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This book is very well written with few to no spelling mistakes or gramatical errors. Its premise is interesting and its hook really gets you. Its even a troll in that its title is of the world saver system but the system is barely ever used and you never see the weird screens thingy that webnovelists try to use to convey what the system looks like. My only gripe is that the MC starts out already pretty strong and so it makes it harder to get a read on his character besides Gary Stu. Overall its pretty good and chill, definetly something you can read a couple chaps every day of as a relaxing read of quirky parelel universes.
Ditto to the previous comment start working on your other book again. Also I really like to book it well if you thought were him both I woul love it.
PLEASE FINISH THE WEDDING ALREADY AHSHDJFGSNSKXKCJF FNNDMDAHAJKCICNFBDKSOSHXHDBDNDKSOSHXHBXBDKSOSKXHXBXBBAJSOJ also congrats on the new book
First thing first, SHAMELESS AUTHOR REVIEW! I plan to prioritize the warlock story over this one. But my hope is to update both constantly. I have already written a lot of chapters for this and they are set to release on the schedule of two a day. Expect fights with aliens. Mecha battles. gun fights. Secret agent missions. Some detective work. Military clashes. Wizard battle and probably some cultivation fights. It can be summed up to include all types of action but my plan is to display it in a way that is exciting, intriguing and fun. my biggest focus is on letting it become a mess of nonsense. Enjoy!
This book is very well written with few to no spelling mistakes or gramatical errors. Its premise is interesting and its hook really gets you. Its even a troll in that its title is of the world saver system but the system is barely ever used and you never see the weird screens thingy that webnovelists try to use to convey what the system looks like. My only gripe is that the MC starts out already pretty strong and so it makes it harder to get a read on his character besides Gary Stu. Overall its pretty good and chill, definetly something you can read a couple chaps every day of as a relaxing read of quirky parelel universes.
Ditto to the previous comment start working on your other book again. Also I really like to book it well if you thought were him both I woul love it.
PLEASE FINISH THE WEDDING ALREADY AHSHDJFGSNSKXKCJF FNNDMDAHAJKCICNFBDKSOSHXHDBDNDKSOSHXHBXBDKSOSKXHXBXBBAJSOJ also congrats on the new book
First thing first, SHAMELESS AUTHOR REVIEW! I plan to prioritize the warlock story over this one. But my hope is to update both constantly. I have already written a lot of chapters for this and they are set to release on the schedule of two a day. Expect fights with aliens. Mecha battles. gun fights. Secret agent missions. Some detective work. Military clashes. Wizard battle and probably some cultivation fights. It can be summed up to include all types of action but my plan is to display it in a way that is exciting, intriguing and fun. my biggest focus is on letting it become a mess of nonsense. Enjoy!