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The God of Life and Death was assaulted by eight other Gods and went to his divine slumber. When he woke up, he was no longer in the era that he knew. He woke up in the modern era where there were no Gods.
Follow the protagonist as he returns to his peak. But, the question is: can he still return to his peak? Or will he return to his divine slumber never to wake up again?
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In ancient times, the world was dominated by the gods. They rule with love and care for their subjects. They protect and treat them as their own.
But where do gods come from? Some say they are the manifestation of beliefs. Some also say that gods exist along with the universe while others say they are supreme since they are the ones who created the universe.
Read the book and discover the secrets of a God and the eternal secret of the world.
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Write a reviewthis novel is interesting i liked it, i hope that in this novel there is no romance. KAKAKAKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKA
Well I read up to chapter 25 and I can say I enjoy the story. There are some grammatical mistakes and mixed up pronouns (using he instead of she and vice-versa) which can sometimes becomes confusing and might have to reread a paragraph a few times. I like the MC, he certainly feels like a god and doesn't necessarily care about mortals besides their value as divine power generators (at least up to ch 25). He is prideful and he doesn't let himself be kicked around by others like other novel protagonists who try to keep a low profile. A suggestion that i have is that when the MC becomes too powerful and the story start to become dull because there is no conflict, you can always write povs from side characters and their struggles to achieve their lords wishes and stuff like that, or pov of the mc enemies, their struggle against a literal god. Kinda like in overlord. That novel would have been boring if it would have been just about Momonga. TL;DR This story is very enjoyable with a lot of potential. Although it has a few mistakes I had fun with it and i recommend it. Cannot wait the to see this novel take off and maybe even reach the top 10. SPOILERS AHEAD I see the author tries to add elements of romance with Anika which I don't mind if done well, but feels a bit forced with him feeling some strange attraction towards her or something, (which could be explained by him assimilating a mortal soul, or simply the hormones of the mortal body) but the author hasn't explained the attraction yet. Writing Quality 3.5/5 As i said there are some grammar mistakes here and there, and sometimes it can make the story confusing. These mistake are really important to get fixed because it can drive away new reader and can really hurt the chances of this story to take off. I might be a little harsh with this rating but sometimes it breaks the flow and immersion of the novel when Anika suddenly becomes a man. But the grammar is better than most other novels here. Story Development 4/5 There are only 25 chapters atm so I can't really say anything about it. But from what I read it's pretty nice. We are learning together with the MC about this world and it's system of power. Character Design 4/5 Well the characters are good, at least that's what i think. I like plague master. Update Stability 5/5 THIS MAN IS A BEAST 19 CHAPTERS IN A WEEK!!! World Background 5/5 There are not much chapters, but i have faith in the author from what i have seen up until now. Good luck author-san, and wish you all the best to you and your novel. I will be watching your career with great interest.
Reveal SpoilerMy only question is if there will be a harem, I mean, he's a god, I think it's necessary. I add the other star if positive. I saw that in your previous novel there was a harem label. By the way, I have not read your previous novel because it seems that the main character was not dominated despite controlling destiny.
It has been a fun read so far, the author has created a unique world. Despite the fast pace, the character development was good, which made the story enjoyable to read. Way to go author, all the best.
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The premise is interesting enough, and the story itself holds up quite well, with the writing and characters only enhancing the experience. It's an enjoyable time to be sure.
Amazing novel! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more chapters to release! And don't keep us hanging, dear author! I read everything in one go, but can't wait now!
The writing is pretty good. A few minor mistakes, but nothing too serious. The pacing and flow of the story is enjoyable. We get a prologue chapter at the start that establishes a lot about the world and the following chapters do a good job at continuing this.
I to say this is a story with great potential. grammar: good overall, I did not find much in term of mistakes or grammatical errors. Flow: the flow is nice and things just fall nicely in place so there is no difficulty reading or following events. story: you could just read the synopsis, but I have to say that it's a nice touch to merge fantasy elements with the modern setting. The chapters a quite long, whether that is a plus or minus is for you to decide, I just wanted to inform you. Finally, good job to the author, you are on the right path here with a story that has a lot of potential so keep going.
Read this novel! It’s awesome! Grammar is good. Plot is interesting. The world building is really good. Not too complicated, but is very interesting. Characters are great. I love the mc. Writing is great. You know what? Just read it. This is a threat 👹 I’m kidding Or am I?
very good novel. It started with the introduction of divine spirit and a city. At first I thought it is a small city but then it turns out that the city is larger than half the Earth or the modern world he found himself awake in. Very good novel so far as now I'm in chap 7. Only.
The plot is very different and highly interesting😇😇 author's skill in expressing the chapters is very good, moreover good grammar and updating regularly, I just read few chapters but I can say that this book is highly addicting[img=update][img=update][img=update]
A uniquely told and well written novel. So compelling, the reader won’t be able to put it down. The god of life and death is an intriging main character with a lot of impressive power. And the way it’s described, down to the philosophy of it is in itself compelling. The further the reader goes, the more intense it gets. A must read.
I have you 5 stars for the world background because when I was reading, I could easily picture the world in which our MC lives in. I also noticed that you paid attention to things like grammar and sentence structure so it was lovely to read each chapter. This novel has potential so I hope you'll keep working hard and doing your best.
Okay, no romance but I love this book keep it up author love your work, great job for jotting this down !! Love the characters and the description keep this up, I highly recommend this novel.
The words used to describe the world and the events that take in place in it are wonderful and filled with so much fantastical whim. I really liked how much time you used to describe the city of festivities, however, I did find that many of the things that used to describe are repeated several times but are just phrased differently and could do with a trim of the excess.
CREATIVE! I really appreciated how the author created an own world and portrayed it in words beautifully. The plot is intriguing and unique. The character design and the conversations(mainly the comparisons) are done well. Overall, it is a nice read!! Will continue reading!! Keep Going!!
Okay so, I am here for a review. To be honest, I am not into fantasy stuff, BUT, this novel is unique and amazing. I read some chapters and it piqued my interest right away. This novel has great potential ahead. Keep up the great work!!! upload more chapters, your readers wants more 🙂
Author Young_Master_Jay
Review time~ I only read 3 chapters and this is what I think about it, The story started with brief explanation of the two realm death and life which attracted my attention. and you wrote it very well and I felt as if a anime is palyijg inside my head. Then at second chapter we get to see the ml ( maybe) in modern Era which was a nice choice but....to think that everyone will have power seems good but will 3020 really be like that with gangsters? It feels a bit off...well then again it's fantasy so anything can happen. And as for the main character back story it was sad and realistic which is a plus point ( bf r@ped his sister *sigh* bitter reality of our world) And last but not the least~ Good work author, you are truly hardworking!
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