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I genuinely love this fanfic and can't wait for it to come back. thank you for being an amazing author. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . beans
Esta buena la historia lamento el idioma pero creo que nesesita tener mas contexto de la situacion me pierdo de momentos en donde esta y con quien esta hablando fuera de eso es una buena historia espero que la sigas y no la abandones o la reinicies es...tedioso que le pase eso a una historia con tan buen potencial
MC not a moral sjw who goes around being perfect and changing the world into one with today's morals and ethics, not an edgelord who kills for no reason than to go "i'm evil!!! Hahahahah!". Dude has goals and is brutally eficient at acomplishing them, he is limited by the culture he was born into, wich is one of warriors, raiders and slavers so he does all of that as would be expected of him as a Khal. He ain't no simp, no sjw, no idiot, not op enough to make the story boring and actually plans ahead instead of just reacting to the world and being handed stuff.
calidad de escritura (3/5) estabilidad de las actualizaciones (1/5) desarrollo de la historia(3/5 diseño de personaje (3/5 fondo mundial (3/5)
J'ai la flemme de traduire avec Google traduction alors je vais l'écrire en français directement. Déjà Quand j'ai commencé a lire j'ai tous de suite accroché. l'histoire est plutôt cool, je ne la trouve pas FORCÉ pour avancer .il y a quelques idées vraiment bien je trouve les personnages en général sont intéressants et pas juste des personnages de fond inutile que l'on peut juste oublié. je ne peux pas me plaindre du crossover je trouve même que sa rajoute de l'intérêt et j'en suis curieux . Je vois beaucoup de personnes qui se plaignent de la qualité d'écriture et je vois pas pourquoi vous vous plaignez ... son orthographe n'est peut être pas le meilleur mais je suis sûre que nous avons tous lue BIEN PIRE sur se site. Auteur si tu passe par la continue ton boulot je le trouve super perso.
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The overall plot is good you just need to stick to either 1st or tgird person you jump between ‘I’ and ‘He’ every couple of lines and it is extremly distracting you need to edit that
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The story had an interesting idea but the author started to spoil the story with several crossovers. .......,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,., , , ,.,.,., , ,., , , , , , , , , ............
More, I need more please. Great story keep it up. I always great for a GOT fic not to be about the main character. Though most are good stories that kind of get boring and it's nice to see a different pov. Thank again for a great story.
It was Good until Crossovers started getting involved Like having Shanks show up for some reason. There’s also the fact that the Grammar, characters, setting, writing, and pretty much everything have heavily declined.
ThIs fanfic is somewhat disappointing hence the low review. Here are my reasons. Writing Quality: I didn’t see too many problems in terms of grammar aside from a few sentences that didn’t make sense so three stars. Updating Stability :Don’t know how often author updates so five stars Story Development: The reason I was interested in the fanfic in the first place was because of the title I thought the mc would perhaps get stronger, train for a while fight in some wars and then challenge drogo for his place or create his own khalasar and conquer territory and challenge drogo but instead he’s in the khalasar for a little while and then leaves like whats the point of the story being named being reincarnated as a dothraki might as well call it being Reincarnated in GOT. and then shanks is put into the world shank… Like why im so confused so 2 stars. Character Development: There’s not much to talk about considering the amount of time skips from what I see the mc is kinda plain and tries to be a good person i can’t talk much about the side characters cause i forgot there names they were also plain. So two stars. World Development: Most of is already made for him hence why it is a fanfic but he tries to add cultivation into the story for some reason??? so one star Overall im kinda disappointed he chose to leave the khalasar so early considering it was the entire reason I wanted to read it.
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Just found this story and my gosh loving it I actually wanted to write about being a Dothraki aswell just didn't have a Story plan in motion.
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Fab this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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It's a good story, the development of the story is easy to understand, I like the direction it is going, it seems that it focuses first on traveling and then joining the plot of the books. keep up the good work.
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Hello there,OnanMaster I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you are not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
it's incredible can't wait for more....,...................... blood for the blood God . ................yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
A good read. The story is not too fast paced and the OC's have great backstory. Currently at chapter 9 and so far have nothing to complain about. The MC is strong but not too much OP, just strong enough for the standards of the GOT world. Some readers might complain about the 'Ki' part, but I think it's not so unusual, as there is magic in ASOIF world I think 'ki' existing is not so surprising. Altogether the story is amazing and character development is also great, so far the update stability is okay. So give it a try.
i am looking forward to see where this goes. i liked the small twist of him being a reyne and this has a more unique SI compared to other fics
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I've recently found this story during my usual browsing and just fell in love with it. I am looking very forward to seeing what coming next.
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I genuinely love this fanfic and can't wait for it to come back. thank you for being an amazing author. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . beans
Esta buena la historia lamento el idioma pero creo que nesesita tener mas contexto de la situacion me pierdo de momentos en donde esta y con quien esta hablando fuera de eso es una buena historia espero que la sigas y no la abandones o la reinicies es...tedioso que le pase eso a una historia con tan buen potencial
MC not a moral sjw who goes around being perfect and changing the world into one with today's morals and ethics, not an edgelord who kills for no reason than to go "i'm evil!!! Hahahahah!". Dude has goals and is brutally eficient at acomplishing them, he is limited by the culture he was born into, wich is one of warriors, raiders and slavers so he does all of that as would be expected of him as a Khal. He ain't no simp, no sjw, no idiot, not op enough to make the story boring and actually plans ahead instead of just reacting to the world and being handed stuff.
calidad de escritura (3/5) estabilidad de las actualizaciones (1/5) desarrollo de la historia(3/5 diseño de personaje (3/5 fondo mundial (3/5)
J'ai la flemme de traduire avec Google traduction alors je vais l'écrire en français directement. Déjà Quand j'ai commencé a lire j'ai tous de suite accroché. l'histoire est plutôt cool, je ne la trouve pas FORCÉ pour avancer .il y a quelques idées vraiment bien je trouve les personnages en général sont intéressants et pas juste des personnages de fond inutile que l'on peut juste oublié. je ne peux pas me plaindre du crossover je trouve même que sa rajoute de l'intérêt et j'en suis curieux . Je vois beaucoup de personnes qui se plaignent de la qualité d'écriture et je vois pas pourquoi vous vous plaignez ... son orthographe n'est peut être pas le meilleur mais je suis sûre que nous avons tous lue BIEN PIRE sur se site. Auteur si tu passe par la continue ton boulot je le trouve super perso.
Reveal Spoiler The overall plot is good you just need to stick to either 1st or tgird person you jump between ‘I’ and ‘He’ every couple of lines and it is extremly distracting you need to edit that
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The story had an interesting idea but the author started to spoil the story with several crossovers. .......,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,., , , ,.,.,., , ,., , , , , , , , , ............
More, I need more please. Great story keep it up. I always great for a GOT fic not to be about the main character. Though most are good stories that kind of get boring and it's nice to see a different pov. Thank again for a great story.
It was Good until Crossovers started getting involved Like having Shanks show up for some reason. There’s also the fact that the Grammar, characters, setting, writing, and pretty much everything have heavily declined.
ThIs fanfic is somewhat disappointing hence the low review. Here are my reasons. Writing Quality: I didn’t see too many problems in terms of grammar aside from a few sentences that didn’t make sense so three stars. Updating Stability :Don’t know how often author updates so five stars Story Development: The reason I was interested in the fanfic in the first place was because of the title I thought the mc would perhaps get stronger, train for a while fight in some wars and then challenge drogo for his place or create his own khalasar and conquer territory and challenge drogo but instead he’s in the khalasar for a little while and then leaves like whats the point of the story being named being reincarnated as a dothraki might as well call it being Reincarnated in GOT. and then shanks is put into the world shank… Like why im so confused so 2 stars. Character Development: There’s not much to talk about considering the amount of time skips from what I see the mc is kinda plain and tries to be a good person i can’t talk much about the side characters cause i forgot there names they were also plain. So two stars. World Development: Most of is already made for him hence why it is a fanfic but he tries to add cultivation into the story for some reason??? so one star Overall im kinda disappointed he chose to leave the khalasar so early considering it was the entire reason I wanted to read it.
Reveal Spoiler Just found this story and my gosh loving it I actually wanted to write about being a Dothraki aswell just didn't have a Story plan in motion.
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Fab this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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It's a good story, the development of the story is easy to understand, I like the direction it is going, it seems that it focuses first on traveling and then joining the plot of the books. keep up the good work.
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Hello there,OnanMaster I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you are not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
it's incredible can't wait for more....,...................... blood for the blood God . ................yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
A good read. The story is not too fast paced and the OC's have great backstory. Currently at chapter 9 and so far have nothing to complain about. The MC is strong but not too much OP, just strong enough for the standards of the GOT world. Some readers might complain about the 'Ki' part, but I think it's not so unusual, as there is magic in ASOIF world I think 'ki' existing is not so surprising. Altogether the story is amazing and character development is also great, so far the update stability is okay. So give it a try.
i am looking forward to see where this goes. i liked the small twist of him being a reyne and this has a more unique SI compared to other fics
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I've recently found this story during my usual browsing and just fell in love with it. I am looking very forward to seeing what coming next.
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