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Hello, it's me again, I just wanted to say that if you are a new reader I wanted to tell you the following. I have already edited the first chapters, which were very poorly translated. So I hope you give it a chance if you thought not to read it because of the criticism about the bad translation. I also did a small rewrite in the prologue so if you have already read it, I recommend that you do it again so that you understand what the future plot will be like. Thanks for your attention. I hope you enjoy my book.
I dropped this fanfic at the chapter 25 from too many stupid decisions the author wrote that the MC made. The way the main character acts is little too forced and not logical, he always coming to the logical conclusion a few steps too late. For me the concept and idea of the story was good but the execution could have been a lot better, so read at your own discretion.
The plot and characters are good, but the writing makes it not worth the effort.
absolutely love the story I've been reading since the first chapter I just really need to know has this project been dropped
I love all the chapters I've been a big fan since chapter one I just need to know is there any chance for this story to come back
love the story you did something beautiful you made a character strong but not so Opie that he breaks the plot including actually making a interesting character that does not just punch something very hard
it's been 3 months without a update on the next chapter, author when will the next chapter of be release pls. the wait is killing me. this highly recommended novel for readers.👍
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A good story suffering pointless drama. I enjoyed this story a lot, there's not a lot of vampire fics that ain't related to Twilight and I loved the change of pace. But I found that alike those stories there is a lot of pointless drama that for me ruins the story. The main character is meant to be a powerful vampire yet he seems to struggle a lot when fighting people that shouldn't in reality pose any threat to him. He tends to act my like a nerfed ghoul instead of the mighty vampire lord he is...
In my opinion your novel is amazing. The relationship between Toga and Akira is very cute. Another point that is making your novel cool are Akiras vampire powers. It is also nice that he has control over Toga. All in all I hope that you continue your good work and are not going to drop the novel in the future
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Honestly been finding and reading some great work on this app, but so far I think this is one of my favourites! Your writting is good and seems like it’s getting better aswell! So keep out the great work! And thanks for the amazing writing! I’m actually stuck in a hospital for a while so this reading is great!
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beyond trash. mc is a pedo and never thinks logically --‐----------------------------------------------‐--------------------------------------
vampirism quirk was interesting but the characters act way too cringy. the mc is a pedo also this is just a waste of good concept. i wish their was a mha mlfic that actually focused on progressing the story over grooming female characters so they like you in the future and building cringy harem
This fic is good just keep writing at ur own pace, the drama is actually ok and good I like the anti-hero concept in bhna, mc thought process is nice
Not my cup of tea.... too much forced plot stupid mc ... irritating Rob ... annoying plot .... i generally hate these kinds of plots 😑🤮😐
okay so it's all right but there is one problem with it the whole electricity torture scene as much as this is well written I just can't really read that kind of stuff so that's why the story development for me is zero but I do like the possibility of there being a vampire in my hero academia but I think it was done a little... badly in my opinion so if the author could just not write torture scenes like that it would be a wonderful book
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this was one of the best my hero academia fanfics I've ever read and it's a shame it only has 67 chapters, I recommend it, I'm sure you'll like it, I just don't give it 5 stars because it takes a while to update
1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 3. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 3. 5)фон мира - 3 6)Общая оценка - 3. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. 4) Character design - 3 5) background of the world - 3. 6) Overall rating - 3.
(Caught up as of chapter 66) Hey there, Acoms. Hope you didn’t drop this story, it’s really good and I think that it still has so much to go.
cool character concept, horrible writing though. characters thoughts and actions don't fit age supposedly being written; many many grammatical errors, sub-par character dialog, and full of predictable weird cleche's.
The story idea is good but the writing quality is bad but, as you said, you are a beginner then I guess it is expected. 。
Very good story. Séquence 2 chez le psy et le médecin traitant de la Concorde apt 11 is a lot of errors in the text and the other one is a bit too low I think it is a good idea to use the same time while different template for the next few days and then the next one is the best way to get a better idea of what you want to do with your own business and how you can make money online and make money online and get a good idea of what you want to do with your business and how to continue your business with your business and business goals and business objectives and objectives and objectives and objectives for your business objectives and objectives and objectives and objectives for your business objectives and objectives and objectives and objectives for your business.
It suits my taste tbh and since I already caught up to the latest chapter, I'm trying to find another fanfic of MHA. Still haven't found a decent one yet tho
When I started this novel the author left it up to the readers to make it a harem or not. I am not a fan of harems but I read through anyway. The Oc comes into his first relationship and it was beautiful. The relationship was believeable and thought out well. I stopped reading once author took the vote and harem won which in my opinion completely ruins the work he put in for the current relationship. Ruined all the previous chapters and build up just to make it another cliche harem story.
Reveal Spoiler Too lazy to write about the cons, but I really like this project. but I really like this project. but I really like this project. but I really like this project.
Hey, the author here. I just wanted to mention that I am a novice writer, this is my first story and it's nice to see people reading it, I hope you enjoy it. If you have any constructive criticism I will be happy to read it to improve. Ummm I should also mention that English is not my first language, so I hope you forgive me if there are any spelling or grammatical errors. If you want to support me you can go to my pat *** / acoms and even if you cannot support me financially I will be very grateful if you give a good review to the fanfic and give me a stone of power.
Hello, it's me again, I just wanted to say that if you are a new reader I wanted to tell you the following. I have already edited the first chapters, which were very poorly translated. So I hope you give it a chance if you thought not to read it because of the criticism about the bad translation. I also did a small rewrite in the prologue so if you have already read it, I recommend that you do it again so that you understand what the future plot will be like. Thanks for your attention. I hope you enjoy my book.
I dropped this fanfic at the chapter 25 from too many stupid decisions the author wrote that the MC made. The way the main character acts is little too forced and not logical, he always coming to the logical conclusion a few steps too late. For me the concept and idea of the story was good but the execution could have been a lot better, so read at your own discretion.
The plot and characters are good, but the writing makes it not worth the effort.
absolutely love the story I've been reading since the first chapter I just really need to know has this project been dropped
I love all the chapters I've been a big fan since chapter one I just need to know is there any chance for this story to come back
love the story you did something beautiful you made a character strong but not so Opie that he breaks the plot including actually making a interesting character that does not just punch something very hard
it's been 3 months without a update on the next chapter, author when will the next chapter of be release pls. the wait is killing me. this highly recommended novel for readers.👍
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A good story suffering pointless drama. I enjoyed this story a lot, there's not a lot of vampire fics that ain't related to Twilight and I loved the change of pace. But I found that alike those stories there is a lot of pointless drama that for me ruins the story. The main character is meant to be a powerful vampire yet he seems to struggle a lot when fighting people that shouldn't in reality pose any threat to him. He tends to act my like a nerfed ghoul instead of the mighty vampire lord he is...
In my opinion your novel is amazing. The relationship between Toga and Akira is very cute. Another point that is making your novel cool are Akiras vampire powers. It is also nice that he has control over Toga. All in all I hope that you continue your good work and are not going to drop the novel in the future
Reveal Spoiler Honestly been finding and reading some great work on this app, but so far I think this is one of my favourites! Your writting is good and seems like it’s getting better aswell! So keep out the great work! And thanks for the amazing writing! I’m actually stuck in a hospital for a while so this reading is great!
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beyond trash. mc is a pedo and never thinks logically --‐----------------------------------------------‐--------------------------------------
vampirism quirk was interesting but the characters act way too cringy. the mc is a pedo also this is just a waste of good concept. i wish their was a mha mlfic that actually focused on progressing the story over grooming female characters so they like you in the future and building cringy harem
This fic is good just keep writing at ur own pace, the drama is actually ok and good I like the anti-hero concept in bhna, mc thought process is nice
Not my cup of tea.... too much forced plot stupid mc ... irritating Rob ... annoying plot .... i generally hate these kinds of plots 😑🤮😐
okay so it's all right but there is one problem with it the whole electricity torture scene as much as this is well written I just can't really read that kind of stuff so that's why the story development for me is zero but I do like the possibility of there being a vampire in my hero academia but I think it was done a little... badly in my opinion so if the author could just not write torture scenes like that it would be a wonderful book
Reveal Spoiler I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
this was one of the best my hero academia fanfics I've ever read and it's a shame it only has 67 chapters, I recommend it, I'm sure you'll like it, I just don't give it 5 stars because it takes a while to update
1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 3. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 3. 5)фон мира - 3 6)Общая оценка - 3. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. 4) Character design - 3 5) background of the world - 3. 6) Overall rating - 3.
(Caught up as of chapter 66) Hey there, Acoms. Hope you didn’t drop this story, it’s really good and I think that it still has so much to go.
cool character concept, horrible writing though. characters thoughts and actions don't fit age supposedly being written; many many grammatical errors, sub-par character dialog, and full of predictable weird cleche's.
The story idea is good but the writing quality is bad but, as you said, you are a beginner then I guess it is expected. 。
Very good story. Séquence 2 chez le psy et le médecin traitant de la Concorde apt 11 is a lot of errors in the text and the other one is a bit too low I think it is a good idea to use the same time while different template for the next few days and then the next one is the best way to get a better idea of what you want to do with your own business and how you can make money online and make money online and get a good idea of what you want to do with your business and how to continue your business with your business and business goals and business objectives and objectives and objectives and objectives for your business objectives and objectives and objectives and objectives for your business objectives and objectives and objectives and objectives for your business.
It suits my taste tbh and since I already caught up to the latest chapter, I'm trying to find another fanfic of MHA. Still haven't found a decent one yet tho
When I started this novel the author left it up to the readers to make it a harem or not. I am not a fan of harems but I read through anyway. The Oc comes into his first relationship and it was beautiful. The relationship was believeable and thought out well. I stopped reading once author took the vote and harem won which in my opinion completely ruins the work he put in for the current relationship. Ruined all the previous chapters and build up just to make it another cliche harem story.
Reveal Spoiler Too lazy to write about the cons, but I really like this project. but I really like this project. but I really like this project. but I really like this project.
Hey, the author here. I just wanted to mention that I am a novice writer, this is my first story and it's nice to see people reading it, I hope you enjoy it. If you have any constructive criticism I will be happy to read it to improve. Ummm I should also mention that English is not my first language, so I hope you forgive me if there are any spelling or grammatical errors. If you want to support me you can go to my pat *** / acoms and even if you cannot support me financially I will be very grateful if you give a good review to the fanfic and give me a stone of power.