Fairy Tail: Cherry Blossoms

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noname_marco

I'm currently at chapter 10 so I might have missed some things in the review but I do plan to update this as the story progresses. Right now the story is solid okay, nothing amazing but also not a bad story either in my honest opinion. But I do see the story improving so take this with a grain of salt if you will. Now onto some things, I didn't like about this story so far is the instant mastery skill which is too op and is taking the shortcut for the main character. The main character doesn't have to train and is op right from the start. Next is the flashbacks which I really can't blame the author for since I did something similar in my own story, Fairy Tail: Annihilation King. I extended the flashback longer than it had to be since I thought it would develop the character which it did but it took many chapters for that to happen. I'm not sure if I missed the chapters but I never rate any dates like what year is the story taking place or anything like that. But this is quite easy to fix as well. Overall this review isn't meant to be like an attack on the author but what I think about the story. And what the author can improve on honestly, so don't take this review as an attack. Again this story isn't bad by any measure, right now to me it's just okay for now but I think it would be an amazing story later on as the author writes more and gets better. If the author doesn't drop it but I can't blame him if he does since the man is currently in college. Note Author, if you need help with the story let me know since I think can I provide some help with the story.

LV 1

Znoxouss

I like the story, but there are two big problems people on this site will have with it. The first of which is the flashbacks that take up entire chapters. Easy solution; make the normal chapters longer by adding a portion of a flashback at the very end every couple of chapters and section it off. This makes it so that there is a clear distinction between the flashbacks and the actual chapters, lets people who aren't interested in the character's background skip the parts they find boring, and doesn't interrupt the flow of the story. Another problem is that there will be a group of people who think the MC isn't getting strong fast enough, and a group that think he's getting to strong to quick. Ignore them. They believe what they say is law and everyone must listen. You don't need to listen to them, it's your story. Rather than getting depressed over them hating on your work, remember that you're on the internet and people will hate on you for no reason. It's called toxic disinhibition if you want to look it up.

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HeyHiHell0

I'm shameless... I mean please comment your review too please, i need it... and be honest! [img=recommend] I also need to improve my writing. I know the first two chapters seem a little rushed....

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Daoistr887D1

please dont drop this its hard enough to find a fairytail ff especially a good one like this. keep it up has great potential in my opinion