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I love the story so far, it’s too short to go fully in depth at this time but the main characters interactions with the others is fun to read plus I just love novels or fanfics that take place in games while this one takes place in two as of now. I am overjoyed to see Only Sense Online getting some love as I never see it anywhere yet it’s so good. Can’t wait to see how the interactions with the original Bofuri cast will happen, and I really want to see the mc reach maple levels of OP. Pochi and Tama were wonderful touches to the story it’s as if they’re the little mascots of the chat group and you just gotta love seeing their shenanigans. The upload schedule leaves nothing to be desired it’s quick enough to mantain my interest in the story. Hope you keep this up author it’s loads of fun, I was half tempted to write something mean just to F with you but meh.
are you dropping it or not. i have been reading it since i first saw it and continued since and i would like to read more of it.
are you planning to continue this book or not. because I have been waiting for at least a year for it to be updated.
This novel is one of the best i've ever read in Webnovel. But there is no continuation for a long time. Author-san, is this novel dropped?
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I still not read any chaps but i want to give my review too hahahaha. Yeah i like this sinopsis Good work keep it up 👍
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hello! I've read your story and I've let it update so I have more to read. I would like to ask if you could translate it into Spanish on Wattpad
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the story and character is good. All members of group chat is not too dependent to admin. there is also quest when admin is joined when he is go to another quest alone. Although admin is too op as he can use his character in game and member also too few. there is no random invite from member of another universe (anime or game). overall it's good novel to read. Well done!!!. hopefully thic can be over 1000+ chapters and involve more universe. Keep it up!!!
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Leí todos los capítulos que has subido actual mente y debo decir que me gusta mucho la historia, la agregue en mi biblioteca por un tiempo quedó olvidada pero ahora que la leí me gustó mucho. Debo decir que de todos los fic que eh leído de chats grupales, me gusta que te tomes las cosas con calma desarrollando los personajes y no apresures las cosas en sus interacciones. Como sea me encanta asta ahora espero los futuros capítulos 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Legalzin, até que dá pra passar o tempo. .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Ini fanfic yang bagus dan saya suka jalan ceritanya. Saya harap semakin cepat updated dan lebih seru lagi ceritanya.. Semangat author sama 😂.... Saya akan dukung karya anda
you wont add Free Life Fantasy Online: I’ve Started Immortal Princess? well the mc of that novel isn't really a chunni but i like that novel more than only sense cause why not just make a mc a female instead of a boy so girly that the ai mistaken it for a girl
Overall fun and cute story, but how do I say this……….the pacing………………………..::…………………….::::::::…….:;.:…;,.;;.;..:;.,:.:,.:…;…:::;..:….:……………….
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If you're looking for some information about this book before diving in and reading it, then look no further! The Writing Quality of this fanfiction is not something too glamorous or technical. If you looking for that kind of novel/fanfiction (a fanfiction that was written in a very professional manner), then you're better off looking for something else because this is just not it. This is also slow paced and DOES NOT have action in each and every chapter. This is not an Action novel but a Slice of Life one with bits and pieces of unprofessionally written action and/or comedy if you could call it that. Maybe skits or an attempt to be funny would be a better term. Story Development is nothing special. Again, this is a Wish Fulfillment fanfiction and the author clearly do not aspire to write some phenomenal fanfiction that would blow everyone's mind. As he said multiple times already, "What I want is to write something that I could relax my mind in while doing so and not some overly dramatic sh*tstorm. That's not my style and never will be. Dramatic sh*ts are already plaguing everyone's life right now so I, for one, don't enjoy writing about sob stories"(Basically my interpretation of his replies to the comments. Don't take my word for it though). Maybe, after reading bits and pieces of the novel, you'll go like, "Oh, that's something that's already in the original! Can't you write something more ORIGINAL, Author!?" Well, in my humble opinion, you should go look at which section you are right now. What type of book is this? A fanfiction. What style did the author say he wanted it to be in the introduction? A Wish Fulfillment and/or Self Insert(something along those lines). So, clearly, this isn't exactly the place where you should be looking for and mayhaps even demanding the story to be ORIGINAL. That's because, no matter how hard any author try, a fanfiction will always be that, an fan art that was made by a, obviously, fan who likes the original work. That's it. Original Idea or not, slap it in a fanfiction and it's already gonna reek of the same smell as the original story. If you want something original, go read the original titles in this site. There's many of them and your entire lifetime is probably not even enough to read all of them. Character Design. Enough said. The author chose characters from other original novels that he likes(maybe?) while trying his best to make them stay true to their characters. Whether he failed or not is up to your view about it. I'd like to say that he did quite well but it obviously needs more work, a lot of it. From what I heard, he even went as far as reading the original material a few times to get the info he couldn't get from the fandomwikis. Updating Stability. This fanfiction updates pretty much everyday. This novel started in around November and it's now in chapter 160. What can you say about the update schedule? World Background. This one hasn't been explored too much so I can't say much about it. Overall, this novel is not for someone who likes to read a novel filled with developments each and every chapter. I myself read this to pass time and to just chill around. Well, I hope this will help you future readers in deciding whether or not you want to read this work or not.
I like this project, but it made it boring and gg... .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
well, it's the first review I've done, but I really liked the story and how it has a slow and calm rhythm, I really like the conversations between the characters, well I don't know what else to say, just thank you for continuing with this story and good luck from now on.
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is mc op? i saw the overpowered tag so I read the first few chaps but there aren't any hints or anything that lead him in becoming op. Can someone tell me if mc is really op
loving this novel so far good work author-sama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Currently up to chapter 91, and honestly these past 20 chapters or so have been unbelievably boring. Nothing major has been happening, nor anything all that interesting; it has mostly just been a continued line of Isekai tropes. It has really been killing my desire to read it all that much, I've only been able to squish in 4 chapters max per day simply because it has been so uninteresting. I don't yet know about anything last this chapter, but the earlier chapters have been extremely interesting and fun to read. The MC went by a pretty interesting build to read about and the storyline has been progressing extremely well. However, my point still stands, the chapters from around the late 70s to (up to what I know) Chapter 91. It could be even longer but all these chapters have just been so boring boring me.
Author-san,, i know i may be late but i would like a gender bent hououin kyouma 4star cause I haven't started reading yet, i will update it after i caught up to the latest.
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A shameless author giving a five star review to his own work here! Don't look at me. It's natural that I'd support myself. Now, onto the juicy stuffs. If you guys are curious as to which anime worlds Shun will be going to, ask no further! Just go to the introduction, one of my Auxiliary Chapters, and read the spoilers there! I pretty much wrote whatever I wanted to say to all first time readers of my fanfiction in my Introduction so… yeah. Go ahead and check it out!
I love the story so far, it’s too short to go fully in depth at this time but the main characters interactions with the others is fun to read plus I just love novels or fanfics that take place in games while this one takes place in two as of now. I am overjoyed to see Only Sense Online getting some love as I never see it anywhere yet it’s so good. Can’t wait to see how the interactions with the original Bofuri cast will happen, and I really want to see the mc reach maple levels of OP. Pochi and Tama were wonderful touches to the story it’s as if they’re the little mascots of the chat group and you just gotta love seeing their shenanigans. The upload schedule leaves nothing to be desired it’s quick enough to mantain my interest in the story. Hope you keep this up author it’s loads of fun, I was half tempted to write something mean just to F with you but meh.
are you dropping it or not. i have been reading it since i first saw it and continued since and i would like to read more of it.
are you planning to continue this book or not. because I have been waiting for at least a year for it to be updated.
This novel is one of the best i've ever read in Webnovel. But there is no continuation for a long time. Author-san, is this novel dropped?
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I still not read any chaps but i want to give my review too hahahaha. Yeah i like this sinopsis Good work keep it up 👍
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hello! I've read your story and I've let it update so I have more to read. I would like to ask if you could translate it into Spanish on Wattpad
Good job! Continue in the same spirit. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
the story and character is good. All members of group chat is not too dependent to admin. there is also quest when admin is joined when he is go to another quest alone. Although admin is too op as he can use his character in game and member also too few. there is no random invite from member of another universe (anime or game). overall it's good novel to read. Well done!!!. hopefully thic can be over 1000+ chapters and involve more universe. Keep it up!!!
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Leí todos los capítulos que has subido actual mente y debo decir que me gusta mucho la historia, la agregue en mi biblioteca por un tiempo quedó olvidada pero ahora que la leí me gustó mucho. Debo decir que de todos los fic que eh leído de chats grupales, me gusta que te tomes las cosas con calma desarrollando los personajes y no apresures las cosas en sus interacciones. Como sea me encanta asta ahora espero los futuros capítulos 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Legalzin, até que dá pra passar o tempo. .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Ini fanfic yang bagus dan saya suka jalan ceritanya. Saya harap semakin cepat updated dan lebih seru lagi ceritanya.. Semangat author sama 😂.... Saya akan dukung karya anda
you wont add Free Life Fantasy Online: I’ve Started Immortal Princess? well the mc of that novel isn't really a chunni but i like that novel more than only sense cause why not just make a mc a female instead of a boy so girly that the ai mistaken it for a girl
Overall fun and cute story, but how do I say this……….the pacing………………………..::…………………….::::::::…….:;.:…;,.;;.;..:;.,:.:,.:…;…:::;..:….:……………….
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If you're looking for some information about this book before diving in and reading it, then look no further! The Writing Quality of this fanfiction is not something too glamorous or technical. If you looking for that kind of novel/fanfiction (a fanfiction that was written in a very professional manner), then you're better off looking for something else because this is just not it. This is also slow paced and DOES NOT have action in each and every chapter. This is not an Action novel but a Slice of Life one with bits and pieces of unprofessionally written action and/or comedy if you could call it that. Maybe skits or an attempt to be funny would be a better term. Story Development is nothing special. Again, this is a Wish Fulfillment fanfiction and the author clearly do not aspire to write some phenomenal fanfiction that would blow everyone's mind. As he said multiple times already, "What I want is to write something that I could relax my mind in while doing so and not some overly dramatic sh*tstorm. That's not my style and never will be. Dramatic sh*ts are already plaguing everyone's life right now so I, for one, don't enjoy writing about sob stories"(Basically my interpretation of his replies to the comments. Don't take my word for it though). Maybe, after reading bits and pieces of the novel, you'll go like, "Oh, that's something that's already in the original! Can't you write something more ORIGINAL, Author!?" Well, in my humble opinion, you should go look at which section you are right now. What type of book is this? A fanfiction. What style did the author say he wanted it to be in the introduction? A Wish Fulfillment and/or Self Insert(something along those lines). So, clearly, this isn't exactly the place where you should be looking for and mayhaps even demanding the story to be ORIGINAL. That's because, no matter how hard any author try, a fanfiction will always be that, an fan art that was made by a, obviously, fan who likes the original work. That's it. Original Idea or not, slap it in a fanfiction and it's already gonna reek of the same smell as the original story. If you want something original, go read the original titles in this site. There's many of them and your entire lifetime is probably not even enough to read all of them. Character Design. Enough said. The author chose characters from other original novels that he likes(maybe?) while trying his best to make them stay true to their characters. Whether he failed or not is up to your view about it. I'd like to say that he did quite well but it obviously needs more work, a lot of it. From what I heard, he even went as far as reading the original material a few times to get the info he couldn't get from the fandomwikis. Updating Stability. This fanfiction updates pretty much everyday. This novel started in around November and it's now in chapter 160. What can you say about the update schedule? World Background. This one hasn't been explored too much so I can't say much about it. Overall, this novel is not for someone who likes to read a novel filled with developments each and every chapter. I myself read this to pass time and to just chill around. Well, I hope this will help you future readers in deciding whether or not you want to read this work or not.
I like this project, but it made it boring and gg... .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
well, it's the first review I've done, but I really liked the story and how it has a slow and calm rhythm, I really like the conversations between the characters, well I don't know what else to say, just thank you for continuing with this story and good luck from now on.
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is mc op? i saw the overpowered tag so I read the first few chaps but there aren't any hints or anything that lead him in becoming op. Can someone tell me if mc is really op
loving this novel so far good work author-sama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Currently up to chapter 91, and honestly these past 20 chapters or so have been unbelievably boring. Nothing major has been happening, nor anything all that interesting; it has mostly just been a continued line of Isekai tropes. It has really been killing my desire to read it all that much, I've only been able to squish in 4 chapters max per day simply because it has been so uninteresting. I don't yet know about anything last this chapter, but the earlier chapters have been extremely interesting and fun to read. The MC went by a pretty interesting build to read about and the storyline has been progressing extremely well. However, my point still stands, the chapters from around the late 70s to (up to what I know) Chapter 91. It could be even longer but all these chapters have just been so boring boring me.
Author-san,, i know i may be late but i would like a gender bent hououin kyouma 4star cause I haven't started reading yet, i will update it after i caught up to the latest.
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A shameless author giving a five star review to his own work here! Don't look at me. It's natural that I'd support myself. Now, onto the juicy stuffs. If you guys are curious as to which anime worlds Shun will be going to, ask no further! Just go to the introduction, one of my Auxiliary Chapters, and read the spoilers there! I pretty much wrote whatever I wanted to say to all first time readers of my fanfiction in my Introduction so… yeah. Go ahead and check it out!