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can anyone tell me if he ever tells his secret to anybody I want to know what chapter that might be on if that ever becomes leaked
loved what was written so far. it was better than i expected from the early chapters. it unfortunately never gets to the climax before being dropped. an unfinished story that deserves the attention of the author, i hope he revisits it in the future.
I’ve heard that the author got his account banned and that he is reposting somewhere else but I don’t know where it is so I’m putting a zero star here because some people tend to read 0 star reviews first
i really missed this novel what an amazing one it was author please come back😢😢😢😢😢
when this ff will come back ... really missed this gim😢😢😢 hope the author bring himself back with tremendous passion 🔥🔥🔥🔥
Uma historia interessante da perspectiva de um SI dementado, muito legal, super recomendo, ainda falta mais reviravoltas mais é muito legal de ler e espero que o autor continue a escrever.
I love how the story is going so far, but soren is babying his friends too much. also when is the next update it's been a while I hope the author hasn't dropped this.
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It's really great Harry Potter fanfiction.. I love it!!! 😍😍😍 It's the first time I read MC which s dementor in HP fanfic.. It's really unique and pique my interest.. I like how MC (Soren) so protective with his family and friends, but I also agree that he's stunt they growth.. He can't always protect them (at the 3rd vault he conquer/taken the dragon ot Isla.. Isn't that should be his friend trial?? Please let his friends growth with vaults challange.. Don't make him take all the vaults challange..) 🙏🙏😁😁 I want to ask, is he so great with magic because he's a dementor?? And what happen to deathly hollows he's consume?? 🤔🤔 Please make a romance between him and Hermione or Daphne 😁🙏🙏 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great work author sama 😁😁👍👍👍
it was interesting at first. then everything went on as usual.......................................................................................
this novel is good but not for me, there is too much interaction with the characters of the 3 golden trio, since meeting them the story has become too boring, if the mc has his own story and is not always involved with the golden 3 trio this story will be great for me. actually there are many fanfics that oc follow the original mc for example make friends, teach them about strength, protect and intervene in their destiny and finally your story is just a side character who is a fanboy to the original mc. you have a good novel but not for me and thank you for your hard work.This is my opinion, the last time I read it was in the chapter when MC saved Hermione with Ron and Harry Potter from the trolls
This is my very first Review in this app.. this fanfic is so fun to read, Fresh air to HP fanfic out there.. the concept itself is cool ,the natural interaction between MC and golden Squad make me feel like i'm forgotten that this is a fanfiction, keep going author..
actually with no need to add any nonesense words this is a hidden gem either in whole webnovel site or in harrypotter category everything is written with catuious and consideration and don't believe wt is said about the mc being baby sitting harry it s just he cares about his friends in the same way any one would do to those who he care about so don't waste your time just go and read it the story development now is amazing
Quite surprised by what has happened this chapter especially with Draco listening to the OC as well also him actually apologizing to both Neville and Hermione for what he has said and done to them not just that but how he wants to be part his new world order
This fan fiction is simply incredible. The idea of a dementor becoming human is unique and very good and I may use it myself. Thank you for such an incredible story.
Definitely got more intrigued by these latest chapters especially with the duel of Professor Flitwick and also how serious Soren was when he told Lupin of him dealing with the issues of the war himself and not trying to involve or get his family worried about it definitely look forward to reading more of this book and finding out what will happen next especially when comes to the Cursed Vaults look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
At first it is good, but the longer one reads the more boring but also ridiculous it becomes, while reading some chapters you go with mindset that it makes no difference if you read it or not, he will win easily, bit like some parts could just be written he won, and no need to write about how he just kills everyone like a chickens. It goes the path from cult novel: "Before absolute power ...". Also the power growth is too fast, and mc is our know it all, fix it all. In essence start makes you want to read it, and sometime author can rile up some emotions from reader, but thats it.
No geral, uma leitura muito boa. Exceto que o enredo é um pouco estranho,mas a idéia é bem bolada. Gostaria que tivesse mais, a leitura é bem bacana.
man i finally caught all up this is so good. love it. personally dont like your other story moringstar of sin. not cause its bad its actually really good buts cause i didnt like all the degenercy. however this is perfect. best hp fanfic out their kerp it up.
Starts out very strong, interesting and unique. Unfortunately as soon as the Hogwards arc starts we end up with the curse of many fanfics which is "practically retelling of original storyline with little twist". And as it stands 19 chapters in, there has been little to no change at all. Of course, there are people that can like it, and the following chapters are full of possibility... but there isn't much to hope for since MC is sorted into Griffindor at the same age as golden trio and becomes their tag along friend. Which makes me believe this is going to be yet another "the main storyline from perspective of different character" type of story. A shame really.
I've read soooooo many Harry Potter fanfics on this site to the point I was getting bored but this, this masterpiece brought I such a fresh and new story that u just had to binge
Definitely intriguing that catches the readers attention with those vaults and the dangers as well secrets that lie in them wonder what will happen next especially what the next vault will be look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book cant wait
I find it's an awesome read. Characters are interesting, the idea of a dementor being mixed with a human is also a pretty cool take for a HP story.
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compelling story, interesting characters, and thoughtful world building - even unfinished as it is, it's one of my favorites
can anyone tell me if he ever tells his secret to anybody I want to know what chapter that might be on if that ever becomes leaked
loved what was written so far. it was better than i expected from the early chapters. it unfortunately never gets to the climax before being dropped. an unfinished story that deserves the attention of the author, i hope he revisits it in the future.
I’ve heard that the author got his account banned and that he is reposting somewhere else but I don’t know where it is so I’m putting a zero star here because some people tend to read 0 star reviews first
i really missed this novel what an amazing one it was author please come back😢😢😢😢😢
when this ff will come back ... really missed this gim😢😢😢 hope the author bring himself back with tremendous passion 🔥🔥🔥🔥
Uma historia interessante da perspectiva de um SI dementado, muito legal, super recomendo, ainda falta mais reviravoltas mais é muito legal de ler e espero que o autor continue a escrever.
I love how the story is going so far, but soren is babying his friends too much. also when is the next update it's been a while I hope the author hasn't dropped this.
Reveal Spoiler It's really great Harry Potter fanfiction.. I love it!!! 😍😍😍 It's the first time I read MC which s dementor in HP fanfic.. It's really unique and pique my interest.. I like how MC (Soren) so protective with his family and friends, but I also agree that he's stunt they growth.. He can't always protect them (at the 3rd vault he conquer/taken the dragon ot Isla.. Isn't that should be his friend trial?? Please let his friends growth with vaults challange.. Don't make him take all the vaults challange..) 🙏🙏😁😁 I want to ask, is he so great with magic because he's a dementor?? And what happen to deathly hollows he's consume?? 🤔🤔 Please make a romance between him and Hermione or Daphne 😁🙏🙏 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great work author sama 😁😁👍👍👍
it was interesting at first. then everything went on as usual.......................................................................................
this novel is good but not for me, there is too much interaction with the characters of the 3 golden trio, since meeting them the story has become too boring, if the mc has his own story and is not always involved with the golden 3 trio this story will be great for me. actually there are many fanfics that oc follow the original mc for example make friends, teach them about strength, protect and intervene in their destiny and finally your story is just a side character who is a fanboy to the original mc. you have a good novel but not for me and thank you for your hard work.This is my opinion, the last time I read it was in the chapter when MC saved Hermione with Ron and Harry Potter from the trolls
This is my very first Review in this app.. this fanfic is so fun to read, Fresh air to HP fanfic out there.. the concept itself is cool ,the natural interaction between MC and golden Squad make me feel like i'm forgotten that this is a fanfiction, keep going author..
actually with no need to add any nonesense words this is a hidden gem either in whole webnovel site or in harrypotter category everything is written with catuious and consideration and don't believe wt is said about the mc being baby sitting harry it s just he cares about his friends in the same way any one would do to those who he care about so don't waste your time just go and read it the story development now is amazing
Quite surprised by what has happened this chapter especially with Draco listening to the OC as well also him actually apologizing to both Neville and Hermione for what he has said and done to them not just that but how he wants to be part his new world order
This fan fiction is simply incredible. The idea of a dementor becoming human is unique and very good and I may use it myself. Thank you for such an incredible story.
Definitely got more intrigued by these latest chapters especially with the duel of Professor Flitwick and also how serious Soren was when he told Lupin of him dealing with the issues of the war himself and not trying to involve or get his family worried about it definitely look forward to reading more of this book and finding out what will happen next especially when comes to the Cursed Vaults look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
At first it is good, but the longer one reads the more boring but also ridiculous it becomes, while reading some chapters you go with mindset that it makes no difference if you read it or not, he will win easily, bit like some parts could just be written he won, and no need to write about how he just kills everyone like a chickens. It goes the path from cult novel: "Before absolute power ...". Also the power growth is too fast, and mc is our know it all, fix it all. In essence start makes you want to read it, and sometime author can rile up some emotions from reader, but thats it.
No geral, uma leitura muito boa. Exceto que o enredo é um pouco estranho,mas a idéia é bem bolada. Gostaria que tivesse mais, a leitura é bem bacana.
man i finally caught all up this is so good. love it. personally dont like your other story moringstar of sin. not cause its bad its actually really good buts cause i didnt like all the degenercy. however this is perfect. best hp fanfic out their kerp it up.
Starts out very strong, interesting and unique. Unfortunately as soon as the Hogwards arc starts we end up with the curse of many fanfics which is "practically retelling of original storyline with little twist". And as it stands 19 chapters in, there has been little to no change at all. Of course, there are people that can like it, and the following chapters are full of possibility... but there isn't much to hope for since MC is sorted into Griffindor at the same age as golden trio and becomes their tag along friend. Which makes me believe this is going to be yet another "the main storyline from perspective of different character" type of story. A shame really.
I've read soooooo many Harry Potter fanfics on this site to the point I was getting bored but this, this masterpiece brought I such a fresh and new story that u just had to binge
Definitely intriguing that catches the readers attention with those vaults and the dangers as well secrets that lie in them wonder what will happen next especially what the next vault will be look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book cant wait
I find it's an awesome read. Characters are interesting, the idea of a dementor being mixed with a human is also a pretty cool take for a HP story.
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compelling story, interesting characters, and thoughtful world building - even unfinished as it is, it's one of my favorites