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i liked this novel till mc became a half demon or whatever he is that was pretty annoying especially with multiple personality but i was still ok. but then mc went ahead and blackmailed his only backer like what the hell i get that he has a contract with the professor but it has many loopholes using which he can easily have mc killed i mean even i can see the loopholes and i am a normal human not a guy who is atleast a A ranker
Once again I am going to read this novel, i had stop in middle but before I start reading,can anyone tell me what happens to clara , i mean she got a boyfriend and he is enemy of his brother
UNDERRATED!!! This is absolute peak. This story is beautifully written. It is an engaging story that pulls you in right away and the pacing is absolutely perfect. There isn't a single character that'd I'd consider one-dimensional, they all have a lot of depth to them. Multiple POV's allow the reader to better understand the characters. Character development is done nicely as well. Out of the 50 or so Web novels I have read, both on this app and off of this app, this story is without a doubt, one of the best.
I am truly disappointed at start I started liking mc and his development and how you are focusing on his detailed development but after 150-200 ch it become quite messy first of all name of original mc and game mc is quite similar so there is quite confusion and after 200 chapter It was hard to notice that it was story about mc or Adrian . at start I thought you want to delay romance part and do character development but who would have expected you start romance in last chapters that's quite disappointed š®āšØš®āšØ
loving the bond set up between main character and surrounding cast. going great, keep ip the amazing work!!
The story is good at first but the mc is too unlucky as if the whole story talks about him being unlucky the everything will mess up if he is involved.
Well I gave up the novel because too dark for me but I would say that itās well written. For those who want a light hearted story maybe this is not for you.
uptill the latest chapter it was a good read, however the overall plot seems a bit to similar to other popular novel with the same genre. the writing quality is pretty good and as I said the story plot is a bit overused but I kept reading in hopes that I would read something different or there will be something different from the other novels(overall) and lastly I was disappointed with the choice of love interest of mc, when every other FC would have been a better choice than sue.
author i really liked your novel.this is my writers account can you tell me how did you portray character it is really emotional ?
I've been reading for a bit and couldn't recommend this novel more. It has great world building( which I hope the author expands on), as well as amazing character development. There are so many trashy novels so it's great when you can read a novel that the author has clearly put work into.
Now that volume 5 has ended, it's the perfect moment to do a small review: This novel has what could be called as a lack of continuity, in the sense that even tho it introduces alluring characters they dissapear before they can be properly developed, like Alexander, Ulka, Melany's husband, litterally every dwarf, sue(who may be onto something after the end of v5) , alaric, and also, but not limited to, all(except a bit of celine) of the main cast of the original game, As for the story, Its very good, it has good, straight-forward plot twists, and a lot of mystery and character development(Only the mc's character develops tho, with the others development) with them, even to the point where you can understand things just by a simple "Whatever" that the mc likes to throw. If i had to remark something is that this novel follows perfectly the "If anything can go wrong, it will", and we see the mc growing through that. It actually surprised me how much this novel uses this law, not in the bad sense tho. As for the bad parts, i'd say that certain parts of volume 4 are(necessary, but) boring to read, they are there mostly for the foreshadowing and growth of the mc, these scenes are not long, so its fine, its nothing unreadable. Unfortunately V5 is just another level, all of the lack of continuity that I mentioned before destroys any possible chance you had to enjoy at least 90% of v5, since it focus heavily on the side characters, the ones who got thrown apart for 300 chapters. The remaining 10% of the volume is, the end of the dungeon, and a small conversation in the inside of the mc's mind. I give this novel a solid 8, it would be a 9 without volume 5, and it would be a 6 if absolute mind and sith didnt exist(Great move from the author, i couldn't really bring up this much, but really saved the novel(sith not so much)). 8/10 30/03/24
The story start off interesting but I gave up after 100. The author just straight up just start torturing the characters. It just one awful thing after another. The author literally straight up tortures one of the main characters till they end up mental patient. The mc seem to have no growth even past chapter 100 and he just spend most of his time having one mental breakdown after another. He know so much about the game but seem to become dumb. Like he has a extremely powerful ability he canāt control because of split personality and from the get go I trying to figure out why he donāt get the good version of the power to balance hisself out. There should be at least on person in the world that could help him try to control his issues but he just has break down after breakdown. I never understood authors that just love to straight up torture all the characters, like it just awful to read and would think it would be mentally unhealthy to constantly white stuff like that.
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Abysmal MC. You finish a game and what, want to leave the world because, post-game clarity? At the starting point of life yet already saying he doesn't want to be an ordinary person. Boi is 21 years old. Too much tictok influence making these young adults delusional. Bro is depressed becuase he grew up in an orphanage and has no "real" friends. If he played 1 mmorpg, im sure he would have many friends considering how long he can play this 1 game for. Thats just chapter 1. By the end of Chapter 4 he is like; I'm in the game world. I took over the body of a guy who just died by committing 'that'. But now I can have a new chance of life. Also gonna get emotional because we have that 'original body is emotional for family stuff' baggage. He complains about fake friends and relationships in chap 1 yet is ready to exploit relationships and secrets in the game world, his new chance. Literally he just wants everything handed to him. Now another crazy plot point without spoiling anything. MC will get a special item, crazy for a game world isekai. What is particularly remarkable is a few lines introducing it: "We researched it for a long time, but in the end, we realized that no matter what we did, we wouldn't get anything out of it. "..."Obviously, everyone was hesitant. Because this was an illegal place connected to the black market. So no one doubted that they had tried literally 'everything' they could try on that stone. " I was thinking, surely they did THAT. But then the MC does THAT. The novel is a joke. Its not a matter of cliches. Its the way they are presented. Truck-kun works for a reason. Blank screen works for a reason. Trying to write a good reason for leaving the world works if you can write a character/backstory. The force feeding of emotions is heinous. Like a game making the player kill a regular normal small puppy for no reason. Its just there and you have to kill because author wants to artificially create emotions or substance to inflate the novel's ideology. I'm still reading a bit more, seeing if things get better. I held off on writting stuff despite how atrocious the start was. easily 0/10 stuff. I had to write something after reading about Mc doing THAT. Just realized this was the entirety of volume 1. What a great start. Deleting my 2 min older post.
This novel is actually very good. I went into it with no expectations whatsoever, but when I started reading, I was instantly hooked. The author seems to have fully planned out each and every event; there is even foreshadowing in the early chapters, which, when revealed, really surprised me. The side characters feel alive, and they also have their own lives and problems. The author also knows how to portray the characters' emotions. All in all, I recommend this novel.
this is probably one of my favorite novel's I've read recently all the characters are loveable and the update frequency is consistent
Iāve recently been hooked on this genre of novels so I gave this book a chance. I was extremely skeptical on whether the writting quality was going to be passable enough that I could ignore a few translation blunders since I assumed there would be many, as the author stated that this is the first time he has written a book in the English language, however to my pleasant surprise the writting quality has been SUPERB. Not only are there very few grammatical mistakes the author is very adept at painting a vivid picture with his/her writting and uses challenging verbiage that shows the effort that has been put into trabslating/editing this novel. 10/10 very impressed. Oh, and the story is good too.
I'm at chapter 113 rn and I just love this novel THANK YOU AUTHOR (ā ļ½”ā ļ½„ā Ļā ļ½„ā ļ½”ā )ā ļ¾ā ā”
I have read about 160 chps so far. The story certainly didnt disappoint as neither did the writing quality,what left me sour about this novel is the mc's thought process and blind righteousness.There is a certain depth in each character and the actions they perform are all reasonable except from the a little irrational disposition that some of them have(on its own it's not a bad thing just not to my liking). Anyways to sum it up an excellent novel with an average mc(i think it would be more proper and maybe realistic if his disposition was somewhat of chaotic neutral rather than chaotic good)
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The story is alright. Author is very good at fleshing out characters and making them believable. Mc's character development since chap 51 took a nose dive imo. I've read up to chap 70
I like the beginning of this one, but after he got consumed by some purple energy which is something related to deadly sins, story went from nice to frustrating so I dropped this. I donāt know why twisting the story like that out of nowhere, I know it gave more plot line and deep story but I just donāt like it the way putting it. I drop around chap 63
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I rly like the story but the fact that it is written in I-perspective is a bit hard for me. The thing which makes me think about dropping the novel is, that we have character changes which are not labeled like that. The other characters also have I-perspective, which just makes it awfull to read.
I don't like to comment or review, but I will for this novel. Because this novel, Lunerra, was a slightly different experience for me compared to other ones. I was actually bored when I first read it seeing how generic the start was and mc's cringy interaction with his sister. But then I saw the good reviews of several people. I wanted to continue and I did. And I am glad I did. First of all the writing quality is quite good and I can see that the author has improved in the following chapters. However, some parts still feel strange in english, which I attribute to the fact that the author wrote in his native and then translated it rather than writing straight in english. That aside, author has his own way of writing and although it took me a while to get used to it, I am satisfied with it for now. The story development part really frustrated me at the beginning with the things that happened. But after I gritted my teeth, I realized how unique Lunerra is from other novels in this genre. The author tried something different and for me he succeeded. He preferred a slow-paced progression. In doing so, he touched on the emotions, movements, and behaviors of the characters. Briefly, as the story progressed, he really wrote it through the eyes of the characters, and I can't tell you how much I liked that. I think the only bad thing about story development is that mc is constantly experiencing tragedy after tragedy. But this doesn't pose much of a problem for me as I am really curious to see how the story progresses. I think the characters are the most prominent aspect of Lunerra. Because you can see with your own eyes the thoughts of each character, the reflection of these thoughts on their actions, and that there is a completely different story behind each of them. The way Ethan is not a perfect person but really feels like a human, Adrian's search for his own path, Lucia's struggle with the problems her charm causes her, Sue's breaking down after being bullied, Celine's trauma after what she went through, Alexander's current route and so much more... Each one of them was truly satisfying for me, I really felt each one of them. I think the author did an excellent job in terms of character design. World building actually looks quite ordinary, but the author has also put different twists on it. There is mana, there are elves, there are dwarves... these are things we have already seen in each of the extra novels. But there are other energies besides mana in Lunerra. Besides elves and dwarves, there are two other races, hannyas and faes, which I haven't seen in most novels and which have different characteristics. There is no race like demons, but there are wieras, which can be called a unique concept in its own right. But not much has been shown about the world yet. I think world building will get more detailed with the fourth and later volumes because Lunerra contains a world that feels like there are so many things we haven't seen yet. Actually, Lunerra is not a five star novel considering the things I've said. To be honest I would give it a score between 9 and 10 out of 10. But I haven't read a novel like this lately. I am more than satisfied with what I felt while reading this novel. That's why I give Lunerra 5 stars.
i liked this novel till mc became a half demon or whatever he is that was pretty annoying especially with multiple personality but i was still ok. but then mc went ahead and blackmailed his only backer like what the hell i get that he has a contract with the professor but it has many loopholes using which he can easily have mc killed i mean even i can see the loopholes and i am a normal human not a guy who is atleast a A ranker
Once again I am going to read this novel, i had stop in middle but before I start reading,can anyone tell me what happens to clara , i mean she got a boyfriend and he is enemy of his brother
UNDERRATED!!! This is absolute peak. This story is beautifully written. It is an engaging story that pulls you in right away and the pacing is absolutely perfect. There isn't a single character that'd I'd consider one-dimensional, they all have a lot of depth to them. Multiple POV's allow the reader to better understand the characters. Character development is done nicely as well. Out of the 50 or so Web novels I have read, both on this app and off of this app, this story is without a doubt, one of the best.
I am truly disappointed at start I started liking mc and his development and how you are focusing on his detailed development but after 150-200 ch it become quite messy first of all name of original mc and game mc is quite similar so there is quite confusion and after 200 chapter It was hard to notice that it was story about mc or Adrian . at start I thought you want to delay romance part and do character development but who would have expected you start romance in last chapters that's quite disappointed š®āšØš®āšØ
loving the bond set up between main character and surrounding cast. going great, keep ip the amazing work!!
The story is good at first but the mc is too unlucky as if the whole story talks about him being unlucky the everything will mess up if he is involved.
Well I gave up the novel because too dark for me but I would say that itās well written. For those who want a light hearted story maybe this is not for you.
uptill the latest chapter it was a good read, however the overall plot seems a bit to similar to other popular novel with the same genre. the writing quality is pretty good and as I said the story plot is a bit overused but I kept reading in hopes that I would read something different or there will be something different from the other novels(overall) and lastly I was disappointed with the choice of love interest of mc, when every other FC would have been a better choice than sue.
author i really liked your novel.this is my writers account can you tell me how did you portray character it is really emotional ?
I've been reading for a bit and couldn't recommend this novel more. It has great world building( which I hope the author expands on), as well as amazing character development. There are so many trashy novels so it's great when you can read a novel that the author has clearly put work into.
Now that volume 5 has ended, it's the perfect moment to do a small review: This novel has what could be called as a lack of continuity, in the sense that even tho it introduces alluring characters they dissapear before they can be properly developed, like Alexander, Ulka, Melany's husband, litterally every dwarf, sue(who may be onto something after the end of v5) , alaric, and also, but not limited to, all(except a bit of celine) of the main cast of the original game, As for the story, Its very good, it has good, straight-forward plot twists, and a lot of mystery and character development(Only the mc's character develops tho, with the others development) with them, even to the point where you can understand things just by a simple "Whatever" that the mc likes to throw. If i had to remark something is that this novel follows perfectly the "If anything can go wrong, it will", and we see the mc growing through that. It actually surprised me how much this novel uses this law, not in the bad sense tho. As for the bad parts, i'd say that certain parts of volume 4 are(necessary, but) boring to read, they are there mostly for the foreshadowing and growth of the mc, these scenes are not long, so its fine, its nothing unreadable. Unfortunately V5 is just another level, all of the lack of continuity that I mentioned before destroys any possible chance you had to enjoy at least 90% of v5, since it focus heavily on the side characters, the ones who got thrown apart for 300 chapters. The remaining 10% of the volume is, the end of the dungeon, and a small conversation in the inside of the mc's mind. I give this novel a solid 8, it would be a 9 without volume 5, and it would be a 6 if absolute mind and sith didnt exist(Great move from the author, i couldn't really bring up this much, but really saved the novel(sith not so much)). 8/10 30/03/24
The story start off interesting but I gave up after 100. The author just straight up just start torturing the characters. It just one awful thing after another. The author literally straight up tortures one of the main characters till they end up mental patient. The mc seem to have no growth even past chapter 100 and he just spend most of his time having one mental breakdown after another. He know so much about the game but seem to become dumb. Like he has a extremely powerful ability he canāt control because of split personality and from the get go I trying to figure out why he donāt get the good version of the power to balance hisself out. There should be at least on person in the world that could help him try to control his issues but he just has break down after breakdown. I never understood authors that just love to straight up torture all the characters, like it just awful to read and would think it would be mentally unhealthy to constantly white stuff like that.
Reveal Spoiler Abysmal MC. You finish a game and what, want to leave the world because, post-game clarity? At the starting point of life yet already saying he doesn't want to be an ordinary person. Boi is 21 years old. Too much tictok influence making these young adults delusional. Bro is depressed becuase he grew up in an orphanage and has no "real" friends. If he played 1 mmorpg, im sure he would have many friends considering how long he can play this 1 game for. Thats just chapter 1. By the end of Chapter 4 he is like; I'm in the game world. I took over the body of a guy who just died by committing 'that'. But now I can have a new chance of life. Also gonna get emotional because we have that 'original body is emotional for family stuff' baggage. He complains about fake friends and relationships in chap 1 yet is ready to exploit relationships and secrets in the game world, his new chance. Literally he just wants everything handed to him. Now another crazy plot point without spoiling anything. MC will get a special item, crazy for a game world isekai. What is particularly remarkable is a few lines introducing it: "We researched it for a long time, but in the end, we realized that no matter what we did, we wouldn't get anything out of it. "..."Obviously, everyone was hesitant. Because this was an illegal place connected to the black market. So no one doubted that they had tried literally 'everything' they could try on that stone. " I was thinking, surely they did THAT. But then the MC does THAT. The novel is a joke. Its not a matter of cliches. Its the way they are presented. Truck-kun works for a reason. Blank screen works for a reason. Trying to write a good reason for leaving the world works if you can write a character/backstory. The force feeding of emotions is heinous. Like a game making the player kill a regular normal small puppy for no reason. Its just there and you have to kill because author wants to artificially create emotions or substance to inflate the novel's ideology. I'm still reading a bit more, seeing if things get better. I held off on writting stuff despite how atrocious the start was. easily 0/10 stuff. I had to write something after reading about Mc doing THAT. Just realized this was the entirety of volume 1. What a great start. Deleting my 2 min older post.
This novel is actually very good. I went into it with no expectations whatsoever, but when I started reading, I was instantly hooked. The author seems to have fully planned out each and every event; there is even foreshadowing in the early chapters, which, when revealed, really surprised me. The side characters feel alive, and they also have their own lives and problems. The author also knows how to portray the characters' emotions. All in all, I recommend this novel.
this is probably one of my favorite novel's I've read recently all the characters are loveable and the update frequency is consistent
Iāve recently been hooked on this genre of novels so I gave this book a chance. I was extremely skeptical on whether the writting quality was going to be passable enough that I could ignore a few translation blunders since I assumed there would be many, as the author stated that this is the first time he has written a book in the English language, however to my pleasant surprise the writting quality has been SUPERB. Not only are there very few grammatical mistakes the author is very adept at painting a vivid picture with his/her writting and uses challenging verbiage that shows the effort that has been put into trabslating/editing this novel. 10/10 very impressed. Oh, and the story is good too.
I'm at chapter 113 rn and I just love this novel THANK YOU AUTHOR (ā ļ½”ā ļ½„ā Ļā ļ½„ā ļ½”ā )ā ļ¾ā ā”
I have read about 160 chps so far. The story certainly didnt disappoint as neither did the writing quality,what left me sour about this novel is the mc's thought process and blind righteousness.There is a certain depth in each character and the actions they perform are all reasonable except from the a little irrational disposition that some of them have(on its own it's not a bad thing just not to my liking). Anyways to sum it up an excellent novel with an average mc(i think it would be more proper and maybe realistic if his disposition was somewhat of chaotic neutral rather than chaotic good)
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The story is alright. Author is very good at fleshing out characters and making them believable. Mc's character development since chap 51 took a nose dive imo. I've read up to chap 70
I like the beginning of this one, but after he got consumed by some purple energy which is something related to deadly sins, story went from nice to frustrating so I dropped this. I donāt know why twisting the story like that out of nowhere, I know it gave more plot line and deep story but I just donāt like it the way putting it. I drop around chap 63
Reveal Spoiler I rly like the story but the fact that it is written in I-perspective is a bit hard for me. The thing which makes me think about dropping the novel is, that we have character changes which are not labeled like that. The other characters also have I-perspective, which just makes it awfull to read.
I don't like to comment or review, but I will for this novel. Because this novel, Lunerra, was a slightly different experience for me compared to other ones. I was actually bored when I first read it seeing how generic the start was and mc's cringy interaction with his sister. But then I saw the good reviews of several people. I wanted to continue and I did. And I am glad I did. First of all the writing quality is quite good and I can see that the author has improved in the following chapters. However, some parts still feel strange in english, which I attribute to the fact that the author wrote in his native and then translated it rather than writing straight in english. That aside, author has his own way of writing and although it took me a while to get used to it, I am satisfied with it for now. The story development part really frustrated me at the beginning with the things that happened. But after I gritted my teeth, I realized how unique Lunerra is from other novels in this genre. The author tried something different and for me he succeeded. He preferred a slow-paced progression. In doing so, he touched on the emotions, movements, and behaviors of the characters. Briefly, as the story progressed, he really wrote it through the eyes of the characters, and I can't tell you how much I liked that. I think the only bad thing about story development is that mc is constantly experiencing tragedy after tragedy. But this doesn't pose much of a problem for me as I am really curious to see how the story progresses. I think the characters are the most prominent aspect of Lunerra. Because you can see with your own eyes the thoughts of each character, the reflection of these thoughts on their actions, and that there is a completely different story behind each of them. The way Ethan is not a perfect person but really feels like a human, Adrian's search for his own path, Lucia's struggle with the problems her charm causes her, Sue's breaking down after being bullied, Celine's trauma after what she went through, Alexander's current route and so much more... Each one of them was truly satisfying for me, I really felt each one of them. I think the author did an excellent job in terms of character design. World building actually looks quite ordinary, but the author has also put different twists on it. There is mana, there are elves, there are dwarves... these are things we have already seen in each of the extra novels. But there are other energies besides mana in Lunerra. Besides elves and dwarves, there are two other races, hannyas and faes, which I haven't seen in most novels and which have different characteristics. There is no race like demons, but there are wieras, which can be called a unique concept in its own right. But not much has been shown about the world yet. I think world building will get more detailed with the fourth and later volumes because Lunerra contains a world that feels like there are so many things we haven't seen yet. Actually, Lunerra is not a five star novel considering the things I've said. To be honest I would give it a score between 9 and 10 out of 10. But I haven't read a novel like this lately. I am more than satisfied with what I felt while reading this novel. That's why I give Lunerra 5 stars.
author can you tell me who is 'FL' pleaseššš
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