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good history great characters update is as autor telled great potential world background pretty good very good background and character problems will affect the story
Although there are some grammatical and orthographic mistakes you can make sense and tell what the author has in mind I personally think that the story is nice and I also like the references, the idea with the two mc's point of view is also refreshing I'm looking forward to the next chapters and seeing how the series progresses.
The story is good apart from a few grammatical mistakes made. At least in my opinion, the grammatical mistakes do not obstruct the meaning of sentences so it's all good. By the way, if any of you guys like fantasy -action, you should try a recent novel called Dimensional overhaul.
good history great characters update is as autor telled great potential world background pretty good very good background and character problems will affect the story
Although there are some grammatical and orthographic mistakes you can make sense and tell what the author has in mind I personally think that the story is nice and I also like the references, the idea with the two mc's point of view is also refreshing I'm looking forward to the next chapters and seeing how the series progresses.
The story is good apart from a few grammatical mistakes made. At least in my opinion, the grammatical mistakes do not obstruct the meaning of sentences so it's all good. By the way, if any of you guys like fantasy -action, you should try a recent novel called Dimensional overhaul.