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Write a reviewY WOULDNT U ALLOW HIS PET TO EVOLVE OR LEVEL UP OFF OF THE MEDICAL HERBS AND PILLS AND MAKING THE CONDITION FOR HIM TO EVOLVE HOS PET A LITTLE MORE COMPLICATED IT WOULD ONLY BE FAIR AND I GUESS THIE PET DOESNT EAT OR HE DOESNT GIVE IT FOOD OR ANYTHING AND Y HASNT HE GOTTEN ANOTHER PET YET LIKE THIS IS ALL UPDATES U SHOULD DO AND WOULD MAKE THE BOOK BETTER!!!!!
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Trial is for making a good first impression but this novel has non of those and reading it make me sick. how can you expect me to believe that this novel is going to be good later on when you fk up in Trial?
You ruins it the second you backtracked on your story leading to it being confusing and not interesting so I am not sorry about the review but hope your stories will get better
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Despite the disjointed first few chapters, the rest went well. As such, it has become an exciting read. Hope to read more of this book.
it's weird and extremely confusing, its first beast was a turkey in chapter 1 - 3, then from the 4th chapter, it's like the story starts again and remove the original turkey to put the cliche sparrow.
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Reveal Spoiler""With his HARD WORK , Chen Nan had raised a group of legendary beasts and became a legend himself."" I hope it's irony, because the MC has a goldfinger right ? one of those that the MC doesn't have to do anything and conquers everything easily right ?
so I've read all 20 of the available chapters and the first 3 chapters seem like the author didn't like what he was writing and accidently forgot to delete those first few chapters before he started writing the rest of the story is okay I'd say nothing extravagant it has its moments but it kinda ruined the story for me when the whole story changed in the 4th or 5th chapter but the rest of the writing after the mess up in the first three are decent but the most I'd give it is a Meh
As others have mentioned, the first 3 chapters and the rest of the novel are disconnected. It feels like the author started writing, then realized his novel was too simple, and decided to change it. Except that he submitted the first draft along with the other chapters. As for the rest of the story itself, nothing really remarkable. The MC is simple minded, the students exist only to be face-slapped. The only allies exist to be ignored by the arrogant MC. Not an entire waste of your time, but certainly nothing to remember.
whaaaaaaaaaat????????................... sorry my mind got overload from understanding the story..............................................o
the chapters are confusing...the chapters are confusing...the chapters are confusing...the chapters are confusing...the chapters are confusing...the chapters are confusing...
The first 3 chapters are one book. from chapter 4 the book is a different one. while both are beast taming novels, many 5hings are different . it's wierd . What was the editor doing?
Domestication is one of the oldest acts of humanity. Pokemon is the big culprit in teaching so many generations about evolution wrong. Basically you steal multiple puppies, It selects what pleases, makes them reproduce and discards the rest, generation by generation as a species increasingly dependent on the human race and genetically similar. Dependent on feeding, reproduction and evacuation, this species is moving away from the wild version. In the end some species totally fail. Other partially: Deformed bones, problematic organs, cancer, fainting, inability to reproduce without human assistance. And finally the Big Hits: GMOs.
Y WOULDNT U ALLOW HIS PET TO EVOLVE OR LEVEL UP OFF OF THE MEDICAL HERBS AND PILLS AND MAKING THE CONDITION FOR HIM TO EVOLVE HOS PET A LITTLE MORE COMPLICATED IT WOULD ONLY BE FAIR AND I GUESS THIE PET DOESNT EAT OR HE DOESNT GIVE IT FOOD OR ANYTHING AND Y HASNT HE GOTTEN ANOTHER PET YET LIKE THIS IS ALL UPDATES U SHOULD DO AND WOULD MAKE THE BOOK BETTER!!!!!
Ths for the chapter ....... .... ........ ......... ..... ... ... .... . ... .. ..... .. ... .... . ..... .... ....... . .... Bb. .....b..
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Trial is for making a good first impression but this novel has non of those and reading it make me sick. how can you expect me to believe that this novel is going to be good later on when you fk up in Trial?
You ruins it the second you backtracked on your story leading to it being confusing and not interesting so I am not sorry about the review but hope your stories will get better
Worst Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej
Despite the disjointed first few chapters, the rest went well. As such, it has become an exciting read. Hope to read more of this book.
it's weird and extremely confusing, its first beast was a turkey in chapter 1 - 3, then from the 4th chapter, it's like the story starts again and remove the original turkey to put the cliche sparrow.
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Reveal Spoiler""With his HARD WORK , Chen Nan had raised a group of legendary beasts and became a legend himself."" I hope it's irony, because the MC has a goldfinger right ? one of those that the MC doesn't have to do anything and conquers everything easily right ?
so I've read all 20 of the available chapters and the first 3 chapters seem like the author didn't like what he was writing and accidently forgot to delete those first few chapters before he started writing the rest of the story is okay I'd say nothing extravagant it has its moments but it kinda ruined the story for me when the whole story changed in the 4th or 5th chapter but the rest of the writing after the mess up in the first three are decent but the most I'd give it is a Meh
As others have mentioned, the first 3 chapters and the rest of the novel are disconnected. It feels like the author started writing, then realized his novel was too simple, and decided to change it. Except that he submitted the first draft along with the other chapters. As for the rest of the story itself, nothing really remarkable. The MC is simple minded, the students exist only to be face-slapped. The only allies exist to be ignored by the arrogant MC. Not an entire waste of your time, but certainly nothing to remember.
whaaaaaaaaaat????????................... sorry my mind got overload from understanding the story..............................................o
the chapters are confusing...the chapters are confusing...the chapters are confusing...the chapters are confusing...the chapters are confusing...the chapters are confusing...
The first 3 chapters are one book. from chapter 4 the book is a different one. while both are beast taming novels, many 5hings are different . it's wierd . What was the editor doing?
Domestication is one of the oldest acts of humanity. Pokemon is the big culprit in teaching so many generations about evolution wrong. Basically you steal multiple puppies, It selects what pleases, makes them reproduce and discards the rest, generation by generation as a species increasingly dependent on the human race and genetically similar. Dependent on feeding, reproduction and evacuation, this species is moving away from the wild version. In the end some species totally fail. Other partially: Deformed bones, problematic organs, cancer, fainting, inability to reproduce without human assistance. And finally the Big Hits: GMOs.
WHEN R U COMING BACK I LOVE THIS BOOK AND WANT TO KEEP READING IT!!!!