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You jumped far too much in the story in far too little time, but it wasn't bad. The system was a bit janky, but I understood. The math for the skills leveling up makes no sense though, he achieved the first 100 levels in it with 15 years and then almost doubles it with another year time skip. The language was aight, nothing more to say. You could have continued the story, it wasn't that bad at all. Would like to see more
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You jumped far too much in the story in far too little time, but it wasn't bad. The system was a bit janky, but I understood. The math for the skills leveling up makes no sense though, he achieved the first 100 levels in it with 15 years and then almost doubles it with another year time skip. The language was aight, nothing more to say. You could have continued the story, it wasn't that bad at all. Would like to see more
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