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its a good story but at the last 200 chapters the character just sorta lost all emotion its like an ai continued the story after half of it but still an amazing tory
I love his work from the third person view just like the author JKSMANGA.
Great read. 👍 Some grammatical errors. Some cringy references, lol. Overall, it was a powerful, fun read. Thank you, author!
This is a really great read, has a hard hook in the beginning and amazing character development
Epic story of gaining strength, of a harrowing journey, of loss, and finally of love between brothers.
Hi author and fellow readers, iwant to ask one question for me to continue reading hope y'll bless me with a positive answer. Does the mc got a human complex?
I liked it up until the main character lost the support of the director and then attacked some people for the sake of revenge out of nowhere. After that, he forces the mistress’s servants to sign a slave contract which was insanely hypocritical and I dropped the story. Maybe he will get better later on in the story, but I can’t read past his insane desire for revenge and stupid hypocrisy. Also, the author needs to add an antihero or villain tag or something like that.
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the story is good, but some of the characters and their actions infuriate me! [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap]
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It's my first time seeing such unique concept, zompirewolf thing... system novel good for fantasy lovers and system lovers. Interesting storyline though it seems typical novel...
Omg, Im in love with your NEW book cover! 1 question. whos da girl. is it ashtons gal? 👀
it's one of the best novel i have read in this platform, tho there are some spelling mistake (Sorry', i don't know about Grammatical mistakes being i don't know about it.) and the character development is good, MC is Idiotic and bratty at start but reading this is worth it.
So far so good enjoying the story Make him more romantic in my opinion it would make it more interesting He should remain cold and still have his desire for revenge but shuold be loving to people like his mom future wives irina and virina
Is Ashton truly immortal thanks to all of his genes or can something like a stake to the heart and an attack to his brain at the same time kill him like the typical cliches? I just wanna know
I like it a lot! The world Building is amazing too. Power system is unique too. MC was a little childish at first but considering that he was a child, so it's okay. I really recommend you guys to give it a try.
This hidden gem is one of the best books on this app. If you like the tags this story is made for you. Mc has exciting powers. The world is well-built and coherent. No plot holes. The speed is good, not fast and not slow. As for the quality of my writing can t really say since english isn't my first language. In conclusion, read it it s really worth it.
the one thing I love the most is the growth of Aston and Astaroth's relationship At first they hated each other but it turned for the better slowly not within a day
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if you're reading this review trying to figure out if you want to read this or not you should because it's awesome and in my opinion it just keeps getting better
can you increase your daily review chapter per day and what is your next update.overally the book is nice and thanks alot for such an amazing book🙂🙂❤️❤️❤️💖😍
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Readers: So what type of novel will you make? A vampire one? A werewolf one? or maybe even a zombie monster mc?? ............ Author: Yes.
Liked it a lot, hope it gets better. It gives what the title sold it for. The usual growing protagonist with potential and development. There aren`t really any strong memorable moments but there aren`t any bad scenes as well. The coolest scene until now is the duel with that dune at the start. That was surprisingly smart writing.
Have only read about 200 chapters but story is going well. The concept is unique. I don't really like systems but since everyone has one it's oke. Look forward to more chapters.
I love this story! Not exactly what I imagined when I saw the title and that's good! Even though I like werewolves/vampires/zombies, seeing all three at the same time scared me a little in terms of plot quality, but it's really well written! when i saw the title i was like:
This is by far the best book i have read on this platform, i am so happy to support this book in its following Volumes :) well done for all the effort the author has put into writing this to please us followers and supply us with the best chapters ever!!! #BBE! (Best Book Ever!)
GREAT BOOK!!! Also, old cover was good, but the new cover looks AWESOME! Seriously though, definitely worth a read. Highly recommend[img=coins]
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Good book but also bad, the fact that he can just "unequip" his genes is stupid they should all be passive, and the story development is slow and honestly is not very good, I like the concept but some things are just far too stupid for my taste.
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Author here! The novel got contracted so I wanted to leave a review here and give my readers a place to ask questions as well. So if you have any questions related to the story then feel free to drop them here. Thank you for reading!
its a good story but at the last 200 chapters the character just sorta lost all emotion its like an ai continued the story after half of it but still an amazing tory
I love his work from the third person view just like the author JKSMANGA.
Great read. 👍 Some grammatical errors. Some cringy references, lol. Overall, it was a powerful, fun read. Thank you, author!
This is a really great read, has a hard hook in the beginning and amazing character development
Epic story of gaining strength, of a harrowing journey, of loss, and finally of love between brothers.
Hi author and fellow readers, iwant to ask one question for me to continue reading hope y'll bless me with a positive answer. Does the mc got a human complex?
I liked it up until the main character lost the support of the director and then attacked some people for the sake of revenge out of nowhere. After that, he forces the mistress’s servants to sign a slave contract which was insanely hypocritical and I dropped the story. Maybe he will get better later on in the story, but I can’t read past his insane desire for revenge and stupid hypocrisy. Also, the author needs to add an antihero or villain tag or something like that.
Reveal Spoiler the story is good, but some of the characters and their actions infuriate me! [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap]
Reveal Spoiler It's my first time seeing such unique concept, zompirewolf thing... system novel good for fantasy lovers and system lovers. Interesting storyline though it seems typical novel...
Omg, Im in love with your NEW book cover! 1 question. whos da girl. is it ashtons gal? 👀
it's one of the best novel i have read in this platform, tho there are some spelling mistake (Sorry', i don't know about Grammatical mistakes being i don't know about it.) and the character development is good, MC is Idiotic and bratty at start but reading this is worth it.
So far so good enjoying the story Make him more romantic in my opinion it would make it more interesting He should remain cold and still have his desire for revenge but shuold be loving to people like his mom future wives irina and virina
Is Ashton truly immortal thanks to all of his genes or can something like a stake to the heart and an attack to his brain at the same time kill him like the typical cliches? I just wanna know
I like it a lot! The world Building is amazing too. Power system is unique too. MC was a little childish at first but considering that he was a child, so it's okay. I really recommend you guys to give it a try.
This hidden gem is one of the best books on this app. If you like the tags this story is made for you. Mc has exciting powers. The world is well-built and coherent. No plot holes. The speed is good, not fast and not slow. As for the quality of my writing can t really say since english isn't my first language. In conclusion, read it it s really worth it.
the one thing I love the most is the growth of Aston and Astaroth's relationship At first they hated each other but it turned for the better slowly not within a day
Reveal Spoiler if you're reading this review trying to figure out if you want to read this or not you should because it's awesome and in my opinion it just keeps getting better
can you increase your daily review chapter per day and what is your next update.overally the book is nice and thanks alot for such an amazing book🙂🙂❤️❤️❤️💖😍
Reveal Spoiler Readers: So what type of novel will you make? A vampire one? A werewolf one? or maybe even a zombie monster mc?? ............ Author: Yes.
Liked it a lot, hope it gets better. It gives what the title sold it for. The usual growing protagonist with potential and development. There aren`t really any strong memorable moments but there aren`t any bad scenes as well. The coolest scene until now is the duel with that dune at the start. That was surprisingly smart writing.
Have only read about 200 chapters but story is going well. The concept is unique. I don't really like systems but since everyone has one it's oke. Look forward to more chapters.
I love this story! Not exactly what I imagined when I saw the title and that's good! Even though I like werewolves/vampires/zombies, seeing all three at the same time scared me a little in terms of plot quality, but it's really well written! when i saw the title i was like:
This is by far the best book i have read on this platform, i am so happy to support this book in its following Volumes :) well done for all the effort the author has put into writing this to please us followers and supply us with the best chapters ever!!! #BBE! (Best Book Ever!)
GREAT BOOK!!! Also, old cover was good, but the new cover looks AWESOME! Seriously though, definitely worth a read. Highly recommend[img=coins]
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Good book but also bad, the fact that he can just "unequip" his genes is stupid they should all be passive, and the story development is slow and honestly is not very good, I like the concept but some things are just far too stupid for my taste.
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Author here! The novel got contracted so I wanted to leave a review here and give my readers a place to ask questions as well. So if you have any questions related to the story then feel free to drop them here. Thank you for reading!