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Sixth here, the author ^^ I wrote two stories after ending my ongoing ones, and this one is by far the most fun to write for me. I will do my best to give daily updates, around 1-3 chapters. The usual update rate is 2 chaps daily, but I often throw another one ^^ Come and hang out on my discord too ^^ (Link in synopsis)
As an author myself I just wanna say this book is amazing, it keeps you hooked from beginning to end with the uniqueness of a guy who simply loves fire! Not to mention the way his character grows more mature and betters himself as he experiences life. The ending was kind of rushed I saw WAYY more potential for what could’ve been. But when you’v been writing a book this long its only natural the ending gets slightly rushed. And I love how the marked that the story would continue on with his children and Milkyona had even reincarnated to look over the new crimson dragon. 🔥 Keep it up man!
I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON
Loved it lol. Wish it was 50-100 chapters more since I would have liked to see more of both worlds from reylins perspective. Story did feel just a bit too fast for me but still great time all in all
Gotta say I loved this story. Between world design and character design, Sixth really did a wonderful job setting an entertaining stage to tell a great story. If there's any complaint... its the last ten chapters or so. It becomes rather obvious that the author's desire to tell their story had diminished. To say the ending is rushed is like saying a bullet train is fast. Altogether the story is wonderful, its just that when it comes time to face the Nerven Race, the Ascended and the Sin of Pride... the earlier storytelling is thrown out the window. Each conclusion is a single chapter that equates to the mc wants X to happen and it does... cause the super strong enemies he faces early on are all wet tissue paper at the end. And not cause Reylin grew stronger... he just instantly has what he needs cause the story needed to end. Still a rushed ending doesn't spoil the read, so give it a go and when Reylin rescues his second earth concubine take that as the conclusion rather than the tripe that follows.
Nice writing but too stupid mc.I quit. Lalalalalalalalalallalalalalala Lalalalalalalalalallalalalalala Lalalalalalalalalallalalalalala Lalalalalalalalalallalalalalala Lalalalalalalalalallalalalalala Lalalalalalalalalallalalalalala
definitely did not get hooked by the cover.. yep definitely not.. i umm.. got hooked by the synopsis hmm yes the synopsis.. what a beautiful synopsis, those beautiful curves.. what a great cursive font, and wow! those huge round... bold letters, they look very bree.. readable *cough* *cough*
honestly, I am enjoying this more than I thought. kinda hope we get more of Trying and yuki. also Layla could use another chapter as well.
Quite a fast paced story but I liked it. A few more details would have been appreciated in some cases… like his family past and background but it was a good one. Good job and good luck to the writer.[img=coins][img=coins]
I loved the story, characters, plot. The beginning was great, middle was fantastic. The climax... was where it dropped off. The pacing just went nuts and it really hurt the great things you had set up. So by the ending, the resolution just did not feel rewarding. for one, you developed Aria so well and she became one if the best characters, yet she gets zero screen time in the ending. Not to mention Yvonne. She was turning into a great antagonist but just gets thrown in the background then randomly written off. it's a shame because this story had so much potential and I still loved it. But it just gets extremely rushed to the ending. I look forward to reading more of your stuff and thanks for writing this story.
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not even 2 chapters and it already made me laugh!! It's been a while since my mood was this good lol,..................................................................
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Honestly, I liked it. Concept was nice, and not common. The MC is, to put it in a bad way, weird, to put it in a good way, he's just eccentric. For me, his personality is a breath of fresh air. Story is pretty nice, also it has a good twist for the vr genre. I can let that weak/inconsistent gaming system slide. I'd say this is pretty unique. My only qualm is about the grammar mistakes. Like using the wrong words but similar words, or confusing sentence construction sometimes. But they are all readable, if anything, it must be because of writing fatigue or because there is no editor.
The author came up with a great premise and the inital 50 or so chapters do a great job with it. However, after that the story starts to feel less like we’re following a pyromaniac and more like we’re following some generic fire mage who has a special class. He no longer has those moments that defined his character and instead theyre replaced with edgy statements or moves. The plot gets confusing and riddled with events that have little purpose.
Great stroy but the climax is not good.Starting story I found little bit messy.It can be more short.The ending part is not soo intresting but the starting is amazing 🖐️
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Wonderful, great, perfect, incredible? To continue like this, without a doubt, one of my favorite novels. I like Reylin's personality. How he has transmitted his emotions to the game, bringing out another facet of him; although I wish that, in real life, he would also do more than just depend on his parents. I suppose he is still young and maturing or will he live like this forever? Harem: Aria as the leader of the harem, please. Layla, Maya, Steel Melody, Yuki and Emilia and more? Titiana, for example. I like them all.
Interesting story so far.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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you writing style is so confusing I need to read couple of time to understand it. Overall good idea but bad delivery. ,........................
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You really shouldn't let him hide his identity there are to many like that and it gets bad as the story goes on I really like the novel so far keep it up.
After peering deep into the author's soul I have learned that he needs a pic of his favorite cat to motivate him into write more.~~~~~~~~~~~
Sixth here, the author ^^ I wrote two stories after ending my ongoing ones, and this one is by far the most fun to write for me. I will do my best to give daily updates, around 1-3 chapters. The usual update rate is 2 chaps daily, but I often throw another one ^^ Come and hang out on my discord too ^^ (Link in synopsis)
As an author myself I just wanna say this book is amazing, it keeps you hooked from beginning to end with the uniqueness of a guy who simply loves fire! Not to mention the way his character grows more mature and betters himself as he experiences life. The ending was kind of rushed I saw WAYY more potential for what could’ve been. But when you’v been writing a book this long its only natural the ending gets slightly rushed. And I love how the marked that the story would continue on with his children and Milkyona had even reincarnated to look over the new crimson dragon. 🔥 Keep it up man!
I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON I LOVE ARSON
Loved it lol. Wish it was 50-100 chapters more since I would have liked to see more of both worlds from reylins perspective. Story did feel just a bit too fast for me but still great time all in all
Gotta say I loved this story. Between world design and character design, Sixth really did a wonderful job setting an entertaining stage to tell a great story. If there's any complaint... its the last ten chapters or so. It becomes rather obvious that the author's desire to tell their story had diminished. To say the ending is rushed is like saying a bullet train is fast. Altogether the story is wonderful, its just that when it comes time to face the Nerven Race, the Ascended and the Sin of Pride... the earlier storytelling is thrown out the window. Each conclusion is a single chapter that equates to the mc wants X to happen and it does... cause the super strong enemies he faces early on are all wet tissue paper at the end. And not cause Reylin grew stronger... he just instantly has what he needs cause the story needed to end. Still a rushed ending doesn't spoil the read, so give it a go and when Reylin rescues his second earth concubine take that as the conclusion rather than the tripe that follows.
Nice writing but too stupid mc.I quit. Lalalalalalalalalallalalalalala Lalalalalalalalalallalalalalala Lalalalalalalalalallalalalalala Lalalalalalalalalallalalalalala Lalalalalalalalalallalalalalala Lalalalalalalalalallalalalalala
definitely did not get hooked by the cover.. yep definitely not.. i umm.. got hooked by the synopsis hmm yes the synopsis.. what a beautiful synopsis, those beautiful curves.. what a great cursive font, and wow! those huge round... bold letters, they look very bree.. readable *cough* *cough*
honestly, I am enjoying this more than I thought. kinda hope we get more of Trying and yuki. also Layla could use another chapter as well.
Quite a fast paced story but I liked it. A few more details would have been appreciated in some cases… like his family past and background but it was a good one. Good job and good luck to the writer.[img=coins][img=coins]
I loved the story, characters, plot. The beginning was great, middle was fantastic. The climax... was where it dropped off. The pacing just went nuts and it really hurt the great things you had set up. So by the ending, the resolution just did not feel rewarding. for one, you developed Aria so well and she became one if the best characters, yet she gets zero screen time in the ending. Not to mention Yvonne. She was turning into a great antagonist but just gets thrown in the background then randomly written off. it's a shame because this story had so much potential and I still loved it. But it just gets extremely rushed to the ending. I look forward to reading more of your stuff and thanks for writing this story.
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not even 2 chapters and it already made me laugh!! It's been a while since my mood was this good lol,..................................................................
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Honestly, I liked it. Concept was nice, and not common. The MC is, to put it in a bad way, weird, to put it in a good way, he's just eccentric. For me, his personality is a breath of fresh air. Story is pretty nice, also it has a good twist for the vr genre. I can let that weak/inconsistent gaming system slide. I'd say this is pretty unique. My only qualm is about the grammar mistakes. Like using the wrong words but similar words, or confusing sentence construction sometimes. But they are all readable, if anything, it must be because of writing fatigue or because there is no editor.
The author came up with a great premise and the inital 50 or so chapters do a great job with it. However, after that the story starts to feel less like we’re following a pyromaniac and more like we’re following some generic fire mage who has a special class. He no longer has those moments that defined his character and instead theyre replaced with edgy statements or moves. The plot gets confusing and riddled with events that have little purpose.
Great stroy but the climax is not good.Starting story I found little bit messy.It can be more short.The ending part is not soo intresting but the starting is amazing 🖐️
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Wonderful, great, perfect, incredible? To continue like this, without a doubt, one of my favorite novels. I like Reylin's personality. How he has transmitted his emotions to the game, bringing out another facet of him; although I wish that, in real life, he would also do more than just depend on his parents. I suppose he is still young and maturing or will he live like this forever? Harem: Aria as the leader of the harem, please. Layla, Maya, Steel Melody, Yuki and Emilia and more? Titiana, for example. I like them all.
Interesting story so far.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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you writing style is so confusing I need to read couple of time to understand it. Overall good idea but bad delivery. ,........................
Venia por algo de +18 ya que no encontraba nada interesante solo puedo decir que tiene potencial ****************************************************************************************************************************************encontraba nada interesante solo puedo decir que tiene potencial *****************************************************************************************************************************************
You really shouldn't let him hide his identity there are to many like that and it gets bad as the story goes on I really like the novel so far keep it up.
After peering deep into the author's soul I have learned that he needs a pic of his favorite cat to motivate him into write more.~~~~~~~~~~~