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where are the chapters? where are the chapters? where are the chapters? where are the chapters? where are the chapters? where are the chapters?
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Everything's good except for the writing quality. I'm sorry to say this but it is an EYESORE. It hurts my eyes and brain to process the sentences. No CAPITALIZATIONS. Such an easy thing to do but you can't do it.
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i am the author of this fanfic. i will do my best to write this fanfiction until i got burn out of the story. at the moment it still progressing but i probably do time skip in the future because the story is 7 years before the canon as you know there aren't many story about the previous incident so i couldn't write that my imagination because if fujino oomori write the story about that in the future then it will be clashing. so i will skip the unwritten story and add the written story with the original work and some from my imagination to write this fanfic story thank you for reading, i will work my best
where are the chapters? where are the chapters? where are the chapters? where are the chapters? where are the chapters? where are the chapters?
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Everything's good except for the writing quality. I'm sorry to say this but it is an EYESORE. It hurts my eyes and brain to process the sentences. No CAPITALIZATIONS. Such an easy thing to do but you can't do it.
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i am the author of this fanfic. i will do my best to write this fanfiction until i got burn out of the story. at the moment it still progressing but i probably do time skip in the future because the story is 7 years before the canon as you know there aren't many story about the previous incident so i couldn't write that my imagination because if fujino oomori write the story about that in the future then it will be clashing. so i will skip the unwritten story and add the written story with the original work and some from my imagination to write this fanfic story thank you for reading, i will work my best