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Fantastic fanfic, As even though I usually like reading fluff, i found this a good read so far. .
I’ll just say that i was excited there was finally a inspired inventor fic, and then you kinda ruined it by nerfing it. you practically just made Him an evergrowing tinker with how you’ve blackboxed his tech so no one else can copy his instructions. which is a bit of a downer when your doing a kingdom building fic.
good writing but bad mc and story, wouldnt recomend. ignore need 140 chars ignore need 140 chars ignore need 140 chars ignore need 140 chars
In just about any other isekai setting, an Inspired Inventor antihero would work. Not so in the Tensura world. The overall lighthearted nature of this setting means that the MC's personality does not fit, and she's always forced to either yield to Rimuru whenever they disagree, or actually succeed in turning the setting into a grimdark one. Neither is an enjoyable prospect, and it only results in the MC trying to act all cool and edgy, but only succeeding in being cringeworthy.
Pretty good, I recommend. MC is an Anti Hero in the truest sense, and he doesnt let his emotions guide him. He's very pragmatic but luckily, he still has a source of emotional logic by Rimuru, so he won't commit genocide just because it's the best thing to do.
Muy buena porque el autor se arriesgo a usar un cyoa de lo más conocido y supo escalarlo de forma clara y precisa sin dar un salto Muy op al colocar la tercera carga
This tinker is definitely five stars. ...(♡ω♡ ) ~♪♡˖꒰ᵕ༚ᵕ⑅꒱(｡・//ε//・｡)(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(〃ﾟ3ﾟ〃)꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡(~￣³￣)~(ʃƪ＾3＾）(っ˘з(˘⌣˘ )(๑˙❥˙๑)(灬º‿º灬)♡(◕દ◕)(♡ω♡ ) ~♪♥╣[-_-]╠♥(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤♡(ӦｖӦ｡)꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡♡˖꒰ᵕ༚ᵕ⑅꒱♡(> ਊ <)♡(｡・//ε//・｡)(〃ﾟ3ﾟ〃)(◕દ◕)(~￣³￣)~(●’3)♡(ε`●)(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(๑˙❥˙๑)
I love inspired inventor and a pity that it didn't have alot of fanfic for it.. Mostly in celestial forge or power manipulation.. This is a good idea.. I hate the mc simp though...
The amount of approval I want to express for this story's existence is on the level that can't be accurately represented by mere words. So I will use the star ratting system instead.
FINALLY!!! MUAHAHAHAHA!!! I found a novel of my taste. Oh how I like everything about science. Overall, the story had a great beginning I also love how the author created the MC. Keep it up author on such an awesome novel.
Finally someone understands. In novels it's always magic has limitless potential. But science is the same and much more in my opinion, seeing as they can do the same things just by the innovations of the mind, which in my opinion is a much more amazing phenomenon than magic
Story's great and all but i just wanna know. How much research did you do, Author. FILLER. FILLER. FILLER. FILLER. FILLER. FILLER. FILLER.
Fantastic fanfic, As even though I usually like reading fluff, i found this a good read so far. .
I’ll just say that i was excited there was finally a inspired inventor fic, and then you kinda ruined it by nerfing it. you practically just made Him an evergrowing tinker with how you’ve blackboxed his tech so no one else can copy his instructions. which is a bit of a downer when your doing a kingdom building fic.
good writing but bad mc and story, wouldnt recomend. ignore need 140 chars ignore need 140 chars ignore need 140 chars ignore need 140 chars
In just about any other isekai setting, an Inspired Inventor antihero would work. Not so in the Tensura world. The overall lighthearted nature of this setting means that the MC's personality does not fit, and she's always forced to either yield to Rimuru whenever they disagree, or actually succeed in turning the setting into a grimdark one. Neither is an enjoyable prospect, and it only results in the MC trying to act all cool and edgy, but only succeeding in being cringeworthy.
Pretty good, I recommend. MC is an Anti Hero in the truest sense, and he doesnt let his emotions guide him. He's very pragmatic but luckily, he still has a source of emotional logic by Rimuru, so he won't commit genocide just because it's the best thing to do.
Muy buena porque el autor se arriesgo a usar un cyoa de lo más conocido y supo escalarlo de forma clara y precisa sin dar un salto Muy op al colocar la tercera carga
This tinker is definitely five stars. ...(♡ω♡ ) ~♪♡˖꒰ᵕ༚ᵕ⑅꒱(｡・//ε//・｡)(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(〃ﾟ3ﾟ〃)꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡(~￣³￣)~(ʃƪ＾3＾）(っ˘з(˘⌣˘ )(๑˙❥˙๑)(灬º‿º灬)♡(◕દ◕)(♡ω♡ ) ~♪♥╣[-_-]╠♥(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤♡(ӦｖӦ｡)꒰⑅ᵕ༚ᵕ꒱˖♡♡˖꒰ᵕ༚ᵕ⑅꒱♡(> ਊ <)♡(｡・//ε//・｡)(〃ﾟ3ﾟ〃)(◕દ◕)(~￣³￣)~(●’3)♡(ε`●)(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(๑˙❥˙๑)
I love inspired inventor and a pity that it didn't have alot of fanfic for it.. Mostly in celestial forge or power manipulation.. This is a good idea.. I hate the mc simp though...
The amount of approval I want to express for this story's existence is on the level that can't be accurately represented by mere words. So I will use the star ratting system instead.
FINALLY!!! MUAHAHAHAHA!!! I found a novel of my taste. Oh how I like everything about science. Overall, the story had a great beginning I also love how the author created the MC. Keep it up author on such an awesome novel.
Finally someone understands. In novels it's always magic has limitless potential. But science is the same and much more in my opinion, seeing as they can do the same things just by the innovations of the mind, which in my opinion is a much more amazing phenomenon than magic
Story's great and all but i just wanna know. How much research did you do, Author. FILLER. FILLER. FILLER. FILLER. FILLER. FILLER. FILLER.