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Writing quality is excellent.No major grammar mistakes and very smooth read . The plot has plenty of originality even though it’s store system novel . However it’s kinda boring due to the MC arrogant attitude towards everyone except for his cat . His has zero emotion to any character except for his cat . I want to say the MC lack character depth, but I’m pretty sure the arthor just design him to have a cold personality that make him that way. I can understand what the author was trying to do. But after 300 chapters I expect some emotional change . Just to make it clear I said emotional not romantic. Anyway this is just my personal opinion. Keep working hard arthor. Congrats getting pass a 1000 chapters ! More arthors don’t get pass 200.
not mine cup of tea, mc kill the royal family or politician family cuz they rude to him and decided to make them forget about him killing them. a type of mc i hate is mc that kill and decide to hide the fact he's the killer. if people knew he's the killer and powerful enough to do soo, people will fear you and not bothering you but no, mc decide to hide and people will keep bothering him and questioning himself why people always bothering him. just another stupid 😒
The story is great and all, but why does the development is so long? Can't you like 1 chapter have long paragraph? I waste the meaning of having 1500+ chapters.
the author has a lot of interesting ideas, creating many cool events and impressive world building. My only complaint is the repetition of the same daily cycle. You can easily remove 600 chapters of repetition.
I've read most of the story and it's cool for the most part but I Wouldn't recommend it. The author is a big fan of asides or tangents and this isn't bad and I don't think they are poorly written. However after 1000+ chapters it makes me feel a lot of these new characters or showing items or there side stories are pointless. Now there are some that do have the story and I have no issue but honestly after chapter 1000 I started skipping a lot of chapters because to me they weren't important to the plot at all. I still rate this story highly and it's interesting just frustrating to read. The author does a good job writing and you can feel their enthusiasm come through that's why I'm not criticizing the tangents. I think this novel also suffers from how many others react to the store but you can only see this too many times before it's just the same scene over and over. The author could probably work on that but it's not that bad! I haven't really talked about the story or characters but they are fun mostly i wish there were less characters that didn't matter but the MC and main characters are cool enough and the world and story is interesting. I'm probably going to drop reading this and if it completes check the ending for answers. The beginning is very interesting and if my review doesn't turn you off I'd say go for it. 4/5 from me.
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This is a really good novel with an apathetic mc, but he does love his cat really much until my actual chapter 230 lily didn't get that much screen time like the most recommendations suggest. give it a try😁
I'm on episode 14 and it's going very well right now.And I love multiverses etc. I also liked the system, I hope the sequel will be good, I also liked the cruelty of the main character towards other beings, I hope it continues like this.
Aakesh and Lily really sound odd. It could be Alex and Lily or Allen and Lily........
author i have read 150 chapters i like your story but there are few topics that are annoying like the restrictions that the system has put on Mc that he only have to sell 3 pills per day and his arrogance that have reached heaven. i mean he doesn't have the attitude that a Shop Owner should have. like he should have maintained a good relationship with the king so that king would advertise your shop and mc would have more customers in early stage chapteras
Only read till chapter 44, The girl Maria will be taken as a worker in the fututre? Cause that girl want to really hold closer to MC. Also most of the problem can be resolved by at least showing equal strength to the KING since he can manipulate what the other can see.While I understand Maria and maybe some people will be biased because shes' a woman. The first store said it's a safe place but she was harassed inside. Just verbally abusing her means he disregard your store. You don't need the usual face slapping cause the guy is literally God in that place.If you want peace then always be ready for war. Also it's kind of hard to develop feelings for the story or character since there are nothing to like so far even the MC cat or humor. Still, I can see the allure of this novel.
if your someone who cares about morality then don't bother reading this, the mc is over 80k years old and he's not even human so him not caring about them is normal heck even humans don't care about humans.the story is enjoyable and it's a change of pace from a lot of other system novels out there
The world is very well written, although some characters can get a little annoying it's still really good. some things are still shrouded in a little bit of mystery. Overall it's a good novel and very likely an English somewhat translated and semi inspired version of the novel 神级店长(god level store manager), that novel is only in Chinese for now, so you would enjoy reading this one more i guess. Author did you read that novel? god level store manager?
it feels too much like astral pet store except it's just remodeled is what I felt I haven't read more than 40 chapters so take it or leave it
I read about 300 chapters before dropping. It's hard to give this a bad review and find faults. It's also hard to give it a positive review. The author has imagined a very thought out world. The detail and description and history and races has been considered and perfected to a very fine point. The authors writing style and quality is fine, and while the side characters are not perfectly fleshed out they are also not generic. The problems only really show because the story development is all over the place and it feels like the author doesn't really know where he wants to take the story. In 300 chapters there is very little to no development or room for improvement. The MC never faces challenges or has any pressure to grow or change. The Author can't seem to decide if he wants a system story or a virtual video game world story. And somehow in both worlds the MC is an omnipotent god. Overall this novel is good to have something on the back burner while you're waiting for other stories with a more fulfilling plot. But if you're looking for something that gets the heart beating and as satisfying and complete arcs go elsewhere.
There are some mistakes in grammar and it just seemed liked those chinese novels which are very predictable and cliche.
I didn't see a Romance tag si I bet this novel will bored you in a hundred chapters so I pass but 5 star for the title but this book Tags hesitate me to read so tell me if there's is any love interest
A HIDDEN GEM... I don't know why it is not famous but I really love the story. This story starts with an op MC. I read a lot same genre or type of story where the Mc is op at the start but I easily get bored cause as the story progress it became boring that's why always dropped it halfway through. I still look for same type of story though. Unlike other op characters though, the story does not makes me lose interest in it in fact I enjoyed it.
The character design and world background are 5 stars for me. I got bored reading somewhere in chapter 530+ but I still read it until chapter 666. Too much training info; if there's no major event happening there's always training chaps for 2-5 out of ten chapters for 1 weapon that I decided to stop reading. even tho it's already chapter 600's there still chapters only about his training.
The first view chapters were ok, but not really that interesting. After the store moved into a city, the story went from "ok" to "can't stop reading". The grammar is not perfect, but still very good. I read and read and read until the free reading time was over, then I was sad. Really good book so far (ca. chapter 250).
this book is really good, but i dont know why, mr author really love fighting scene. 800 chapter, i can say about 200 chapter is fighting scene, and the most boring thing is it was 'training' chapter, that was no connection to main story, you can skip those chapter and you will still understand all the story well. the route of the story is open the shop > meet costumer (sometimes you have background story of this costumer sometimes not) this will have about 5-6 chapter > then close the store > training (fighting hologram, this will take 2-4 chapter) > its morning, opening the store and repeat
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Neutral review here any spoiler after ch 266? or whatever significant happened next. I already got bored reading this, feel like its getting redundant. Its like showing us how big is the multiverse and iits dimensions but then telling us how big planet earth is :/ And what's with virtual portal world thing? Is it important plot wise for future chapters? This is better it there are more fight scenes with mc outside the shop and not telling us that expressionless face. I know that his goal is to find info about himself from the system by doing the shop missions. That Wine immortal system is better than this story wise.
I’ve read more than 800 chapters, and so I have caught up. Good points: -There is a good number of interesting side characters who has a nice chapter or a few to them. (Author forgets some however. That girl Princess with the 1 eye, and is looking for revenge against against the organization. The guy who has a vendetta against an organization, and the Bisan kingdom/empire for selling his territory, leading to his tribes deaths. The prince of the Holy Empire. The moon elf politics, and the sunlight elf conflict between siblings. These are just some.) -The writing quality is good, and the updates is good. (Small errors with the numbers, and powers don’t make sense always.) -There are more good points. Bad points: -Lily is so annoying. I don’t read 80% of the writing involving her. -I’m fine with arrogant characters but the MC, and Lily is to arrogant or rather they are hypocrites. “The weak should act weak” is what Lily says several times but they keep acting stuck up in front of beings far above them, and are so rude but dislikes rude people. -The side characters, and the world is really like +90% of the reason I’m still reading. I skip half the training arcs, and Panagea because we don’t see anyone of them again other than knowing that they are going stronger. The characters in Panagea we never meet again the next arc. -I get that the MC doesn’t care to be a shop owner but why are you writing a novel that is mainly about him being a shop owner. He’s to shameless, and you wrote that the system also is against him blackmailing, and stealing but he scoffs at that. Have the MC become less shameless because it gets so difficult to read whenever that happens. -MC does not have moral issues, and believes he is better than everyone else... that’s fine but that doesn’t mean you have to write him to be so rude. He’s not scared of death... that’s fine but what about torture of Lily because of what he did? Is he scared now? -Writing that Lily is cute, and has a childlike voice does not mean she’s cute. -I don’t care if the MC is not a good person, I like villains (MC is not a villain) more but not when they are 3rd rate villains or so arrogant for no reason. I like smart, humble (arrogant but knows when to be humble or thankful) but still can be very cruel, and uncaring for the misery for others type of villain. Overall, Author, you don’t have to change the character personalities but decrease the training time writing. Hopefully you decrease Lily’s writing time also, and increase the writing for the customers.
Just filled with so much nonsense that I found it impossible to read and enjoy. The writing was so repeat8ve I found my self wondering if I had read this and skipping over large paragraphs
it is a good novel overall. .. I liked the story and fun to read but there are some that is not so satisfying like short novel and info dump (only sometimes) I recommend it
I wish there are more novel like this... It so good and I am excited to know what will happen to the store and to Aakesh if they ascended to the sacred dimension and third dimension ?.. What kind of costumer the store will have?...
It was pretty good at the start…now I’m having doubts. In chapter 74 he pretty much gets a VR game, I was so excited when I started reading this and now I feel like it’s going to be more focused on this game, like so many other books, then his store and personal progress. I’ll keep reading for now but if it turns out to start focusing more on the game then Im just going to drop. This isn’t the only novel with this idea after all, will just read one of them if it become a vr novel. Im hoping it doesnt since its not in the tags but I’ll see ig.
Since, I've already uploaded more than 300 chapters, I think, it's time for me to add another review. The Writing Quality is for the readers to decide, so I'll say nothing about it. For the story development, sometime it's slow paced and sometimes it flows normally. Unlike the other store stories, this story starts at the peak of a dimension, so from the get go, the store has been getting strong and known characters. Aakesh, is our MC, who wants to find put about his past, and the system helps him just do that by completing quests. He's a character who has a nonchalant attitude for everyone and everything except his cat, Lily, who is just as chaotic and destructive as a cat. There'll be no romance in the story, so the question of Harem doesn't arise. I update two chapters daily, and for extra chapters, I've announced the goals in the Synopsis. As for the World Background, It's a Multiverse, that is seperated into four dimensions. MC is starting from the weakest dimension. There are countless races like Elves, Dwarves, Orcs, etc. If you still don't like what you read from the review, then go read the book, and if you like what you read from review, then I don't think, I need to tell you what to do.
Writing quality is excellent.No major grammar mistakes and very smooth read . The plot has plenty of originality even though it’s store system novel . However it’s kinda boring due to the MC arrogant attitude towards everyone except for his cat . His has zero emotion to any character except for his cat . I want to say the MC lack character depth, but I’m pretty sure the arthor just design him to have a cold personality that make him that way. I can understand what the author was trying to do. But after 300 chapters I expect some emotional change . Just to make it clear I said emotional not romantic. Anyway this is just my personal opinion. Keep working hard arthor. Congrats getting pass a 1000 chapters ! More arthors don’t get pass 200.
not mine cup of tea, mc kill the royal family or politician family cuz they rude to him and decided to make them forget about him killing them. a type of mc i hate is mc that kill and decide to hide the fact he's the killer. if people knew he's the killer and powerful enough to do soo, people will fear you and not bothering you but no, mc decide to hide and people will keep bothering him and questioning himself why people always bothering him. just another stupid 😒
The story is great and all, but why does the development is so long? Can't you like 1 chapter have long paragraph? I waste the meaning of having 1500+ chapters.
the author has a lot of interesting ideas, creating many cool events and impressive world building. My only complaint is the repetition of the same daily cycle. You can easily remove 600 chapters of repetition.
I've read most of the story and it's cool for the most part but I Wouldn't recommend it. The author is a big fan of asides or tangents and this isn't bad and I don't think they are poorly written. However after 1000+ chapters it makes me feel a lot of these new characters or showing items or there side stories are pointless. Now there are some that do have the story and I have no issue but honestly after chapter 1000 I started skipping a lot of chapters because to me they weren't important to the plot at all. I still rate this story highly and it's interesting just frustrating to read. The author does a good job writing and you can feel their enthusiasm come through that's why I'm not criticizing the tangents. I think this novel also suffers from how many others react to the store but you can only see this too many times before it's just the same scene over and over. The author could probably work on that but it's not that bad! I haven't really talked about the story or characters but they are fun mostly i wish there were less characters that didn't matter but the MC and main characters are cool enough and the world and story is interesting. I'm probably going to drop reading this and if it completes check the ending for answers. The beginning is very interesting and if my review doesn't turn you off I'd say go for it. 4/5 from me.
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This is a really good novel with an apathetic mc, but he does love his cat really much until my actual chapter 230 lily didn't get that much screen time like the most recommendations suggest. give it a try😁
I'm on episode 14 and it's going very well right now.And I love multiverses etc. I also liked the system, I hope the sequel will be good, I also liked the cruelty of the main character towards other beings, I hope it continues like this.
Aakesh and Lily really sound odd. It could be Alex and Lily or Allen and Lily........
author i have read 150 chapters i like your story but there are few topics that are annoying like the restrictions that the system has put on Mc that he only have to sell 3 pills per day and his arrogance that have reached heaven. i mean he doesn't have the attitude that a Shop Owner should have. like he should have maintained a good relationship with the king so that king would advertise your shop and mc would have more customers in early stage chapteras
Only read till chapter 44, The girl Maria will be taken as a worker in the fututre? Cause that girl want to really hold closer to MC. Also most of the problem can be resolved by at least showing equal strength to the KING since he can manipulate what the other can see.While I understand Maria and maybe some people will be biased because shes' a woman. The first store said it's a safe place but she was harassed inside. Just verbally abusing her means he disregard your store. You don't need the usual face slapping cause the guy is literally God in that place.If you want peace then always be ready for war. Also it's kind of hard to develop feelings for the story or character since there are nothing to like so far even the MC cat or humor. Still, I can see the allure of this novel.
if your someone who cares about morality then don't bother reading this, the mc is over 80k years old and he's not even human so him not caring about them is normal heck even humans don't care about humans.the story is enjoyable and it's a change of pace from a lot of other system novels out there
The world is very well written, although some characters can get a little annoying it's still really good. some things are still shrouded in a little bit of mystery. Overall it's a good novel and very likely an English somewhat translated and semi inspired version of the novel 神级店长(god level store manager), that novel is only in Chinese for now, so you would enjoy reading this one more i guess. Author did you read that novel? god level store manager?
it feels too much like astral pet store except it's just remodeled is what I felt I haven't read more than 40 chapters so take it or leave it
I read about 300 chapters before dropping. It's hard to give this a bad review and find faults. It's also hard to give it a positive review. The author has imagined a very thought out world. The detail and description and history and races has been considered and perfected to a very fine point. The authors writing style and quality is fine, and while the side characters are not perfectly fleshed out they are also not generic. The problems only really show because the story development is all over the place and it feels like the author doesn't really know where he wants to take the story. In 300 chapters there is very little to no development or room for improvement. The MC never faces challenges or has any pressure to grow or change. The Author can't seem to decide if he wants a system story or a virtual video game world story. And somehow in both worlds the MC is an omnipotent god. Overall this novel is good to have something on the back burner while you're waiting for other stories with a more fulfilling plot. But if you're looking for something that gets the heart beating and as satisfying and complete arcs go elsewhere.
There are some mistakes in grammar and it just seemed liked those chinese novels which are very predictable and cliche.
I didn't see a Romance tag si I bet this novel will bored you in a hundred chapters so I pass but 5 star for the title but this book Tags hesitate me to read so tell me if there's is any love interest
A HIDDEN GEM... I don't know why it is not famous but I really love the story. This story starts with an op MC. I read a lot same genre or type of story where the Mc is op at the start but I easily get bored cause as the story progress it became boring that's why always dropped it halfway through. I still look for same type of story though. Unlike other op characters though, the story does not makes me lose interest in it in fact I enjoyed it.
The character design and world background are 5 stars for me. I got bored reading somewhere in chapter 530+ but I still read it until chapter 666. Too much training info; if there's no major event happening there's always training chaps for 2-5 out of ten chapters for 1 weapon that I decided to stop reading. even tho it's already chapter 600's there still chapters only about his training.
The first view chapters were ok, but not really that interesting. After the store moved into a city, the story went from "ok" to "can't stop reading". The grammar is not perfect, but still very good. I read and read and read until the free reading time was over, then I was sad. Really good book so far (ca. chapter 250).
this book is really good, but i dont know why, mr author really love fighting scene. 800 chapter, i can say about 200 chapter is fighting scene, and the most boring thing is it was 'training' chapter, that was no connection to main story, you can skip those chapter and you will still understand all the story well. the route of the story is open the shop > meet costumer (sometimes you have background story of this costumer sometimes not) this will have about 5-6 chapter > then close the store > training (fighting hologram, this will take 2-4 chapter) > its morning, opening the store and repeat
Reveal Spoiler Neutral review here any spoiler after ch 266? or whatever significant happened next. I already got bored reading this, feel like its getting redundant. Its like showing us how big is the multiverse and iits dimensions but then telling us how big planet earth is :/ And what's with virtual portal world thing? Is it important plot wise for future chapters? This is better it there are more fight scenes with mc outside the shop and not telling us that expressionless face. I know that his goal is to find info about himself from the system by doing the shop missions. That Wine immortal system is better than this story wise.
I’ve read more than 800 chapters, and so I have caught up. Good points: -There is a good number of interesting side characters who has a nice chapter or a few to them. (Author forgets some however. That girl Princess with the 1 eye, and is looking for revenge against against the organization. The guy who has a vendetta against an organization, and the Bisan kingdom/empire for selling his territory, leading to his tribes deaths. The prince of the Holy Empire. The moon elf politics, and the sunlight elf conflict between siblings. These are just some.) -The writing quality is good, and the updates is good. (Small errors with the numbers, and powers don’t make sense always.) -There are more good points. Bad points: -Lily is so annoying. I don’t read 80% of the writing involving her. -I’m fine with arrogant characters but the MC, and Lily is to arrogant or rather they are hypocrites. “The weak should act weak” is what Lily says several times but they keep acting stuck up in front of beings far above them, and are so rude but dislikes rude people. -The side characters, and the world is really like +90% of the reason I’m still reading. I skip half the training arcs, and Panagea because we don’t see anyone of them again other than knowing that they are going stronger. The characters in Panagea we never meet again the next arc. -I get that the MC doesn’t care to be a shop owner but why are you writing a novel that is mainly about him being a shop owner. He’s to shameless, and you wrote that the system also is against him blackmailing, and stealing but he scoffs at that. Have the MC become less shameless because it gets so difficult to read whenever that happens. -MC does not have moral issues, and believes he is better than everyone else... that’s fine but that doesn’t mean you have to write him to be so rude. He’s not scared of death... that’s fine but what about torture of Lily because of what he did? Is he scared now? -Writing that Lily is cute, and has a childlike voice does not mean she’s cute. -I don’t care if the MC is not a good person, I like villains (MC is not a villain) more but not when they are 3rd rate villains or so arrogant for no reason. I like smart, humble (arrogant but knows when to be humble or thankful) but still can be very cruel, and uncaring for the misery for others type of villain. Overall, Author, you don’t have to change the character personalities but decrease the training time writing. Hopefully you decrease Lily’s writing time also, and increase the writing for the customers.
Just filled with so much nonsense that I found it impossible to read and enjoy. The writing was so repeat8ve I found my self wondering if I had read this and skipping over large paragraphs
it is a good novel overall. .. I liked the story and fun to read but there are some that is not so satisfying like short novel and info dump (only sometimes) I recommend it
I wish there are more novel like this... It so good and I am excited to know what will happen to the store and to Aakesh if they ascended to the sacred dimension and third dimension ?.. What kind of costumer the store will have?...
It was pretty good at the start…now I’m having doubts. In chapter 74 he pretty much gets a VR game, I was so excited when I started reading this and now I feel like it’s going to be more focused on this game, like so many other books, then his store and personal progress. I’ll keep reading for now but if it turns out to start focusing more on the game then Im just going to drop. This isn’t the only novel with this idea after all, will just read one of them if it become a vr novel. Im hoping it doesnt since its not in the tags but I’ll see ig.
Since, I've already uploaded more than 300 chapters, I think, it's time for me to add another review. The Writing Quality is for the readers to decide, so I'll say nothing about it. For the story development, sometime it's slow paced and sometimes it flows normally. Unlike the other store stories, this story starts at the peak of a dimension, so from the get go, the store has been getting strong and known characters. Aakesh, is our MC, who wants to find put about his past, and the system helps him just do that by completing quests. He's a character who has a nonchalant attitude for everyone and everything except his cat, Lily, who is just as chaotic and destructive as a cat. There'll be no romance in the story, so the question of Harem doesn't arise. I update two chapters daily, and for extra chapters, I've announced the goals in the Synopsis. As for the World Background, It's a Multiverse, that is seperated into four dimensions. MC is starting from the weakest dimension. There are countless races like Elves, Dwarves, Orcs, etc. If you still don't like what you read from the review, then go read the book, and if you like what you read from review, then I don't think, I need to tell you what to do.