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xiaohai_23

Hello, author's review here! This will be the story of a family. Four people (plus more characters as the story proceeds) trying to live together, to know each other and try love. It is my shy version of the "My Werewolf and I" contest, and I'd like it if you sent reviews, comments, and power stones. Let me know what you think will happen and what you liked or disliked. I'm here to read your opinions and learn from them :D WARNINGS: sm ut content, possible vio lence and actions scenes (not too detailed, I am a little sensitive to these as well .-.), possessive characters. The cubs are worse than the father, so do not expect an easy life for the Alpha. Even if this story does have a lot of the usual elements of stories with babies, it is different in many other aspects.

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PetiteSnowdrop

thank you so much for creating this! my mom is a single parent too so I know how hard it is for a woman to sustain her children alone. the cubs are mega adorable and the plot is really intriguing. you hooked me just from your synopsis. can't wait for more chapters!

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Smiillleeee

I don't remember how I came across this novel but I'm glad I did. Yes another warewolf story but no nothing cliche! Read this novel if you love~ concept of mate one nigh stand turns true love pampering ML independent FL little sweet buns fate / destiny and much more

3yr
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Page_Holland

It’s an amazing 😻 story, please πŸ™ am an upcoming writer and i will really appreciate your support on my book. Title : The Runaway Moon

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Ifeoma_Ekeigwe

I love this novel, still in chapter 402 though but, the only thing I hate is how Lara gets a heart attack after her and Nate have been intimate with each other and how she doesn't just accept Nate's marriage proposal but keeps talking about responsibilities and being a better person and all those other stuffs, still this review is from what I've read so far which is 402. I know this might seem like a lot of negatives for 5 stars, I don't care this story deserves 5 stars I just don't like slow paced stories and self-depreciating characters.

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Ayushi_Parmar_5020

hey author please update soon love your workπŸ’“πŸ’“

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Lighthousewords

It is so good. I really connected to it This book is so good! Hi guys please check my novel and leave a comment darlings. The CEO's Eternal Flame Thank you so much ❀️

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Beth_Fakunle

i like it. the kids are adorable. too bad it isn't complete, but what's written was fun.

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sweetswander

well though I enjoyed reading the story in the beginning but later got bored of it I didn't like the character development of Lara and the children she is very overprotective to her children and does not even consider nates feeling it just feel like a stretch for me,,,

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Taradasha

Love this story, but it hasn’t updated in over 6 months 😒

1yr
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Kelvin_Ward

I don't know how read this novel from start to end this too good

1yr
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diety91
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hi guys any of you has extra money please send me i hope to get a membership πŸ™

1yr
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Zarkia_Blair

This is the best novel I read since I came on WN

1yr
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Elina_M
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So easy to read or more like listen πŸ₯° nice story with cute werewolf side :)

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anuranjan_kumar

hi author! I like your story very much❀

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SilverLuna10

Love the story, hate the paywall xD. But seriously it's my favourite werewolf story I read. It's unique that Alpha's mate is human and that he doesn't have geolocation of her. I like how Nate realized that Lara is his mate and he has pups with her after meeting her after six years immediately instead of usual in C-novels hundreds of chapters where FL hide fact of children's father's identity from ML. I love also that while FL was virgin and didn't have other men than ML he was also inexperienced and then completely loyal during their break. I hate it when FL has to be pure while ML was fooling around with other women. I really love ML. He is perfect husband and father for hurt and traumatized Lara and children. I admire his patience to always put Lara first and let her take first step in intimacy instead of usual CEO's molesting FL to get her agree to sleep with him. And I really like that Lara needs some time to feel comfortable instead of going with him to bed because they're mates and it makes them attracted to each other. And love their gradual developing relationship. They actually get to know each other, go on dates, start with hugs and kisses to develop naturally to getting married soon. It is what really lacks in novels. I like their courtship even though they already have children. And Jaden and Scarlet are great. Love how protective they are of their mother and that they show some difficulties after being raised by single mother. They act like children their own age even if they are more mature and sensible because Lara had to leave them alone when she worked. Firstly neither children nor Nate were happy about each other. Then we see why they need father and that Nate fulfills that role even if in the beginning he didn't love his children yet. Their relationship also gradually developed from dislike to being comfortable with each other to loving each other. And even though Nate was reluctant of being father in the beginning though he still wanted his children and being constantly jealous of them taking all his mate's attention he still worked hard to get his children affection even if it was because Lara loves their children. Now he totally loves them and children also accepted him as their father. Review is only for first 300 chapters because like I said I hate paywall and need to gather fast-passes to continue story.

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ShaziyaSiddiqui

very unique and emotional topic, a completely family novel. go ahead I like this novel very much. once again congratulations for your beautiful work πŸ₯€πŸ₯°

2yr
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Sarrell_Schultz

I really enjoyed reading this at first.. but then I realized I got bored and couldn’t continue. The story development is SO SLOW and just felt like it was dragging. The way the kids were written was also frustrating because they were overprotective for far too long - it just got boring.

2yr
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DistractedByBooks

The characters are engaging, and the story pulls all the emotions. Nate found his fated mate and lost her in one night and day. As the Alpha for his pack, he has to manage the constant pain of a missing mate and continue to do his job leading his pack’s business as the CEO of LY Corp. Then one day, about 6 years later, his mate walked in as a new employee. Lara was looking for a new start after moving to Norwich with her 5-year-old twins. The last few years have forced them to move often because the kids aren’t fully human, and sometimes can’t control their shape or strength. Nate accepts the challenge to woo and win his mate, and to convince his pups that they are not losing their mother, but gaining a father.

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DistractedByBooks

I started reading, got completly hooked, and ended up unlocking everything. Well done! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Mirna_Pleitez

8i like that the father is trying to know his family that he mist 6 years of his children life and is trying to make it up to them and also try to be a family and Mary the mother of his kids and be a real family and also try to explain what his job is and how can they know each other more and get along.[img=recommend]πŸ˜€πŸ€—

2yr
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Asweetsmile1

I highly recommend this book. it has everything you are looking for in one book. 1. not to many unnecessary misunderstandings 2. one night stand 3. cute kids 4. alpha of all alphas 5. a female lead that isn't slow but can stand on her on foundation. 6. a mother's love 7. a jealous father 8. smart kids 9. romance and 10. happily ever after

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Drakaris

I was reluctant to start a story about werewolves.. cause honestly it's the most overused concept and it somehow justifies the possessive toxic relationships as soulmates. But i have to say the author has managed the supernatural and natural aspects in a very nice blend. Yes their is possessiness but it is not portrayed as something righteous and beautiful.Characters are not flawless and their growth is progressive and slow. It might be annoying for some readers who like fast paced novels, but the overall development of the story, each character individually and their relationship with each other is worth the wait. And kids are adorable and their problems according to their age are very realistic. I specifically like the male lead. To me female lead needs more growth and development and is not very charming at the moment. But i hope she'll get their. I love all the side characters (except villain, cuz his reasoning doesn't make any sense to me). I think villain's character is weak and not well developed to be qualified as good villain. LOL.πŸ˜‚ Overall this is a very engaging read with quality writing, feel good vibe and character growth. A must try!!πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ‘πŸ‘ keep up the good work author san..lots of best wishes πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰β€οΈ

2yr
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Luna_3358

This story is so lovely! The characters are mature and the writing really expresses everything without going over the top. I’m so happy I gave this book a chance. I can’t wait to read more from this author!

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Amana_Mc

This story is really different it starts and you think same old same old and then it opens up and almost nothing is as you taught great job by the author..

2yr
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laura_29

I just found this treasure for less than 24 hours yet I can't get enough of it! I love how realistic the kids were acting towards their Dad, how Lara didn't expect anything from Nate and Nate's slowly getting used to being a father. He only wished to find the mate he lost, yet when he found her there were two little buns with her. Looking forward to them being a happy family of four! πŸ‘¨β€πŸ‘©β€πŸ‘§β€πŸ‘¦

3yr
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Amana_Mc

I really like this story its different than others I have read in this genere solooking forward to reading more,of it wish I was not si broke fight now Id buy the whole thing.

3yr
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Meza_Hana_9018

Good storyπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ˜πŸ₯°πŸ˜πŸ€©πŸ₯°πŸ˜πŸ€©πŸ₯° How many chapter this story ?

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ivy_nguyen_5414

Not sure how I stumbled upon this story, but I'm glad I found this wonderful gem! I already love all the characters, and there are so many silly and funny moments and snide remarks that I find myself constantly laughing out loud and still thinking about that particular moment. I can't wait to see how everything works out, and I'm a hopeless romantic wishing for everyone's happily ever after πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³

3yr
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LoveAgoodHEA

This webnovel is the balm I needed after watching Japanese anime film 'Wolf Children' by Mamoru Hosoda. Hosoda's story had wolf cubs, too, but their human mother was a single, widowed human mother. We need a happily-ever-after (HEA) ending please.TIA xo

3yr
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Daoistt4psvi

The synopsis are really great made me want to read the book,especially the part you wrote "if you can't stand too much cuteness don't read it" that really got me lol.

3yr
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RMehrotra

Came accross some thing different where an Alpha is struggling for his mate attention...oh overbearing Alpha is so timid in front of his mate... nice one dear author, all the best ❀

3yr
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xiaohai_23

Hello, author's review here! This will be the story of a family. Four people (plus more characters as the story proceeds) trying to live together, to know each other and try love. It is my shy version of the "My Werewolf and I" contest, and I'd like it if you sent reviews, comments, and power stones. Let me know what you think will happen and what you liked or disliked. I'm here to read your opinions and learn from them :D WARNINGS: sm ut content, possible vio lence and actions scenes (not too detailed, I am a little sensitive to these as well .-.), possessive characters. The cubs are worse than the father, so do not expect an easy life for the Alpha. Even if this story does have a lot of the usual elements of stories with babies, it is different in many other aspects.

3yr
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PetiteSnowdrop

thank you so much for creating this! my mom is a single parent too so I know how hard it is for a woman to sustain her children alone. the cubs are mega adorable and the plot is really intriguing. you hooked me just from your synopsis. can't wait for more chapters!

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3yr
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Smiillleeee

I don't remember how I came across this novel but I'm glad I did. Yes another warewolf story but no nothing cliche! Read this novel if you love~ concept of mate one nigh stand turns true love pampering ML independent FL little sweet buns fate / destiny and much more

3yr
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Page_Holland

It’s an amazing 😻 story, please πŸ™ am an upcoming writer and i will really appreciate your support on my book. Title : The Runaway Moon

1mth
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Ifeoma_Ekeigwe

I love this novel, still in chapter 402 though but, the only thing I hate is how Lara gets a heart attack after her and Nate have been intimate with each other and how she doesn't just accept Nate's marriage proposal but keeps talking about responsibilities and being a better person and all those other stuffs, still this review is from what I've read so far which is 402. I know this might seem like a lot of negatives for 5 stars, I don't care this story deserves 5 stars I just don't like slow paced stories and self-depreciating characters.

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2mth
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Ayushi_Parmar_5020

hey author please update soon love your workπŸ’“πŸ’“

2mth
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Lighthousewords

It is so good. I really connected to it This book is so good! Hi guys please check my novel and leave a comment darlings. The CEO's Eternal Flame Thank you so much ❀️

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4mth
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Beth_Fakunle

i like it. the kids are adorable. too bad it isn't complete, but what's written was fun.

6mth
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sweetswander

well though I enjoyed reading the story in the beginning but later got bored of it I didn't like the character development of Lara and the children she is very overprotective to her children and does not even consider nates feeling it just feel like a stretch for me,,,

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1yr
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Taradasha

Love this story, but it hasn’t updated in over 6 months 😒

1yr
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Kelvin_Ward

I don't know how read this novel from start to end this too good

1yr
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diety91
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hi guys any of you has extra money please send me i hope to get a membership πŸ™

1yr
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Zarkia_Blair

This is the best novel I read since I came on WN

1yr
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Elina_M
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So easy to read or more like listen πŸ₯° nice story with cute werewolf side :)

1yr
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anuranjan_kumar

hi author! I like your story very much❀

2yr
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SilverLuna10

Love the story, hate the paywall xD. But seriously it's my favourite werewolf story I read. It's unique that Alpha's mate is human and that he doesn't have geolocation of her. I like how Nate realized that Lara is his mate and he has pups with her after meeting her after six years immediately instead of usual in C-novels hundreds of chapters where FL hide fact of children's father's identity from ML. I love also that while FL was virgin and didn't have other men than ML he was also inexperienced and then completely loyal during their break. I hate it when FL has to be pure while ML was fooling around with other women. I really love ML. He is perfect husband and father for hurt and traumatized Lara and children. I admire his patience to always put Lara first and let her take first step in intimacy instead of usual CEO's molesting FL to get her agree to sleep with him. And I really like that Lara needs some time to feel comfortable instead of going with him to bed because they're mates and it makes them attracted to each other. And love their gradual developing relationship. They actually get to know each other, go on dates, start with hugs and kisses to develop naturally to getting married soon. It is what really lacks in novels. I like their courtship even though they already have children. And Jaden and Scarlet are great. Love how protective they are of their mother and that they show some difficulties after being raised by single mother. They act like children their own age even if they are more mature and sensible because Lara had to leave them alone when she worked. Firstly neither children nor Nate were happy about each other. Then we see why they need father and that Nate fulfills that role even if in the beginning he didn't love his children yet. Their relationship also gradually developed from dislike to being comfortable with each other to loving each other. And even though Nate was reluctant of being father in the beginning though he still wanted his children and being constantly jealous of them taking all his mate's attention he still worked hard to get his children affection even if it was because Lara loves their children. Now he totally loves them and children also accepted him as their father. Review is only for first 300 chapters because like I said I hate paywall and need to gather fast-passes to continue story.

2yr
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ShaziyaSiddiqui

very unique and emotional topic, a completely family novel. go ahead I like this novel very much. once again congratulations for your beautiful work πŸ₯€πŸ₯°

2yr
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Sarrell_Schultz

I really enjoyed reading this at first.. but then I realized I got bored and couldn’t continue. The story development is SO SLOW and just felt like it was dragging. The way the kids were written was also frustrating because they were overprotective for far too long - it just got boring.

2yr
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DistractedByBooks

The characters are engaging, and the story pulls all the emotions. Nate found his fated mate and lost her in one night and day. As the Alpha for his pack, he has to manage the constant pain of a missing mate and continue to do his job leading his pack’s business as the CEO of LY Corp. Then one day, about 6 years later, his mate walked in as a new employee. Lara was looking for a new start after moving to Norwich with her 5-year-old twins. The last few years have forced them to move often because the kids aren’t fully human, and sometimes can’t control their shape or strength. Nate accepts the challenge to woo and win his mate, and to convince his pups that they are not losing their mother, but gaining a father.

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DistractedByBooks

I started reading, got completly hooked, and ended up unlocking everything. Well done! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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mafiya_rope

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Mirna_Pleitez

8i like that the father is trying to know his family that he mist 6 years of his children life and is trying to make it up to them and also try to be a family and Mary the mother of his kids and be a real family and also try to explain what his job is and how can they know each other more and get along.[img=recommend]πŸ˜€πŸ€—

2yr
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Asweetsmile1

I highly recommend this book. it has everything you are looking for in one book. 1. not to many unnecessary misunderstandings 2. one night stand 3. cute kids 4. alpha of all alphas 5. a female lead that isn't slow but can stand on her on foundation. 6. a mother's love 7. a jealous father 8. smart kids 9. romance and 10. happily ever after

2yr
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Drakaris

I was reluctant to start a story about werewolves.. cause honestly it's the most overused concept and it somehow justifies the possessive toxic relationships as soulmates. But i have to say the author has managed the supernatural and natural aspects in a very nice blend. Yes their is possessiness but it is not portrayed as something righteous and beautiful.Characters are not flawless and their growth is progressive and slow. It might be annoying for some readers who like fast paced novels, but the overall development of the story, each character individually and their relationship with each other is worth the wait. And kids are adorable and their problems according to their age are very realistic. I specifically like the male lead. To me female lead needs more growth and development and is not very charming at the moment. But i hope she'll get their. I love all the side characters (except villain, cuz his reasoning doesn't make any sense to me). I think villain's character is weak and not well developed to be qualified as good villain. LOL.πŸ˜‚ Overall this is a very engaging read with quality writing, feel good vibe and character growth. A must try!!πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ‘πŸ‘ keep up the good work author san..lots of best wishes πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰β€οΈ

2yr
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Luna_3358

This story is so lovely! The characters are mature and the writing really expresses everything without going over the top. I’m so happy I gave this book a chance. I can’t wait to read more from this author!

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2yr
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Amana_Mc

This story is really different it starts and you think same old same old and then it opens up and almost nothing is as you taught great job by the author..

2yr
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laura_29

I just found this treasure for less than 24 hours yet I can't get enough of it! I love how realistic the kids were acting towards their Dad, how Lara didn't expect anything from Nate and Nate's slowly getting used to being a father. He only wished to find the mate he lost, yet when he found her there were two little buns with her. Looking forward to them being a happy family of four! πŸ‘¨β€πŸ‘©β€πŸ‘§β€πŸ‘¦

3yr
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Amana_Mc

I really like this story its different than others I have read in this genere solooking forward to reading more,of it wish I was not si broke fight now Id buy the whole thing.

3yr
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Meza_Hana_9018

Good storyπŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ˜πŸ₯°πŸ˜πŸ€©πŸ₯°πŸ˜πŸ€©πŸ₯° How many chapter this story ?

3yr
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ivy_nguyen_5414

Not sure how I stumbled upon this story, but I'm glad I found this wonderful gem! I already love all the characters, and there are so many silly and funny moments and snide remarks that I find myself constantly laughing out loud and still thinking about that particular moment. I can't wait to see how everything works out, and I'm a hopeless romantic wishing for everyone's happily ever after πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³

3yr
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LoveAgoodHEA

This webnovel is the balm I needed after watching Japanese anime film 'Wolf Children' by Mamoru Hosoda. Hosoda's story had wolf cubs, too, but their human mother was a single, widowed human mother. We need a happily-ever-after (HEA) ending please.TIA xo

3yr
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Daoistt4psvi

The synopsis are really great made me want to read the book,especially the part you wrote "if you can't stand too much cuteness don't read it" that really got me lol.

3yr
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RMehrotra

Came accross some thing different where an Alpha is struggling for his mate attention...oh overbearing Alpha is so timid in front of his mate... nice one dear author, all the best ❀

3yr
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