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120/100 Do I need to say more? One of the best works I have seen. Thank you for the story....:D[img=coins][img=exp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update]
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this book is very unique not for everyone because of the killing ra..pe and how it isn't centered on the characters he interacts with the story is mostly him on missions and how he does what he's not supposed to it could be better because there is only 2 people that he is semi friends with that are still alive.
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The best fan fic with lots of emotion just dont nerf mc and i swear your storyline will be naturqlly guided PLUS make we realise his power more and more because he is the mc right hehe
I really like how you make him overcome his ptsds in the most efficient way possible also how effortlessly he schemes the village elders into not weakening any clan ————————————————
I really like that it is different from so many others. nice thing, well done thing, good reading and not pig.[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This made me binge read. A rare story where the character being Op is done right. Besides some grammar errors in early chapters a good fanfiction. I hope to see a time skip to cannon. I hop read more.
Tbh I thought the fan fic will become cliche after he become op in early story but fuhh the storyline, the battle description and the emotion or even the train thought of the mc is solid. Keep up with this quality and I assure you that your nivel will become one of the best, if your novel can produce like 300 chapters that’s the epitome of my life. Thank you so much the author for his/her writing skills!!! 👍🏼🙏🏼
writing quality is fine, story development is smooth(it may look as weird at first glance but if you think about it in relation to the mc it make sense), character design is good the characters is good at expressing their emotion albeit not perfect it is still good nonetheless the mc's character is fit for what his been through after all that 'switching' faces that it took a toll to his personality as well but sakumo and kushina being his anchor little bit of his found emotion that is awoken by mei is what gives this fic an edge over the other dark mc genre fanfic by a long shot, update stability is still up for debate, world background is good considering that there is many authors in webnovel who messed up the world background of an already existing fic when they made a fanfic out of it. overall it is a good read for its genre those who like this genre will truly appreciate the details the author put to make the mc as dark as possible but still has his humanity in him wether the mc realize it or not.
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great story love it and if it is a translation can I get the name 😁😁😁😍😍😍😍😍😍💖💖
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its' a good story, with the mc is born before Naruto and had participated in the war. Mc has a unique bloodline. updates of the story are frequent. hope author does not drops the story, keep up the good work author.😊
Im not yet very sure of this story. It’ s sometimes a little confusing, but the ideas are very new and unique. I would love to read a little more character development, where I could understand the MC a little more. But all in all until now(chapter 13) a very good story I could only recommend you to read.
One of the best works I have seen. Thank you for the story........................................... ..................................................
120/100 Do I need to say more? One of the best works I have seen. Thank you for the story....:D[img=coins][img=exp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update]
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this book is very unique not for everyone because of the killing ra..pe and how it isn't centered on the characters he interacts with the story is mostly him on missions and how he does what he's not supposed to it could be better because there is only 2 people that he is semi friends with that are still alive.
Reveal Spoiler The best fan fic with lots of emotion just dont nerf mc and i swear your storyline will be naturqlly guided PLUS make we realise his power more and more because he is the mc right hehe
I really like how you make him overcome his ptsds in the most efficient way possible also how effortlessly he schemes the village elders into not weakening any clan ————————————————
I really like that it is different from so many others. nice thing, well done thing, good reading and not pig.[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This made me binge read. A rare story where the character being Op is done right. Besides some grammar errors in early chapters a good fanfiction. I hope to see a time skip to cannon. I hop read more.
Tbh I thought the fan fic will become cliche after he become op in early story but fuhh the storyline, the battle description and the emotion or even the train thought of the mc is solid. Keep up with this quality and I assure you that your nivel will become one of the best, if your novel can produce like 300 chapters that’s the epitome of my life. Thank you so much the author for his/her writing skills!!! 👍🏼🙏🏼
writing quality is fine, story development is smooth(it may look as weird at first glance but if you think about it in relation to the mc it make sense), character design is good the characters is good at expressing their emotion albeit not perfect it is still good nonetheless the mc's character is fit for what his been through after all that 'switching' faces that it took a toll to his personality as well but sakumo and kushina being his anchor little bit of his found emotion that is awoken by mei is what gives this fic an edge over the other dark mc genre fanfic by a long shot, update stability is still up for debate, world background is good considering that there is many authors in webnovel who messed up the world background of an already existing fic when they made a fanfic out of it. overall it is a good read for its genre those who like this genre will truly appreciate the details the author put to make the mc as dark as possible but still has his humanity in him wether the mc realize it or not.
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great story love it and if it is a translation can I get the name 😁😁😁😍😍😍😍😍😍💖💖
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its' a good story, with the mc is born before Naruto and had participated in the war. Mc has a unique bloodline. updates of the story are frequent. hope author does not drops the story, keep up the good work author.😊
Im not yet very sure of this story. It’ s sometimes a little confusing, but the ideas are very new and unique. I would love to read a little more character development, where I could understand the MC a little more. But all in all until now(chapter 13) a very good story I could only recommend you to read.
One of the best works I have seen. Thank you for the story........................................... ..................................................