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Speedwagon7

Good start but i am dropping it because of the heavy nationalism and this recurring hatred towards a certain country….is not rational and ridiculous! What was a great novel became a real pain and was of time πŸ₯±

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RebornNoHuman

I hope the author and translator will come up with many new and interesting chapters that are unique and new, and at the same time have a detailed description of the cultivation system and levels, evolution, and image descriptions of the characters.

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Dave_Zed

I thought it was a great start with a Mc with a decent iq until he met someone from the government and immediately blurted out all his secrets and went with them. I was pretty much done after that.

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StarryForestJaguar

WHAT A TRASH Rule number one for reincarnators: DONT TELL ANYONE and what the IDIOT mc does? Tell everyone about it!!!!!! I’m so angry Aaaaaaaa

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Hamza_Mohammed_3619

I don't like how he let's his fate get controlled easily and his is no different from pig waiting for experiment at how powerless his is☹😑

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Kazzzzzz

This is the most Idiotic Mc that I know The f**k your telling someone your entire identity in chapter 44 I dont want to read this anymore it triggers me

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Emru
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One star because rating this 4 or 5 stars is insulting to the novels that are actually deserving of that rating. If you're looking for a silly & time killer read this is for you. If you're going to complain about inconsistencies or lack of logic, this novel will be a challenging read.

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Hydronics

Dear Author, I have started reading this book a couple of days ago and once i started i Was hooked and ended up reading 90+chapters Within 2 days. i say that so you know that Your work is amazing and i cant wait to see the progression of the mc in this path of evolution. And i really hope this story doesnt get dropped or else id be a really upset koi lol. but i hope you can keep up with the good work😊

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Horizon
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If you want the short reviwe simply go to the last paragraph, for the long one keep reading, thanks! Overall a basic run of the mill evolution story in the same being as β€œI can turn into a fish” but with more mystical elements. In this world spiritual energy has started to emerge along with mutations due to β€œpollution” while the MC transformed into a fish after his death. Honestly this aspect of the story is one of its weak points. The author seems to not have settled on what he wanted the story to be about, whether creatures were evolving due to spirit energy or pollution isn’t really fleshed out. This sometimes left me scratching my head at the explanations for things. Regardless onto the rest of the story. The MC is another run of the mill mc with a streak for stupidity and cowardliness, along with being a mild pervert. He isn’t really annoying or anything, he is just bland. Same thing for side characters, just bland characters that we could find copies of in other stories. So far no singular character has grabbed my interest so far (chapter 102) but still the interactions between them aren’t a drag to read so that’s good. Plot and progression is where this story is currently floundering. Progressing jumps all over the place and events don’t feel natural when they happen out of nowhere, to only seemingly push the plot forward. It went quickly from a focus on the MC evolving and trying to become strong enough to turn back into a human, to him becoming part of the Chinese army/internal department and dealing with other countries’ agents. This is the weirdest change in pace, as the story in the past 15-20 chapters just feels like some weird nationalist propaganda about how China is so strong and special because they are the only country that can do this or that, or how they are super rich now or whatever. Every chapter is now half just about commenting how amazing the army is and better they are. One funny comment was from an outside agent that’s dying and says β€œI want to reincarnate to China in my next life. I want to be a dog in China.” Kinda too on the nose my friends. Translation and release pace is fine. Standard level for a new novel, though we will have to see if the chapter releases are stable over the coming weeks. However I do wish the translator picked better names for items as sometimes they name different items the same thing with maybe just one word difference so it can make reading about them confusing. In the end this story is overall middle of the road story. Characters are fine but bland ones with no outstanding characteristics but no clear bad traits. World background is weak but nothing too bad since is a modern world so it’s not that big of deal for most readers. Plot is the weakest aspect with no clear progression on where the story is heading. There is a fear the quality is degrading as of chapter 100 due to a weird turn and focus on nationalism and how great the Chinese army is. We’ll have to see if it’s just for a bit or if it’ll continue just being about that. So far my interest is being lowered due to it but I am willing to give it another 50 chapters to see where it goes and if I wish to drop or not. Final score 2.8 (for character, plot, background), 3.6 (if translation and release stability are added in)

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Tibbles
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A simple and easily understood system with a decent enough translation. While it doesn’t break the mold on a new and exciting genre, I enjoyed it and would recommend it to anyone who enjoys a system evolution novel.

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ZilchR0
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I think MC is too coward, he should go to the sea after he cant level up in the lake. Instead he go with Pipner the first time he get the offer. Too timid, how can he leap the dragon gate if he timid

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Monalishingun

This is actually not bad. But do read the comments below 3-stars, they're quite helpful.

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SpaceGameManiac

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TuXueXiaoCanYong

Just for exp purposes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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SevenX
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Take down the cover image, Astral Pet Store already has this cover. Unless you want a copyright Strike. I advice you take it down and find another cover.

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loyalWater_1294

This book hasn't come out to long ago bhut it is already pretty stable updates coming out. MC is likeable and I like how we don't miss what the two girls do meanwhile the MC is in another location

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SweetdaddyJupiter

>evolving into a great dragon from a koi fish >vermillion bird on the cover huh. .................................................................................................................................

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DaoistZdxwmt

lot of fun, glad this got picked up. was worried that it wouldn't be ........................................................................

3yr
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Anarchy_Sisters

Very dissapointing, trash tamer novels that get picked over actual quality...all your gona get is word count chapters, dragged story and sudden cliques.

3yr
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Cuerti

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Kamala_Nadhia

....................................................................... I see the last sentence, I picked this book XD ......................................................................

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The_Sad_one

I'm a logic reader so when something doesn't make sense I find it hard to continue but although this story may have its "unorganized" moments its beautifully crafted and perfectly well writin author please but a proper order on mc's leveling points required and lastly please upgrade the release date I'm all ready having fear that it might be dropped last but not least I tip my hate to you🎩

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Kirk_Harrison

I have not started to read this book yet but i noticed that the cover of the book is the same picture as another novel called astral pet store the only Difference is that the image is flipped around, just something that i noticed.

3yr
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Speedwagon7

Good start but i am dropping it because of the heavy nationalism and this recurring hatred towards a certain country….is not rational and ridiculous! What was a great novel became a real pain and was of time πŸ₯±

2yr
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RebornNoHuman

I hope the author and translator will come up with many new and interesting chapters that are unique and new, and at the same time have a detailed description of the cultivation system and levels, evolution, and image descriptions of the characters.

2yr
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Dave_Zed

I thought it was a great start with a Mc with a decent iq until he met someone from the government and immediately blurted out all his secrets and went with them. I was pretty much done after that.

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3yr
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StarryForestJaguar

WHAT A TRASH Rule number one for reincarnators: DONT TELL ANYONE and what the IDIOT mc does? Tell everyone about it!!!!!! I’m so angry Aaaaaaaa

3yr
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Hamza_Mohammed_3619

I don't like how he let's his fate get controlled easily and his is no different from pig waiting for experiment at how powerless his is☹😑

3yr
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Kazzzzzz

This is the most Idiotic Mc that I know The f**k your telling someone your entire identity in chapter 44 I dont want to read this anymore it triggers me

3yr
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Emru
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One star because rating this 4 or 5 stars is insulting to the novels that are actually deserving of that rating. If you're looking for a silly & time killer read this is for you. If you're going to complain about inconsistencies or lack of logic, this novel will be a challenging read.

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Hydronics

Dear Author, I have started reading this book a couple of days ago and once i started i Was hooked and ended up reading 90+chapters Within 2 days. i say that so you know that Your work is amazing and i cant wait to see the progression of the mc in this path of evolution. And i really hope this story doesnt get dropped or else id be a really upset koi lol. but i hope you can keep up with the good work😊

3yr
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Horizon
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If you want the short reviwe simply go to the last paragraph, for the long one keep reading, thanks! Overall a basic run of the mill evolution story in the same being as β€œI can turn into a fish” but with more mystical elements. In this world spiritual energy has started to emerge along with mutations due to β€œpollution” while the MC transformed into a fish after his death. Honestly this aspect of the story is one of its weak points. The author seems to not have settled on what he wanted the story to be about, whether creatures were evolving due to spirit energy or pollution isn’t really fleshed out. This sometimes left me scratching my head at the explanations for things. Regardless onto the rest of the story. The MC is another run of the mill mc with a streak for stupidity and cowardliness, along with being a mild pervert. He isn’t really annoying or anything, he is just bland. Same thing for side characters, just bland characters that we could find copies of in other stories. So far no singular character has grabbed my interest so far (chapter 102) but still the interactions between them aren’t a drag to read so that’s good. Plot and progression is where this story is currently floundering. Progressing jumps all over the place and events don’t feel natural when they happen out of nowhere, to only seemingly push the plot forward. It went quickly from a focus on the MC evolving and trying to become strong enough to turn back into a human, to him becoming part of the Chinese army/internal department and dealing with other countries’ agents. This is the weirdest change in pace, as the story in the past 15-20 chapters just feels like some weird nationalist propaganda about how China is so strong and special because they are the only country that can do this or that, or how they are super rich now or whatever. Every chapter is now half just about commenting how amazing the army is and better they are. One funny comment was from an outside agent that’s dying and says β€œI want to reincarnate to China in my next life. I want to be a dog in China.” Kinda too on the nose my friends. Translation and release pace is fine. Standard level for a new novel, though we will have to see if the chapter releases are stable over the coming weeks. However I do wish the translator picked better names for items as sometimes they name different items the same thing with maybe just one word difference so it can make reading about them confusing. In the end this story is overall middle of the road story. Characters are fine but bland ones with no outstanding characteristics but no clear bad traits. World background is weak but nothing too bad since is a modern world so it’s not that big of deal for most readers. Plot is the weakest aspect with no clear progression on where the story is heading. There is a fear the quality is degrading as of chapter 100 due to a weird turn and focus on nationalism and how great the Chinese army is. We’ll have to see if it’s just for a bit or if it’ll continue just being about that. So far my interest is being lowered due to it but I am willing to give it another 50 chapters to see where it goes and if I wish to drop or not. Final score 2.8 (for character, plot, background), 3.6 (if translation and release stability are added in)

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Tibbles
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A simple and easily understood system with a decent enough translation. While it doesn’t break the mold on a new and exciting genre, I enjoyed it and would recommend it to anyone who enjoys a system evolution novel.

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ZilchR0
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I think MC is too coward, he should go to the sea after he cant level up in the lake. Instead he go with Pipner the first time he get the offer. Too timid, how can he leap the dragon gate if he timid

3yr
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Monalishingun

This is actually not bad. But do read the comments below 3-stars, they're quite helpful.

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complexsolution

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SpaceGameManiac

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TuXueXiaoCanYong

Just for exp purposes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

3yr
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SevenX
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Take down the cover image, Astral Pet Store already has this cover. Unless you want a copyright Strike. I advice you take it down and find another cover.

3yr
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Rash_reader

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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loyalWater_1294

This book hasn't come out to long ago bhut it is already pretty stable updates coming out. MC is likeable and I like how we don't miss what the two girls do meanwhile the MC is in another location

3yr
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Geen
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SweetdaddyJupiter

>evolving into a great dragon from a koi fish >vermillion bird on the cover huh. .................................................................................................................................

3yr
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DaoistZdxwmt

lot of fun, glad this got picked up. was worried that it wouldn't be ........................................................................

3yr
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Anarchy_Sisters

Very dissapointing, trash tamer novels that get picked over actual quality...all your gona get is word count chapters, dragged story and sudden cliques.

3yr
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Cuerti

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Kamala_Nadhia

....................................................................... I see the last sentence, I picked this book XD ......................................................................

3yr
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The_Sad_one

I'm a logic reader so when something doesn't make sense I find it hard to continue but although this story may have its "unorganized" moments its beautifully crafted and perfectly well writin author please but a proper order on mc's leveling points required and lastly please upgrade the release date I'm all ready having fear that it might be dropped last but not least I tip my hate to you🎩

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Kirk_Harrison

I have not started to read this book yet but i noticed that the cover of the book is the same picture as another novel called astral pet store the only Difference is that the image is flipped around, just something that i noticed.

3yr
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