Written by: Moye Esther

Chapter 3✍️

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It all happened pretty fast and soon they were in the room behind the club, made for the same purpose they want to fulfil.

Evan did just what he wanted to and kissed Dolly. He kissed her feverishly and she responded in the same manner like they've both been starved.

Dolly didn't think of anything that moment but the lips on hers. She tried to take the lead but Evan didn't allow and for the first time ever, Dolly submitted.

She felt her legs being lifted from the ground and she gasped. She screamed internally for the stranger to let go of her but her reaction and response to this stranger's touch said opposite.

Evan took the beautiful stranger to the back of the club which he believed a room will be and surely, there were rooms there. He roughly collected a key from the receptionist placed there and gave her few dollars.

Immediately he stepped into the room, still with the stranger in his hands, he let her down on the bed, showing a thousand and one kisses all over her body.

Dolly moaned out in pleasure as she felt his kisses all over her body. Her body jerked up as she felt him trail the kisses down her body. The feelings she was feeling were indescribable. She just wanted to feel his touch everywhere.

Evan didn't hesitate to touch her everywhere. He made sure he didn't miss anywhere. He gradually lifted her gown up and trailed kisses up her body. He finally pulled the gown over her. His heart skipped a beat as he saw her almost naked body.

Dolly shyly covered her body with as she saw the stranger looking at her almost naked body with desire in his eyes and another look she can't decipher. The look made her body hot and she couldn't look him in his face. He gently took her hands away and whispered to her "you're beautiful".

Dolly became shocked, hearing those words. Nobody had ever told her she looked beautiful even though she knows better. Not even her mum. All she gets is "you look sexy or you look hot". The words of this stranger almost brought tears to her eyes but she shut it back in. After all, she's Dolly and nobody can bring such emotions in her.

She felt cold mouth wrapped around her nipples as she came back to her senses. Evan sucked her nipples like his life depended on it. He sucked it like he was starved and Dolly wasn't excluded as she was already a moaning mess.

Evan left the breast and went for the other one, sucking it while he breast fonded the former. He went down to her sex and placed his lips on them, kissing her stomach all the way to her sex as he loved the sound of her moans, urging him to do more.

Dolly felt hot and uncomfortable in her sex, she felt like peeing and didn't want to embarrass herself. She's never felt this way before as she's still a virgin. She gasped as she felt his mouth on her sex, sucking her clit. She was literally shaking. She felt really great as she screamed then felt something hit coming out of her before she calmed down. "What just happened?" She asked herself silently.

"You just climaxed and cummed", Evan replied, startling Dolly as her face flushed. She didn't know he heard her. He bent down and licked her clean before kissing on her lips to taste herself. She tastes so good.

Evan lifted himself a bit from her as he took off his clothes, leaving him totally naked. Dolly's eyes widened as she saw him then closed her eyes. Her eyes shot open as she felt his organ on her sex. It felt so hard and strong and gave her feelings she can't explain.

Evan rested himself properly on her then slowly slid into her. She felt so tight as realization hit him tight. She's still a virgin! He looked at her in the face as if asking for permission and she nodded her head, whispering a plea of urgency. She badly needed him at the moment.

"It's gonna hurt a bit", he whispered to her hear. She nodded. She can handle it, after all, she's handled several pains. Little did she know that this pain is different. It felt like her sex was being torn into two. She cried and tried to push him away but who is she kidding? He's so strong!

Evan slowed down and kissed her, as if kissing away her pain. He slowly rode her, kissing her as well. After a while, she marched up his space, making him go faster. When Evan discovered she was about to cum, he whispered into her hears "not yet" as he hadn't climaxed yet and she listened. After few minutes, he climaxed and they cummed almost simultaneously.

He remained in her as he tried to catch his breathe, giving her the opportunity to do so herself. He kissed her forehead and came down, snuggling her closer to him after which he slept off.

Dolly was still shaken from what she just experienced as she remained in his hands. She feels so weak and complaint with him. She still finds it hard to believe that she obeyed him, not forcefully but willingly. He's the first person she's obeying after her dad.

He's bad news for her and she can't risk being with him. She's the only one who should be dominant and not submissive. She's always the boss.

With that thought in mind, she stood up, wore her clothes and left, limping all the way but not without looking back at the handsome stranger who had left her helpless.


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