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This has been a nice read with high quality writing and all the important character have depth and the world background and improvement is just amazing.... I highly recommend it. I hope the author keep it up
I don't even have to read the story to know this will be bad i just had to scroll down and see the comments and see a lot of reviews just to boost the standing.
My english is bad, so google translator. The story ends or should have ended when it reaches the two universes between chapter 80-95 I think, then it's just gibberish and a story that simply stops attracting the reader and makes no sense
ok it is very interesting ..and hope Cross Marian there.is it like template type or summoning type or other tyeo nvm I ma just read it my self
While written pretty well, the characters charisma turns out to be something I find abhorrent in any story that I read. Making this a series that I will be dropping because no matter how suave a writer makes his character when you introduce anything that is like r*** related powers forget it.
the best part of the story was earlier on after chap 91 i dropped it went from decent to destroying pre established things.
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I felt that the story was great and enjoyable but the convergence plot and the story after was kinda strange and felt like a massive nerf just to add a mulitverse travelish thing to the story kinda dropped after that , too confusing
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I take it this is some kind of background to your future work? (dominator DxD and or) just if it is, then I probably won't read it, I have negative emotions towards this character, even if I know that "this" will happen to him in the future...
MC who thinks that he's the center of the universe belike : [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Question... will Natasha romanoff stay with mc? or leave him? and please no neto tags.. and will the women hes involved with stay with him or sum will leave?
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marvel checkcheck check. op check check check check black widow check fun story check check check check romance check what else do u want ?
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Well I don't know what to say, I'd say it's a good story, it does sound good and all but at the same time it is all over the place. As a Law student I pride myself to have an excellent mental capacity however, this is beyond me. The backstory is there but not there enough so whilst everything is making sense it also does not make sense at the same time. It's coherent and incoherent at the same time.
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it's a great story with a good Grammar which is hard to find . so author how much did you make in patreon now and when you first started writing.
this is really good, but way too confusing for me to actually understand anything.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Well too much complicated to understand. It's good too good. Well researched story. There are many things I can't understand cause I only know story of Marvel from movie not by comics. So I will go with the flow.
it seems really good so far, I'm on chapter 8 but I am kinds confused. is jay consciously controlling both himself and primo? is he playing both the good and bad guy or is primo like his darkness personified. I'm so confused on who jay and primo are together
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A very well written marvel fic with a unique and interesting concept for the MC's powers and the storyline/world building. Without a system at that. Which is an ultra plus for me. One of the better ones, easily among Top 10 related Marvel Fics out of the several dozens I've seen and read. But if we're talking about strictly marvel verse with just additional lore and concepts on it, then this is the best for me. All the other ones always have a universe hopping on it to introduce new characters, powers, concept, etc. With a lot of them not even making Marvel-verse its main universe for MC. This story though, do it by subtlety and close to seamless way while staying in the marvel-verse. So far at least, yet to see what the so called 'Convergence of Realities' would bring to the story though (it might introduce).
Incrível história . Adorei a maneira como o autor subverte a clássica "self-insert mantendo o enredo original" mesmo que a história em si não um self-insert
Great Fic I liked iT [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Amei a maneira como o MC manda o enredo original ir pro inferno . As fanfics servem para imaginar como o enredo original mudaria com a adição de novos personagens ou se os personagens originais fossem mais lógicos e possuíssem mais senso comum e odeio quando eles tentam de tudo para manter o enredo original . É incrivelmente irritante
at first i was very confused by the plot but somehow i enjoyed reading this novel, mc was so mysterious that i didn't realize that he has 2 identities, well i don't want to give spoilers for new readers but i suggest that you read this novel
This has been a nice read with high quality writing and all the important character have depth and the world background and improvement is just amazing.... I highly recommend it. I hope the author keep it up
I don't even have to read the story to know this will be bad i just had to scroll down and see the comments and see a lot of reviews just to boost the standing.
My english is bad, so google translator. The story ends or should have ended when it reaches the two universes between chapter 80-95 I think, then it's just gibberish and a story that simply stops attracting the reader and makes no sense
ok it is very interesting ..and hope Cross Marian there.is it like template type or summoning type or other tyeo nvm I ma just read it my self
While written pretty well, the characters charisma turns out to be something I find abhorrent in any story that I read. Making this a series that I will be dropping because no matter how suave a writer makes his character when you introduce anything that is like r*** related powers forget it.
the best part of the story was earlier on after chap 91 i dropped it went from decent to destroying pre established things.
Reveal Spoiler I felt that the story was great and enjoyable but the convergence plot and the story after was kinda strange and felt like a massive nerf just to add a mulitverse travelish thing to the story kinda dropped after that , too confusing
Reveal Spoiler I take it this is some kind of background to your future work? (dominator DxD and or) just if it is, then I probably won't read it, I have negative emotions towards this character, even if I know that "this" will happen to him in the future...
MC who thinks that he's the center of the universe belike : [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Question... will Natasha romanoff stay with mc? or leave him? and please no neto tags.. and will the women hes involved with stay with him or sum will leave?
Reveal Spoiler marvel checkcheck check. op check check check check black widow check fun story check check check check romance check what else do u want ?
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
Well I don't know what to say, I'd say it's a good story, it does sound good and all but at the same time it is all over the place. As a Law student I pride myself to have an excellent mental capacity however, this is beyond me. The backstory is there but not there enough so whilst everything is making sense it also does not make sense at the same time. It's coherent and incoherent at the same time.
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
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it's a great story with a good Grammar which is hard to find . so author how much did you make in patreon now and when you first started writing.
this is really good, but way too confusing for me to actually understand anything.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Well too much complicated to understand. It's good too good. Well researched story. There are many things I can't understand cause I only know story of Marvel from movie not by comics. So I will go with the flow.
it seems really good so far, I'm on chapter 8 but I am kinds confused. is jay consciously controlling both himself and primo? is he playing both the good and bad guy or is primo like his darkness personified. I'm so confused on who jay and primo are together
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A very well written marvel fic with a unique and interesting concept for the MC's powers and the storyline/world building. Without a system at that. Which is an ultra plus for me. One of the better ones, easily among Top 10 related Marvel Fics out of the several dozens I've seen and read. But if we're talking about strictly marvel verse with just additional lore and concepts on it, then this is the best for me. All the other ones always have a universe hopping on it to introduce new characters, powers, concept, etc. With a lot of them not even making Marvel-verse its main universe for MC. This story though, do it by subtlety and close to seamless way while staying in the marvel-verse. So far at least, yet to see what the so called 'Convergence of Realities' would bring to the story though (it might introduce).
Incrível história . Adorei a maneira como o autor subverte a clássica "self-insert mantendo o enredo original" mesmo que a história em si não um self-insert
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Amei a maneira como o MC manda o enredo original ir pro inferno . As fanfics servem para imaginar como o enredo original mudaria com a adição de novos personagens ou se os personagens originais fossem mais lógicos e possuíssem mais senso comum e odeio quando eles tentam de tudo para manter o enredo original . É incrivelmente irritante
at first i was very confused by the plot but somehow i enjoyed reading this novel, mc was so mysterious that i didn't realize that he has 2 identities, well i don't want to give spoilers for new readers but i suggest that you read this novel
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